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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hmm...so Vardaan did inquire Kajal abt her father...but I guess she needs sum tym to gather the courage in herself to say it all to him. 😊 Till then he can surely w8.πŸ˜ƒ

But yaha Abhay ko Vardaan me itna kya bura laga yaar??πŸ˜• Itna handsum to hai...πŸ˜†πŸ˜† achha achha mujhe pata hai...Abhay ek ladka hai...isliye usse koi fark nahi padta Vardaan kitna cute sweet hot n happening hai...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜³πŸ˜³...however I just hope uski shakh or watever neg feeling...ye jaldi se dur ho jaye.😳

Yaha Shalab and Mugdha me zyada kuch nahi hua...bas Arjun ki wajah se bechare ki achhi khasi chance barbaad ho gayi...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Now coming to the most beautiful thing on this part!! Of course u knw it hai na?πŸ˜‰ Yupp...its the last VK scene. U gelled it so well wid the song...I have heard the song once or twice only...πŸ˜† but lyrics is perfectly gud...πŸ˜ƒ but the best was ur narrative. The way u wrote it all...was fab.⭐️⭐️ Kajal loves Vardaan more n more every day...coz he compels her to do so. I loved this compulsion in her words.πŸ˜‰ Lovely scene Vartika...πŸ˜ƒ

And of course...congrats as this thread is finished. πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ Continue wid the new thread Soon. πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

Luv,
Sumi. 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update darling,πŸ‘ tune Abhay Pia ko bhi bahut acche scene diye hainπŸ˜‰ aur poora khayal rakha hai Vardaan Kajal ka 😳. Pata nahi Kajal abhi tak ready kyoun nahi ho paayi hai is baare me Vardaan ko batane k liye πŸ˜• shayad apna dard apne hi andar rakhna chahti hai vo but mujhe lagta hai jab apna sab se bada dard share karegi tabhi vo dard halka hoga 😭. Abhay sach me ek bahut accha frnd hai Kajal ka πŸ˜Š jo fir se us ko dukhi nahi dekhna chahta hai isiliye sab kuch pata laga raha hai Vardaan k baare me. πŸ˜ƒ I loved that part scene jahan Vardaan ne us flirty insaan se bachaya Kajal ko πŸ˜³ but sach me Kajal ko thanks nahi kehna chahiye tha Vardaan ko 😑. Kitna cute lag raha tha na Vardaan sote hue ki Kajal kho si gayi thi us ko dekh kar. 😍 Sab se accha tha ye song tera aur mera fav.😳 jaldi se update karna aage.Edited by arpita25 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
From me





for completing 150 pages of your this fic too.
πŸ‘ πŸ‘πŸΌ
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Posted: 13 years ago
From me





To my dear sweetheart friend Vartika on completing 150 pages of this Fic too
. πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ₯³πŸ₯³
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Posted: 13 years ago
Coming to the update.
Bahut badhiya tha.πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ Kajal Vardaan se kuch bhi chupana nahi chahti hai par abhi batana bhi nahi chahti. Actually vo apne dard apne hi andar rakhna chahti hai.😭😭😭😭😭😭
Pehle Vardaan zid kar raha tha par ab vo bhi samajh gaya hai ki bekar ki jid karna sahi nahi hai πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›, jab us ko batana hoga khud bata degi. πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
Abhay sach me sweetheart hai vo sab kuch karega Vardaan ki reality jaane k liye taaki aur koi dukh na de paaye Kajal ko. 😊😊😊😊😊😊
Pia ne call bhi kiya Kajal ko aur baat bhi hue, that is lovelyπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ. Mugdh and Shalabh ki bhi train chal nikli. πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
Arjun naraj hai Anu se ki us ne bataya nahi ki vo aa rahi hai Delhi me.😲😲😲😲😲😲 Ye to us ne shopping pe dekha na. πŸ₯±πŸ₯±πŸ₯±πŸ₯±πŸ₯±πŸ₯±
Vow kaafi protective hai Vardaan Kajal ko le kar kaise us ne bacha liya πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ To mam us ko thanks kehne lagi not fair. πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›
Song is nice and well suited.πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ Mujhe lagta hai ki Vardaan jaag raha hai tabhi us ne kaha'nahi kabhi nahi" jab Kajal ko bahut pyaar aa raha tha. 😳😳😳😳😳😳
Jaldi se aage likh.
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Posted: 12 years ago
jab maine apne comments post kiye the toh 150 pages nahi hue the islie last me post kar rahi hunπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

Edited by shreyamathur_18 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shreyamathur_18

jab maine apne comments post kiye the toh 150 pages nahi hue the islie last me post kar rahi hunπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ



   

   
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: suhana.dixit

Congrats for completing 150 pgs of this fiction.πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘




   

   

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: desaiprachi07

Sorry for being that much late but before that a big congratulations that your this fic has also completed 150 pages. πŸ€—




   

   
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Sweet-Lioness

 

 
 
 
congrats vertika...πŸ‘
 
tera yeh fic bhi 150 page par pahunch gaya...πŸ‘
 
vaise yeh mahan kaam baht pehle ho jata...agar aap ki daya-drishti is fic par barabar bani rehti aur ud jaldi hota toh...
 
par tu toh hai hi ek no ke late-latif...tujh se toh jaldi ud ki umeed rakhna maano...indian penal coads ke tahat ek baht bada crime ho...huh...



   


Ab bhagwaan yaani meri daya hogi aur i hope jaldi hi Fic khatam ho jaayega. πŸ˜†  πŸ˜† πŸ˜†