ISHQ VISHQ AR NOTE PG 63 - Page 28

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sheena_12

gr8 part yaar waiting 2 knw watz gonna happen in the village.....wooo itz exciting!

thanks a lot sheena 😊😳

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: asmita216

hey it was really nyc..thnx for da pm n cont asap

thanks a lot asmita😳 and i will continue soon

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Posted: 17 years ago
ooh nice part yaar.but the npart is gonna be very exciting when they will be in the jungle.
continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: vidu93

ooh nice part yaar.but the npart is gonna be very exciting when they will be in the jungle.
continue soon

thanks a ot vidu and i will continue today

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Posted: 17 years ago

friends thanks a lot for ur lovely comments and iam extremely sorry for calling previous part as boring and pls dont kill me for that i will never call like that😆

precap: thanks to rahul he assigned AR to do a project and for that they should go to village and angad and sapna are assigned to do one project for which they should go to hospital . at present ridz is totally burning with anger at arman and goes to her room

PART- 5A

in ridz room:

ri[talking to herslf and shouting]: wo kya soch raha he apne aap ko badmash kal mujhe chudidhar me behenjhi kaha aur ab mujhe advice dheraha he

sapna[who is seeing this]: ridzi tum kiske baare me baath kar rahe ho

ri: aur kis ke baare me us jungli ke baare me

sa[laughs]: arman???? us ne kya kiya

ri: arey yaar wo keh raha he ki me decent dresses pehen kar us ke saath us jungle jaana tho me kya decent clothes nahi pehenthi,us machar ko me nahi chodunga jab hum jungle jaayenga tab ek billi ko us ke uppar bhejoonga[i will make a cat to chase him]

sa[ controls her laugher]: billi?? acha chodo mere kyaal se tum chudidhar pehenkar jao u r going to village na and take 2 more and try t take one saree also

ri: saree??? wo kyu

sa: me ne suna ki waha ek bahut acha temple hai waha saree pehen kar jao

ri: as u say sweet hear ok i will get ready now again wo jungli aakar hungama kartha

sa[smiles]: theek he

ri: sapna pls pack my bag yaar pls

sa: ok

mean while ridhima gets ready and sapna keeps a saree,one chudidhar and one ghagra [which ridz wore on the first meeting of arman]

ridz wears a red chudidhar and comes out looking gorgeous

sa: ridzi u r looking great

ri: thanks sapna and hugs her i will miss u sapna

sa: miss u too

ri: sapna me tho di ko bolna bhool gayi zara usko batana

sa: ha me bhol dhoongi ab tum jao warna tummara jungli

ri: mera jungli nahi wo tho nature se he jungli he jungli ke saath jungle omg

sa[laughs]: ridhima

ri: acha bye

sa: bye

ridz dress

mean while arman says bye to angad and arman wears red t shirt looking as always handsome

armans dress

both arman and ridhima come out at the same time and arman just starts to stare at her and ridz just gives him a look but she is uncomfortable seeing arman staring at her

ri: ARMAN

ar[gets back to senses]: ohh hi ridhima chale

ri: lets move

while they are going atul,anjali and aryan comes there

ri: hi di and hugs her

atul: hi ridhima

ri[unhugs anjali ]: hi jiju

anjali: ridhima while atul blushes

ri: sorry di

aryan: arey ridzi mujhe bhoolgayyi

ri: oh iam sorry aryan and hugs him

arman now fumes with jelous mean while anjali goes near arman

anj: hi arman iam anjali

ar: hi but how did u came to know my name

anj: hey iam ridzies sister and she told about u

ar[excited]: wo mere baare me bholi

anj: ha and by the way arman ridz is scared of darkness so take care of her

ar[smiles naughtily]: sure dont worry

mean while ridz comes there and aryan follows her

ri: bye di and hugs her

anj: bye ridz i will miss u

ary: bye ridz and hugs her and says i will miss u badly

ri: me too and hugs him back

ar[now gets total angry and says]: saylu

aryan[ listening to saylus name with out even seeing back unhugs ridz and runs while others laugh and anjali understood that arman is getting jelous on aryan ]

arman and ridhima leave for the air port and they get into the flight unfortunately arman got 16 and ridz got 18

