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Posted: 16 years ago
#51
hy plzzzzz update it sooooooooon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#52
hey guys i am back wid my ff.......i hope u enjoyed the last part.........
then everyone goes for their duties except ammy and ridz
ammy: hey ridzi rahul ko hamare baare mein sab pata chal gaya hai
ridz: shut up armaan....bhai ko kaise pata chalega
ammy: arre i m not lying...vishvaas nai hota toh apne bhai se pooch lo
ridz: okk baad mein pooch loongi....abhi chlein warna dr keerti hume maar daalengi...
ammy: okk lets go..
then they go off to their duties
in the cafeteria.....ammmy n ridz enter and seeing rahul there she runs to him
ridz: hey bhai
rahul: hi ridzi...aa beath....
ridz: nai bhai mujhe aapse kuch zaroori baat karni hai...
rahul: haan bol a
ridz: yahan nai kahin aur chalein
rahul: okkk
ammy: hey guys mere liye bhi ruko main bhi aata hoon
in the locker room
rahul: haan ridzi bol
ridz: woh main yeh poochna chahti thi ki.......aap mere aur aur armaan ke baare mein kya jaante hain...
rahul: main kuch nai ......bas itna ki tum dono bahut close friends ho....zyada kuch nai
ridz: dekha armaan ....bhai ka jawab sunliya
ammy: nai ridzi rahul jhoot bol raha hai......rahul bata na yaar ridz ko ki tu kya jaanta hai mere aur ridzi ke baare mein
rahul: kya jaanta hoon
ammy: wahi jo aaj tu subah mujhse bol raha tha
rahul: achcha woh...toh aisa bol na...haan main jaanta hoon ki tum dono ek doosre se pyar karte ho
ridz: wat...
ammy: dekha ridzi main jeet gaya....rahul sab jaanta hai
ridz: shut up armaan....tumhe haar aur jeet ki padi hai....matlab ki bhai ko sab pata hai
meanwhile rahul goes off from there...
ammy: haan toh kya...
ridz: arre ab bhai papa ko sab bata denge...
ammy: toh achcha hai na hume batane ka kasht bhi nai uthana padega
rid: magar ramaan tum samjh nai rahe ho.....agar papa nae na kar di toh
ammy: kyun na karenge yaar.....main kitna samrt hoon handsome hoon kitna hot hoon aur sabse badi baat main ek doctor hoon aur hamari jodi kitni acchi lagti hai....
ridz: magar armaan.........main shaadi ki bata nai kar rahi hoon
ammy:toh kya tum mujhse shaadi nai karna chahti ho
ridz: haan karna chahti hoon.........magar...itni jaldi nai.....and agar apap ko pata chal gaya toh poore sanjeevani ko pata chal jayega
ammy: itni jaldi matlab......ridddhima tum ab badi ho chuki ho...get it
ridz: achcha theek hai hum shaadi kar lenge but pehle hamara carreer toh settle hone do
ammy: aur kitna career settle karogi....intern toh ban chuki ho....aur kya karna hai
ridz: but armaan....main tumhe kaise samjhaoon......and waise bhi papa toh yahi bolenge ki pehle bhai ki shaadi hogi phir hamari
ammy: han toh phir theek hai....rahul hamara kaam karega aur main uska
ridz: matlab
ammy: matlab ye ki rahul mere hone waale poojya sausrko hamare rishte ke baare mein batayenge aur hum rahul aur uski mehbooba ke baare mein.......
hey guys i'll write one mroe part...okkhope u enjoy the suspense in this part.....do leave ur comments and thanx for ur kind support...
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Posted: 16 years ago
#53
wow... read everything in a single go.... liked it alot.. plz continue eagerly waiting for it.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#54
hey guys this is another part....hope u guys like it....
ridz: matlab....
ammy: matlab ye....ki hum unhe rahul aur muskaan ke baare mein bata denge........
meanwhile rahul was just hiding behind the wall n overhearing this....n suddenly on hearing this he enters....
rahul: hey wait wait wait.....ammy tum mere aur muskaan ke baare mein kya bol rahe the
ammy: kuch nai.....
rahul: bata warna....
ammy: warna....kya kar lega
ridz: woh bhia hume pata hai ki aap muskaan se pyar karte ho
ammy: riddhima......bhai mujhse zyada important hai...jao raho apne bhai ke paas i am leaving....
ridz: plz armaan yaar tum ghussa kyun ho jaate ho itni jaldi
ammy: waise bhi tumhe mujhse shaadi kahan karni hai
ridz: mujhe karni hai.....but yeh sanjeevani hai armaan....main yaahn kaam karne aati hoon.....na ki apni wedding plan karne.....ya mauj masti karne....
ammy: achcha
ridz: agar tumhe mauj masti hi karni haitoh kisi club mein jao na yahan kyun aaye ho.....
