AR ki kahani meri zubaani

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Dr Riddhima Grewal: daughter of Dr shashank n sister padma n younger sister of Rahul. (age-22) she's sweet n simple just like the riddhima we see in DMG.

Dr Armaan Mallik: elder brother of Atul, both of them hate their parents so don't live with them. (age-23) he's cool, smart n handsome just like our DMG armaan.

Dr Anjali Mehra: elder sister of Muskaan n daughter of Drs. Keerti n Shubhankar. (age-22) she's smart but not rude as her earlier character n she's quite beautiful n she's very loving especially with her sister.

Dr Atul Mallik: brother of armaan. (age-22) quite fun loving n cute. Armaan n atul r very rich n handsome n smart n all because of themselves.

Dr Muskaan Mehra: sister of anjali (age-21) she's just like the character of DMG but not punjabi n does not hate or even know rahul.

Dr Rahul Grewal: elder bro of riddhima (age-23) cool, smart n their family is quite rich n Rahul loves Riddhima more than himself.

the entry of the interns.
Ridz was getting ready 4 d 1st day.

Ammy was doing his morning pushups while shouting at atul 2 wake up.

Anjie was sleeping as shown in the 1st epi of DMG.

Atul was sleeping with a book covering his face on the sofa.

Muski was ready n was wearing her paayal.

Rahul was exercising in the gym.

story starts from here-
Rahul enters the bungalow shouting at ridz for getting ready and ridz positively replies and asks him to wait for sometime and both soon get ready n come down n go to the dining space to say bye 2 their parents.
pad: baccho kuchh kha kar to jao.
sha: haan bhuke mat jao.
both: nahi mom tym nahi hai hospital mein kha lenge.
on the way 2 the car rahul picks up an apple n goes off.

Rahul is driving n they reach the hospital-
both enter sanjeevani n rahul says:
ridz mujhe dad se kucch baat karni hai tum jao main aata hoon.
r: theek hai bhai par shaam ko hum jaldi chalenge coz mujhe naya cell chahiye on account mera pehla wala chori ho gaya.
ra: uski tension tum kyun leti ho sis? maine tumhare liye allready ek liya hua hai ye lo n gives her the cell it's an N95.
r: thanx bhai ure the best.
they go diff. ways.
Ridz is checking out her cell n so is our dear armaan. they collide into each other n Ridz falls into his arms.
they both keep lookin at each other n r lost in each other......

hey guys the nxt part is a suspense, so guys post wat u think might b coming up next n i'll soon continue. sorry 4 d mistakes or if u don't by any chance like my FF. it's my first try at an FF. 😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
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its an awwsome update nice choose of relation of characters and please continue it
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"Some times your heart thinks, whom do you really love?
You love someone but you like someone else,
Your mind speaks, but your heart denies....
Someone listens, but someone else comforts...
Someone prays, but someone else consoles...
Someone says but someone else's action speaks...
Someone laughs, but someone else understands...
Someone just tells, but someone makes you do...
Someone is there, but someone you want is not...
You search for someone is someone else...
Is this the beginning of love, or is it the end...
A times come in life when you thinks what love really is?
What you think is love or it is something else...
Listen to your mind but follow your heart."
Edited by kvn1983 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow.......it was amazin,mind blowin update..............luvd it..........plz update soon.......
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awwwwwwww
they fell in love at first time seeing each other
cute part
loved the rahul part
plz do continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! itz amzng update superrrsooon... waitng 4 d nxt prt 😊 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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ya jaya really nice FF i luv it. hey it was so much fun typing it wasn't it? but think of some awesome masala soon n pm me when u update. 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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it was gr8. but do continue soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nce really gd start cnt wait 2 read mre updte sooon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey!
Ur ff sounds interesting!
Do continue soon!

n do PM me 2!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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sounds interesting
do continue soon and pm me when u r done

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