A-A FF:Barsaat Mein Humse Mile Tum p5pg14

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Posted: 16 years ago


Barsaat mein humse mile tum sajan tumse mile hum... Barsaat mein.... tak dhina dhin!

Hey guys. Well aaj yahaan bohot tez baarish ho rahi hai. And I was just sitting and enjoying it, phir socha, why not start a fic on my favorite couple! Meri taraf se eik choti koshish. This fic is especially written for my sweetheart Tam-Tam. AND for my meethi si Anu Di who is writing the world's best A-A fic! Thanx Anu Di for your Socha Na Tha and this is a thank you gift for you! And for all of my other family members in the Oasis! Love you guys!

Part 1

It was almost time for everyone to leave. The interns were just finishing up their last duties.

General Ward!!!

Thunder and lightening strike!

Muskaan- Satya Naas! Haiyo Rabba Ji aye ki hogayaa! Itni tez baarish? Chalo koi baat nahi. I love baarish!

Atul- (joins her) Lekin mujhe toh pasand nahi hai naa yaar.

Muskaan- Kya baat kar raha hai yaar. Tu toh itna environment friendly hai. Tujhe toh baarish se pyaar hona chahiye!

Atul- Abbey yaar, pyaar hai. Lekin apni health se bhi pyaar hai naa.

Muskaan- Haaan. Yeh bhi theek hai. (both start walking in the corridor)

Atul- Yaar, awaaz se toh lag raha hai jaise baarish rukne waali nahi hai.

Muskaan- Haan yaar. Kya kar sakte hain. Enjoy kar yaar. Thand rak thand!

Right then Armaan came and was walking behind them listening to their conversation, but they didn't know.

Atul- Kya yaar. Mujhe toh apni cycle pe ghar jaana hai. Bheegte hue.

Muskaan- Koi baat nahi yaar. Mujhe bhi toh jaana hai. Apni Dhanno pe! Badaa mazaa aayega. Bheegte hue jaayenge. (laughs)

Atul- Abbey chup! Bheegte hue jaayenge aur cheekte hue aayenge. Yun. Achoo achoo karte hue.

Muskaan- Haan yaar. Yeh bhi hai.

Armaan- (pushes them both in separate ways and comes in between) Excuse you! (all stop walking)

Muskaan- Arre hero! (smiles)

Atul- Arre Armaan, mere dost.

Armaan- Champ! Mere yaar! Aa... gale lag jaa! (they hug)

Muskaan- Haaye! Kya pyaar hai!

Armaan- (turns to Muskaan) Hello Muskaan! (hugs her) (pinches her cheeks) Tu kitni cute hai! (they start walking again) So. Tum log kuch baat kar rahe the naa abhi abhi.

Atul- Nahi toh. HAAN! Mausam ki baat kar rahe the yaar. Dekh naa! Kitni baarish ho rahi hai bahar.

Armaan- Haan, woh toh hai.

Muskaan- Arre yaar. Tu tension mat le. Kuch nahi hota. Araam se jaayenge baarish ko enjoy karenge. Kyun hero? Sahi keh rahi hoon naa.

Armaan- (tries to say something but Atul interupts)

Atul- Arre kya enjoy karenge. Marne ke baad koi enjoy karta hai kya? Kyun Arman?

Armaan- (tries to say something, Muskaan interrupts)

Muskaan- Kaun marr raha hai??? Yaar tu toh aise keh raha hai jaise bahar rain nahi ACID RAIN ho rahi ho. Hai naa Hero?

Armaan- (tries to say something but Atul interrupts)

Atul- Abbey yaar tu samjhti kyun nahi hai...

Armaan- CHUP! Kabse bolne ki koshish kar raha hoon. Kabhi yeh bol padti hai toh kabhi tu! Ab tum dono chup raho aur meri suno. Exactly problem hai kya? (they both stay quiet) Arrey Kya hua?!

Atul- Abhi abhi tune hi toh bola chup rehne ko.

Armaan- (gets annoyed) Abbey Champ! (then gets sweet) Champ, mere bhai, ab bol.

Atul- Boloon? Acha. Dekh yaar. Yeh keh rahi hai ki baarish ho rahi hai toh hum log bheegte bheegte jaayenge ghar. Ab bheegte bheegte jaayenge toh sardi lag jaayegi naa.

