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thanks you all
i'll update soon
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that was a short update ..... we want more it was wonderful and sounds interesting
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that was really.. good.
continue soon.

PS too short..
btw.. do me a favor.. can u please.. post.. pg..no.. next time.. thanks
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Part3-Ranbir gets Responsibility

 

Ranbir gets home and goes to his room. He had no clue what was happening to him. He couldn't stop thinking of Kanya. He was lost in her thoughts. He remembered her

 

He thought about her sparkling eyes. Then how long her hair was, and it was put down. It was amazing how couldn't stop thinking about her.

 

R: Yeh muji kya hora hai. Mein Kanya ki bare mein kuan sochra huin?

Later he went to sleep.

 

The next day he went to meet Kanya. On his way to Kanya's house he met an Astrologist. He said…

 

 Beta tum hari Zindigi mein tum hare jeven saati agi hai a ari hai.

He had no clue about he said. He reached Kanya's House. On his way to her room .he bumped into Ayan's Dad.

 

AD: Ranbir beta mein tusi baat karna chata huin.

 

R: Kya hua? (With a confused look)

 

AD: Mein aur Ayan ki mom kuch din ki liye Dubai Ja ri ha. Mein chata huin uss waqt ki liye kyat um Kanya ka kyaal rakt sak thi ho?

 

R: Of course uncle, mien Kanya kai kyal rak sak ta huin

 

AD: Thank you so much, mera buge halka hogya

 

R: Iss mein thank you kani wale baat kahan hai

 

AD: Mein vhata huin Kanya tumhari saat tumhari ghar mein rahigi. Agar who yahaan rahigi who Ayan ki mut par both rogi.

 

R: Uncle muji koi atraaz naih hai.

 

AD: Teek hai, pir kaal tum Kanya ko line ana

 

R: Okay mein Kanya si milta huin

 

Ranbir goes to Kanya's room. He sees she's holding Ayan's picture.

 

K:  Ayan tum muji chor kar kuan gi? Tum janti ho mein tumsi kitna pyar karthi huin, pirbi tum muji chor kar gi. Tum hara who jo… bachpan ka dost hai na bot acha hai, lekin muji usi milkar kuch hua.

 

After hearing this Ranbir was happy.

 

R: Knock Knock.

 

K: Oh hi kasi ho?

 

R Mein teek huin. Kya tumi yaad hai kaal mani kya ka tha.

 

Kanya made a confused face

 

R: Teek hai mein yaad karatha huin. Aaj tum pura din mere saat raho gi. Kaal si tum kuch din ki liye mere saat mere ghar mein raho gi.

 

K: Oh… papji neih muji baatiya

 

R: Acha jaldi karo humi janna hai

 

K: Kuan jari hai

 

R: Yeh toh surprise hai

 

Teek hai pelhe tum jao. Muji badal na hai

Kanya comes out wearing a white churidaar. Ranbir couldn't take his eyes off her. Her churidaar was plain and simple, yet she looked gorgeous.

 

R: Chale

 

Kanya nods her head, and they leave.

 

K: Hum pelhe kuan jari hai.

 

R: Hum, pelhe tum hare liye shopping karogi

 

K: Ranbir lekin mein ek widwa huin

 

R: Kanya please asi mat kaho. Muji acha neih lagta hai.

 

K: Ranbir please try to understand

 

R: Kanya please agar tum asi baat karo gi, toh mein tumsi baat neih karo gi

 

K: Lekin Ranbir…

 

R: Kanya please tum asi old fashion muth banno

 

K: Fine agar yeh baat hai toh mein deko gi

 

R: Iss ka matlab tum shopping karo gi

 

K: Mein yeh naih ka tha. Lekin dekin gi

 

R: Koi baat neih tum razi to hogi

 

They reach the shopping mall. At first Kanya is looking for clothes that Ranbir can wear. He tried a lot of outfits but Kanya did like most of them.then he tried one that Kanya loved. It reminded her of Ayan in there first meeting.

