Undesired...-AM FF!(Ch.3:Pg.14) - Page 7

^^Will make a longer one,next time~!Thanks for reading!😉

loved both your updates Amina 😳
The first one - i see you've used AM;s first meeting...brings back all the memories 😳 😳
love the way you highlight Raunak's arrogance and his conserved style...haii if only we could see JS in that form 😆 😳

As for the second chapter, the RT scene was very fiiting 😉 the way tanya ordered him and Raunak just grinned 😉 😆 loved it!

sorry meri nanandji 😳 for not replying earlier...i just came across it now 😳

@Sam:Sam ki bachchi!I was expecting an earlier reply from you!😡....Neva mind!😉...Glad you loved "em,Nanadji!😉...Well,woh first meeting scene is liye,so tht I've one less thing to think abt!😆😉...Thanks for replying!😃
BTW,when are you updating,yours??

mwahaha ok...lets see when i'll update mine...i've got half the chapter sketched down just have to write the other half 😳

Aminaaaaaaaaaaaa....

Man Is dis ju call a part. itna chota😡... man gve us big part yaar..

cuming 2 FF..

wht must I say.

it's superb. luv d way adi flirting wid Tanya. I mean d guy who hve attitude who cares❓... n dun listen any1 is listening n caring 4 Tanya....😛

wow.. D way he pull her closer.... man I get shivering in mine body😆. kash i might b mets😭. but anyways who wuld like d jodi den😆...d way he flirt wid her... sayin i won't... ven Tanya say leave mine dupatta I was like kashish....4m where kash aamata cme in Tanya 😆. n rauank been sujal. smiling n larfing at d stupidity dat tanya is doin..

wow marraige on d card cuming up soon 4 raunak...but who....I hope suyesh find tanya only...

awesum....👏 it was quite gud part i luved it..

by d way nanadji.... other FF ven ju will updatez😡 dat...sam ju also

^^Chota tha yeh!Huh!!Chota tha yeh!😡..Toh bol phir se,and my bhaiyyu's sword is ready for you!!😡🤣

Kyuhn mera popat kar rahi hai!!😡...I thought every1 here has only seen PM before AM,yeh Sujal-kashish wali kahan se aagaye beech mein!!😡😆😆

Abhi se nahin caring for Tanya,you dumbo!!...He's just smiling at her attitude!!😡...Go through the chapter,again!!😡😆

Laalchi kahin ki!!😡...Ju want nther FF to be updated,also!!😡😆...

Abhi toh,for atleast 1 week,no update ....Day-after-tomorrow se skool!!😡...Will update both after tht!😉

Originally posted by: ~*~A~*~

^^Chota tha yeh!Huh!!Chota tha yeh!😡..Toh bol phir se,and my bhaiyyu's sword is ready for you!!😡🤣 ... yesh I will say it again n again ki chota tha yeh part😆.. at least due 2 dis I can c my pati parmeshwar😆🤣. ghar nahin aye🤣🤣

Kyuhn mera popat kar rahi hai!!😡...I thought every1 here has only seen PM before AM,yeh Sujal-kashish wali kahan se aagaye beech mein!!😡😆😆 ...... amina.....🤣 sowwie I was nt knwing dat.... but rmbr mine user name.. dat mean I hve seen also ekta shw. so by nxt tym. better...😆.. b nt a popat🤣. till I find dat scene 1 of d best 1 in KTH. I use 2 try dis scene in mine home🤣🤣🤣. dun tell any1 ok...😆

Abhi se nahin caring for Tanya,you dumbo!!...He's just smiling at her attitude!!😡...Go through the chapter,again!!😡😆 . I hve gone thru. n hvin copy also... ok.. aarey yaar Caring hi toh hai. he gve her duppata.. as he can't c her struggling 4 her duppatta in dat table. hiaaaaa mein maar gaava mere pati pe.. kya attitude hai 😛

Laalchi kahin ki!!😡...Ju want nther FF to be updated,also!!😡😆... yesh I m laalchi. n want other FF also. plz updatez na. warna I will cme 2 knw I hve2 go thru other chap 12. 2 get wht ju wrote in chap 13🤣

Abhi toh,for atleast 1 week,no update ....Day-after-tomorrow se skool!!😡...Will update both after tht!😉wht skool agian. no way. ju recently only got holiday naaa.den again skool... ok thik hai...

4get 2 tell ju.... 1 thng yaar abt ur FF.. wht ju been by grl r fighters.... hve v all been sauten ever fight kya kabhi😆😡

Dat woz joke yaar!!!!!!!! wicked update 😉

okay, ur off the hook....since u made a long RT scene😳😉

u can feel the danda's.........see thats the power of the "tarah danda's" 😆

just jokin

😆

dun worry take ur time...i have to catch up on other FF's too

@Mona:

~What!!Pati-Dev ghar nahin aaye???😲...Must be busy torturing Kastu!!😆

~I know you were a dumbo,par itni badi!!**shakes head in disappointment😔**Trying to b Kashish at your home!!🤣🤣🤣...My frends to always make me act like some Romeo-any of them,aslways gets her dupatta,stuck in my shirt,and then my teachers are always there,and then mera Popat!!😭😆😆

~No yaar!Not cpz he cared for her;he hlped her with her dupatta,coz he loved the chair in his room!🤣🤣 🤣

~You're too bhulakkad,and I can't hlp it!!😡😆😆

~Haan yaar...Woh Princy;just gave 5 holiays!!😡😆

~Nahin Mona!You're toh BatMan ki Granny😡😆;I meant "normal" girls!😉😆 Edited by ~*~A~*~ - 16 years ago