Muskaan- Toh yaar, baarish toh bataa ke nahi aati naa. Ab bheegne ke darr se yahaan toh nahi reh sakte naa. Oye yaar! Mujhe naa eik idea aaya hai.

Atul- Jaldi bataa.

Muskaan- Kyun naa hum kal se apna boriya bistar saath mein laayein. Aisa karne se agar kabhi phirse aisi baarish hui toh locker room mein hi line lagaa ke so jaayenge! (both laugh and she gives Atul a high five)

Atul- Abbey haan yaar! Idea toh achha hai.

Armaan- Kya idea achha hai! Paagal hai kya? Yeh toh kuch bhi keh rahi hai. Muskaan tu chup reh yaar.

Muskaan- Arre! Maine kya kiya?

Armaan- Chup. Champ, problem yeh hai naa ki tu bheegna nahi chahta.

Atul- Haan yaar.

Armaan- Toh theek hai naa. Mere hote hue tu kaise bheeg sakta hai?

Atul- Kyun? Tu kya mere peeche cycle pe chhaata leke bhetega? (Muskaan laughs)

Armaan- Abbey Champ! Mere matlab yeh hai ki main tujhe aur Muskaan ko ghar drop kardoonga.

Atul- Ohhhh. Haan yaar, tu toh car mein aaya hai naa.

Muskaan- Oye eik minute! Phir meri Dhanno ka kya hoga?

Atul- Haan, aur meri cycle?

Armaan- (getting annoyed) Muskaan... teri Dhanno.... teri Dhanno ko hum trunk mein daal denge. Pichli baar ki tarhaan. Yaad hai? Jab hum pehli baar mile the?

Muskaan- Haan yaar! (hits him on the arm) Yeh theek rahega!

Armaan- (rubbing his arm where she gave him Punjab da pyaar) Aur Champ teri cycle bhi peeche rakh denge.

Atul- Phir theek hai.

Armaan- Great! Toh phir chalein?

Muskaan-Atul- Chalo!

Locker room!!!

Armaan- Hi guys! (to Anjali) Hey gorgeous!

Anjali- Hi!

Muskaan- Hi! (sticks her tongue out in front of Rahul)

Rahul- (rolls eyes) Rehne de. Pehle se hi teri shakal itni kharaab hai. Aur kyun bigaar rahi hai.

Muskaan- Oye tu chup kar! Mere se toh naa tu... tu door hi raha kar!

Rahul- Oh jaa jaa! Tere paas bhi kaun aana chahta hai?

Anjali- Guys please. Just stop okay. Kabhi toh jhagadnaa band kiya karo.

Atul- (walks in) Hi guys! (goes to Anjali) Hi Anjali. (smiles and blushes)

Anjali- Hi.

Atul- Anjali, aaj tumhaari skin kitni glow kar rahi hai. Hai naa Ridz?

Riddhima- (smiles) Hmm.

Atul- Waise toh tumhaari skin hamesha hi glow karti hai. Lekin aaj bohot zyaada glow kar rahi hai. (blushes) Zaroor mere baare mein soch rahi hogi. Hai naa? (smiles)

Anjali- (gives him an awkward look) Atul... You're such a freak! (he looks down and blushes while smiling) (she turns toward everyone else) Okay guys. See you tomorrow. Good night! Come on Ridzie!

Riddhima- Okay Di. Bye guys!

Everyone- Bye!

Armaan- (goes to Atul) It's okay Champ. Hota hai.

Atul- Armaan, yaar, bohot pyaar karti hai naa mujhse? (blushes and smiles)

Muskaan- Oye tu chal yaar!

Outside!!!

Atul- (going towards Anjali) Barsaat mein humse mile tum sajan tumse mile hum... barsaat mein...

Muskaan-Atul- TAK DHINA DHIN!!!!

Anjali- (looks at them both and rolls her eyes) Whatever. (turns to leave)

Atul- Anjali! Eik minute!

Anjali- (smiles sarcastically) Ab kya hai Atul?

Atul- (blushes) Woh main...

Anjali- Kya??? Atul jaldi bolo. Main bheeg rahi hoon.

Atul- Tum bheeg rahi ho? Oh! Anjali tum jaldi se apni gadi mein behat jaao warna sardi lag jaayegi. Chalo chalo chalo! (takes her to her car and makes her sit inside)

Anjali- Ab bolo. Kya bolna hai?