 

Flashback

 

Kanya and Pooja are shopping.

 

P: Kanya muji boy bok lagri hai, mein khana kane jari hoin

 

K: Okay di, app jao  mein baad mein aogi.

 

Pooja leaves and Kanya goes back to shop. She's looking for something to wear on Pooja's engagement. While walking to a store she notices these guys checking her out.

 

G: Wow kya maal hai. Ek bar is ski saat…

 

K: Excuse me!! Ladki si baat karni ki tameez nieh ha? Bloody losers.

 

G: Yeh ada toh muji usi hor attract klarthi hai.

 

Before they could say another word Kanya left.  Kanya went to Pooja.

 

K: Di yeah aaj kal ki ladki bi na.

 

P: Kya hua?

 

Kanya tells her everything.

 

R: Kanya tum bi na. Yeh India hai Canada neih. Aur tum to asi baaton ko gor neih karti.

 

K: Your right di. Meih bi na asi baaton meih agi.

 

Pooja's cell rings.

 

P: Hi jaan kaso jo. Teek hai meih arre huin. Kanya muji jana hai. Main tum ghar mein milti ho. Bye

 

K: Teek hai bye di.

 

Kanya goes back shopping to find the perfect outfit.

 

K: Oh my god, mein late hori hun. Muji jaana chahi

 

Kanya goes to get her car when she sees that the tire is punctured. Then it starts to rain

 

K: Oh god. Tire ko abhi puntchured hona tha, aur aab barash hori hai. This is just my lucky day.

 

Just then a car stopped. And a guy opened the window

 

G: Excuse me do u need any help?

 

K: Its okay, ill manage. Thanks anyway

 

Kanya starts walking when she sees that sees surrounded by the guys who were checking her out earlier.

 

K: Muji jaani do?

 

G: Kuan pelhe tora khelti hai.

 

The guy starts coming close to her.

 

K: Ek kadum aggi kiya toh meih…

 

G: Kya karo gi. Maa ko baalo gi

 

He's about to grab her when, someone pushes him away. It was the guy who asked Kanya for a ride.

 

Guy in the car: Tumhi ladkioyn ki saat khel neih mein maza ata hai. Ab dekti hai mein tumhare saat kya karooyn ga.

 

He beats up all the goons, before he could hit them anymore they ran away as fast as they can. He goes to Kanya and puts hi jacket on her because she is soaking wet. He take her to his car.

 

Guy in the car: Aap kahan rati ho?

 

K: Magic Hill (I couldn't think of anything else)

 

Guy in the car: By the way I'm Ayaan Nanda

 

K: Kanya Godoble

 

A: Acha naam hai

 

K: Aap ka naam be acha hai

 

They talk until Kanya's house comes.

 

A: Dekho aap ka ghar araa hai

 

K: Thank you

 

Back to Reality

 

R: Kanya, Kanya, Kanya…

 

K: Oh sorry mein vo kuch neih

 

R: Kanya tum muji baata sakti ho

 

K: Baad mein baato gi

 

R: Teek anyways. Mein kasa lagta huin?

 

K: Tum bot achi lagti ho

 

R: teek hai phir yeh leti hai.

Javeria

Edited by 26javey26 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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aww thats cute! i hope she starts to love ranbir and forget ayan! plzz continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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i read all three parts and i loved them... they are so cute... pls do continue
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I jus read all 3 parts
an i totally love them 😳
gr8 ff 😊
Plzz continue
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Posted: 16 years ago
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cute

so sweet of ranbir to take kanya to do shopping.
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all three parts were lovely dear i hope you continue soon and i hope she starts loving ranbir for who she is and not try to find ayan in ranbir.. if that makes ane sense..aneways good job can't wait to read more=]
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Posted: 16 years ago
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aww that was so sweet i liked all the 3 parts plz write soon=)