ammy: haan bas wahin jaa raha hoon.....wahin apne liye koi hot ladki dhoondh loonga...jo tumse bhi achchi ho...
ridz: haan to phir mere liye bhi ek handsome hunk dhoondh lena okkk
ammy: bye....
ridz: bye
rahul: so ridzi tuaur pyar main kabhi soch bhi nai sakta tha
ridz: main bhi nai.....aur maine ye bhi nai socha tha ki aap muskaan jaisi ladki se shaadi karoge........
on this both of them hug each other...
next day.......
ammy n ridz arrive early....
in d locker room
ridz: hey armaan abhi bhi ghussa hokya...
ammy: ghussa aur main plz......han ye ghussa kam ho sakta hai agar mujhe ek kiss mil jaaye
ridz: oh really....pehle toh bolte ho ki ghussa nai hoon aur phir kiss maangte ho ghusse ke bahane.....
ammy: plz yaar ridz....just one kiss
and by this he comes closer and closer to her.......n holds her waist....meanwhile....ridz tries to escape from there....but armaan's hold was so tight that she has no other option than kissing him.....ammy first kisses her cheek....then as he was movingfurther to kiss her lips....rahul comes there...
rahul: ye kya ho raha hai
ridz: kuch nai....armaan chodo
ammy: arre kya yaar tumhara bhai hit ho hai aur ise toh hamare baare mein sab kuch pata hai.....
rahul: paat hai iska matlab ye nai ki tu meri behen ko kiss karega woh bhi mere saamne...
ammy: aaahhhh......jab tu muskaan ko kiss kare toh theek hai aur jab main ridzi ko karoon toh galat hai....kaun se desh ka kanoon hai ye...
ridz: bhai aapne aur muskaan ne kiss bhi kar li
rahul: nai ridzi....mujhe toh pata bhi nai hai ki woh mujhse pyaar karti bhi hai ya nahi.....
ammy: haan toh woh tumhari galti hai na ki tumne paat nai lagaya.......magar mujhe toh pata hai na ki ridzi mujhse pyar karti hai
rahul: theek haiitni hi himmmat hai toh sabke saamne kar na
n then ridzi n ammy see everyone coming to d locker room.....n suddenly move further apart........
ammy: tumhara bhai hai ya tumhara baap
ridz: armaan...
ammy: okk sorry baba....but remember meri kiss baaki hai...okk
in d cafeteris....ammy n ridz were looking into each others eyes from one hour....then rahul comes there and sees them
rahul: hey wao yaar tum dono ek doosre se kitna pyar karte ho ......hello ridzi ab band bhi karo.......(rahul does everything to stop them....n finally he pours a cup of coffee on to ammy's head )
ammy: arre ye kya kar raha hai.....
ridz: tum haar gaye...tumhari aankh pehle jhapki.....
rahul: kya tum dono game khel rahe the....
ammy: haaa toh tumne kya socha...
rahul: maine socha ki tum dono ek doosre ko pyar bhari nazron se dekh rahe ho...
ridz: mera bas chale toh main din bhar tumhe aise hi dekhti rahoon( in her mind)
ammy: aur mera bas chale toh main tumhe zindagi bhar aise hi dkhta rahoon....(in his mind)
rahul: achcha chodo yaar....waise main soch raha tha ki ykun na hum sab ek picnic pe jaayein
ammy: oh thts a brilliant idea.....
ridz: okk so done kal okk.....main muski aur anjie ko bata ke aati hoon
ammy: aur main champ ko
then both go from there
rahul: yupee....sab maan gaye ab kal picnic mein main muski ko propose karoonga......
hey guys gtg....hope u ppl like both the parts.........do leave ur comments......
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey wow yaar superb updates yaar ye rahul to bada shana nikala heheh poor armaan hamesha koi na koi ata rehhta hai or arridz cnt do romance heehehe lvd it totaly nd nw rahul is gonn apropose muski grt yaar bahut maza ayega cnt wait
cont soooooooon
thnks fr d pm
luv yachna
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Posted: 16 years ago
#56
waoh👍🏼 its really a nice one⭐️ superb😊😉 specially coffee scene so cute😆 plz continue it soon😊 and thanks for the pm😉

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for kash


Edited by kvn1983 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#57
hey wow yaar superb updates yaar 👏ye rahul to bada shana nikala heheh poor armaan hamesha koi na koi ata rehhta hai heehehe lvd it totaly
nd nw rahul is gonn
apropose muski grt yaar bahut maza ayega
cnt wait cont soooooooon


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Posted: 16 years ago
#58
I just finished reading your ff it's brilliant
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Posted: 16 years ago
#59
hey plz continue soon......
lovely FF......

luv
Rucha..

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