Atul- (smiling) Main?

Anjali- Atul....

Atul- Haan? Oh haan haan! (blushes) Woh main tumhe goodnight kehna chahtha tha.

Anjali- (laughs) Okay. Goodnight Atul. (he closes her car door for her) (she rolls down her window and yells out to everyone else) Goodnight guys! (looks at Atul and pats him on the arm and rolls her window up and drives away with Ridz)

Atul- (looks at his hand where she patted it, smiles, and almost falls backwards) Goodnight Anjali.

Armaan-Rahul- Atul! (they grab him before he falls backwards)

Atul- Tum dono ne dekha? Anjali ne mujhe pyaar se goodnight bola. (smiles) Bohot pyaar karti hai mujhse. (blushes)

Armaan- Waah waah waah! Champ, ab toh mujhe bhi lagta hai ki Anji tujhsepyaar karti hai. Kyun Rahul?

Rahul- (laughs and gives Atul a pat on the back) Chal ab Anjali ke sapne dekhna chod aur aake help kar hamaari. Iss chipkali ki Dhanno aur teri cycle andar rakhne mein.

Muskaan- Oye thand rak thand!

Armaan- Muskaan. Tu gadi mein behat.

Armaan-Rahul-Atul put Muskaan's Dhanno and Atul's cycle in Armaan's trunk and then they all leave.

 

COMMENTS!!! criticism bhi chalegi... 😆

 

Komz

 

pg. 1 - pt. 1
pg. 2 - pt. 2
pg. 5 - pt. 3
pg. 9 - pt. 4
pg. 14 - pt. 5

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Posted: 16 years ago
Aaaaaaaah! Komzie, yaar!!!

🤗 🤗 🤗

Finally another AA fic! I wish I could read Mehak's but I don't know Punjabi! Well, now that you're writing one, I'm so excited!

That was wonderful! Funny, romantic, and it had everyone! 👏 👏 Yay!

Haha, Atul and Muskaan are too cute! I like their friendship and their songs! 😃 And Armaan trying to talk to both of them was hilarious!


Atul- Abhi abhi tune hi toh bola chup rehne ko.

Armaan- (gets annoyed) Abbey Champ! (then gets sweet) Champ, mere bhai, ab bol.



😆 😆 That was brilliant! I can totally see all of this playing out like an actual epi! 😊

Can't wait for the next part! Update soon!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
29 views and only 1 reply??? 😭 😭 😭 Is it that bad?

Thanx jaanu for commenting! At least kisi ko toh pasand aayee. 😭


Komz
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Posted: 16 years ago
omdzzz dat was soo funnii..i loved it
Please continue .. soon .. & please pm .. in case i lose ur FF .. Which i don't wanna cuz iz so cute

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love astha

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Posted: 16 years ago
wow!
yaar ur ff is rocking!
its toooooooo cute!!!!!really loved it when u update next do pm me!
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Posted: 16 years ago
great going yaar.plzzzzzzzzzzzz continue sooooooooooooooon n give us some more good baarish scenes of AR esp.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Awww Komzie! 🤗 🤗 🤗 This is a very very sweet thank you gift indeed!

This was awesome yaar! Tune sab ke dialogues itne realistically likhe hain! Felt like I was watching the show only!! My favorite part was the Atul-Muskaan-Armaan interaction! I adore these three together! Wish they had more scenes together in the show!!

That scene when Atul says G'nite to Angie gave me a bit of deja vu from SNT 😆 😆 But you wrote it so much more cutely!! 🤗 🤗

Do continue soon yaar!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Awww cho chweet! Thanx di! Especially aapke liye, Tam-Tam, aur poore Oasis ke liye likhi hai! You got deja vu from my scene of ur fic?? 😳 😳 😳 I've been blessed. Ur fic is soooo extremely realistic! Thanx alot di! Love you!

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: pink_09

omdzzz dat was soo funnii..i loved it
Please continue .. soon .. & please pm .. in case i lose ur FF .. Which i don't wanna cuz iz so cute

👏

love astha

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Thanx Astha! U continue urs and I'll continue mine!😊 J/K! I'll Pm you!

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sakshi.bahree

wow!
yaar ur ff is rocking!
its toooooooo cute!!!!!really loved it when u update next do pm me!
👏

Thanx Sakshi! I'll Pm u with the update!