Fan Fiction: Tum Se Hi: Part 1 -Pg 1

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Posted: 17 years ago
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I am starting a FF, Its on Prem and Heer.

Prem Juneja :

A 22 year old, big flirt. He doesn't believe in god and thinks of life as a place to enjoy. He and Heer dont get along really well and they both love to bug each other....meaning..embarss each other.

Heer Mann:

A 21 year old girl, who is modern and indian at the same time. She a fond believer in god and loves to bug Prem but hates him. Why? because, he is a big flirt and doesn't know how to respect girls. Even though, their parents are best friends, she and Prem hate each other to the core and don't leave one single time, not to embarss each other.

Meher Mann(Prachi Desai):

19 year old sister of Heer who has a massive crush on Prems younger brother Preet but doesn't show it.

Preet Juneja:

20 year old. He is also a big flirt but knows how to respect people unlike Prem.

Storyline: PH are sent to USA to study, where when they both come back to India due to said by thier parents, Heer to support her studies in India, even though she is the daughter of a rich busniess man, joins Radio City. Prem on the other hand, becomes a big rockstar...and from than on, PH hate each other to the core and this FF is about how PH fall in love! It is gonna be funny, I hope and good at the same time.

Edited by *Shifali* - 17 years ago

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Sounds like a gud 1!!😃
Plz,Cont.soon!!😳

Edited by ~*~A~*~ - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 1 - Meet Heer

It was a bright sunny morning and a girl was shown getting up from her bed. She quietly tip -toed over to her window and opened it far wide and let the cool breeze touch her soft cheeks which were, from the regular colour turning bright pink due to the cold.

Girl: Its a wonderful day!

Then the girl turned around and head right towards her bathroom and started to take a shower. She comes out of the shower, goes to her cupboard and takes out a pair of jeans and a tank -top. And while, putting her clothes on, the girl, starts to hum the tune, Nikamna Kiya Is Dil ne, Is Dil Ne Kiya Hai Nikama. She girl gets ready, puts on light make -up, combs her hair and leaves.

Downstairs, her younger sister, Meher sits there eating breakfast.

Meher: Hi di!
Girl: Hi! What are u doing?
M: Nothing...
G: Thinking about Hritik Roshan again??

Meher gives her an embarssing smile.

M: No di! Hritik is old! I am thinking about Ranbir Kapoor now!
G: Whatever!!
M: Di, u know what day is it today?
Girl: Yes, today the mid -term results of collage and the results are comming out...and...

The girl, who had just started to apply butter on her toast, gave a shocked look to Meher!

Girl: I am LATE!!!

Meher doesn't say anything and just gives her an embarssed nod while trying to smile.

The girl gets up as soon as possible and leaves. While sounds of her mom are heard from behind!

Mom: HEER!!!

Heer, who was trying to hurry up and not be as late as she already was, didnt' give a reply to her mom and just went.

Mom: Atleast eat ur breakfast!!
H: Later!!

And Heer runs, gets in her car and leaves for collage.

Promo: What happens in collage??
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Shifali how many FF are you starting.... 😃😃GREAT

this sounds really interesting... Prem and Heer in different role.... sound intriguing ....

hmmmm Prem a big flirt 😉
Edited by salma_786786 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#5
looks interesting plz continue it.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Awww Tweetu.. Yipiee a FF by u and such a cuteee one..😃
Prem a rock star and a big flirt wow.. aww and Heer and him leaving no chance to embarass each other and they hate each other..
Sounds bery interesting and alsoo cute..
Would lubb to read ur next part...
And oh Prachi Desai is Meher again.. Aww u weally like her.. She is nice yup but I also kinda like the girl who plays Meher in the show..
Nonetheless a bery good intro👏.. waiting for u to continue😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awwww i luv it...luvd heer's intro... plz update sooooooon!
Posted: 17 years ago
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Shifu difu di!!!!!!!!

*comes running*
A FF? WOW! 👏 Good luck with it!
Absolutly amzinfg concept! prem? a flirt? 🤣 cant wait to see how that turns out! again with the prachi desi? 😆 LMAO......keep writing!
oh yea....i sent in my scene...only sending one...cant think of any other idea....god it took so much cutting to comprise it to 230 words! UFF! well this summer i migh be writing one shots all over the place....but dont think i will develpo a FF!

ok then....do continue!!

shabz
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow..premeer in completely new avatar huh....prem bhayyu flriting??!!...heer...soo modern.....wow.....and prachi-preet...thts superb...i'l love theri jodi......do cont asap shifs....i'l be waiting...kk..

luv nans
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Wowww ok Shifali i never knew u started a new FF on here n all i cn say is it rockz!!!!!
👏

😆 😆 ok heer n her sis does meher always think about hrithick roshan or something 😆 😆 😆 awww nw shes gone on to ranbir 😆 😆
Ok nw u have to update asap i cnt w8 2 read it what happens in college and prems going to be their 2.
keep up the gr8 work
👏
Hummy

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