in the flight beside ridz a hand some but crook guy sat and started irritating her he started touching ridz now ridz is getting really mad but poor arman is not seeing this

that guy is about to kiss ridz then ridz runs towards arman and seeing ridhima arman got up she will just hug him tightly and ridz starts crying seeing ridz crying arman thought something is wrong and he sees all are seeing them so he will make her sit on his lap first she didnot say no

ar: ridhima kya hua [with concerning voice]

ri: wo wo and starts crying

ar[now couldnot bear her crying]: ridhima bolo kya hua

ri[controls herself]: arman wo mere saath wo and cries again

arman [this is enough for him to understand what happened]: usko himmat kaise hui and he makes her sit on his seat and starts to go while ridz hlds his hand

ri: arman mat jao pls

ar [though he want to go seeing ridhima he will stop] : ok and he will request the man beside him to exchange the place and that man will accept

ri[seeing arman thinks how helpful he is} thanks arman aaj tum mujhe bachaaliya thanks a lot arman

ar[smiles]: my pleasure now dont worry iam there with u

ridz smiles and goes to sleep and while sleeping she will sleep on armans shoulder seeing her arman smiles and he takes of the strand of hair which is irritating her touches her cheeks and smiles again and stares at her how innocent she looks while sleeping and starts to admire her beauty thinking about her he will also goes to sleep and his head on ridhimas head

listening to anouncement ridz got up and saw how they are sleeping and smiles to herself she will think how innocent he looks while he is sleeping

ri[sweetly]: arman arman

ar[listening to her sweet voice]: good morning ridhima and gets up

ri: good morning we r about to land on india

ar: great ok u wait here i will just come

ri:jaldhi aana

arman smiles and leaves for bathrom

mean while

that crook again came to ridz HEY WE WILL NAME HIM AS VICKY

vicky: hey darling kal tho miss kiya par abh nahi and starts to come close to her

ri: she will give him a slap

vi[gets mad and starts to force her and ridz starts crying ]

while vicky is about to kiss ridz closes her eyes and cries her voice is not cmming out then she will hear a sound of slap and opens her eyes and she will see arman beating vicky badly and arman is really very angry his eyes burning with red shows how much he is fuming with anger

ridz stops arman and says him to sit as they are about to land

while arman shouts: tumko himmat kaise hui mera ridhima ko choone ke tum ko aaj bhagwan bhi bach nahi sakthe and starts to kick him again

ridz again drags arman and makes him to sit and vicky taking this oppurtunity runs away

vicky[from lil far]: hey psycho i wont leave u and that sweety aaj nahi tho kal

IAM REALLY VERY SORRY ACTUALLY I KNOW U ALL ARE WAITING FOR JUNGLE SCENES BUT I COULD NOT DO IT TODAY . BUT I WILL DO IT IN MY NEXT PART .

SORRY I COULD NOT PM ANYONE BUT I WILL PM U AFTER COMPLETING MY NEXT PART OF DILL CHURA LIYA

Edited by urmila_17 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
very good ff
just cught up with it today
luved it continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
excellent... u left me hanging.. not fair.. update soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
i love ur ff
and every part of ur ff are so good
loved it
do update soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey urmi yaar again wht a wonderful prt1 yaar it ws choooooooooooooooooo gooooooooooooooood............

ary: bye ridz and hugs her and says i will miss u badly

ri: me too and hugs him back

ar[now gets total angry and says]: saylu

aryan[ listening to saylus name with out even seeing back unhugs ridz and runs while others laugh and anjali understood that arman is getting jelous on aryan ]

arman and ridhima leave for the air port and they get into the flight👏

specially whn armaan gt jealous 2 saw ridz in aryan arms i lvd it nd whn he said sayla nme he run frm their it ws soooooooooooo gooooooooood👏 nd wow yaar waise willan to hona hi chahiye isi bahane ye nazdeek to aye i lvd it yaar kya fatak se us vicky ki dhulai ki bahut maza aya realy enjoyd it...............nd ridz wow she feelng sumthng fr hm gud goi.............wow yaar ab to jungle scene ka intezaar hai............plzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soooooooooooon it ws fabulous prt yaar................
luv yachna
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Posted: 17 years ago
nce prt! really sweet d way armaan is concern abt ridz! loved d prt! i ill b w8in 4 d jungle prts! cntd sn!

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