Pragalbha, wow talk about a huge present you gave us all. honestly writing till 2 in the morning, this made me feel very bad for you, all your hard work was clearly evident in both parts. you left no stone unturned in the word entertainment..!!ππ okay what touched me :
Part 21...
Ajay's character is simply superb.. i'm enjoying his self talks, (for i do that alot myself) and for some reason i find him very endearing because even realizing alaana is robbie's sis that he's honest enough with himself to admit that he feels something for alaana that isnt going away...πSecondly, the way he handled Kaushalya was wonderful saying that kasturi will come around, hmmm is there trouble brewing for roka in your fanfic??i hope not, and i really hope that Ajay doesnt do anything to tear them apart..cause i like ajay's character...yeah he's got a lot of issues but he knows it and seems like he is sensible to overcome them...
and i thought the way kasturi didnt tell gia everything about how robbie makes her feel, was bang on...for i think that everything isnt shared, and thats the difference btw girls and younge ladies. somethings should only be shared btw 2 people...who luv one another..
Part 22:
I really liked where robbie took kasturi for their first date, for first dates shouldnt be all romance, it would have looked over done.good choice pragalbha...Parathas...yummmm...and isnt it true when your with your luved one you never notice your surroundings and thats what happened with roka.. the restaurant was closing and they were still in their own world how romantic...π³
Devika liked how she knew something was up with robbie..was very parallel with how attached she is to robbie..good depiction.
and oohh no, Accident kasturi's accident, hope this brings them closer... but i hope noone finds out about roka yet cause it too early in thier relationship...(i think..)luvly parts.. Pragalbha...two thumbs up!!!!
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