new VS ff - "taking chances"..prt 3, pg 6 - Page 3

Originally posted by: monikaseth

dreat so nice well done 👏 👏

tnx monica....next part's up😃 

Originally posted by: nyc001

i am new to the forum and i agree. i enjoy creative stories and this is good well. good job!

tnx a lot.....ur comments encourage me😳

I loved Veer's introduction-specially the fact that the lady presentator was so intimidated that she forgot her questions!😆 Your writing is really good! Do continue😊

Originally posted by: jedi_girl

I loved Veer's introduction-specially the fact that the lady presentator was so intimidated that she forgot her questions!😆 Your writing is really good! Do continue😊

I agree..100%...This is getting very interesting...Veer the "player"...Nice 😉

Very Nice Pooja..I might like Veer better here 😉

Should I worry about my Soni with this new Veer personality 😆 ...great job!

no way, our Veer a player. well this is a turn in the right direction 😛..way to go pooja.

this is going as great as a romance novel. 👏

way to go veer. I am liking this. nice work 😊

I wonder when Soni will come in. I wish i didn't have to wait this is excellent.

great job pooja..continue til the end and create more stories. 👏