ARMAAN RIDDIMA FANFIC part 40 updated - Page 4

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Posted: 17 years ago
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NEW PARTS UPTATED

hey guys i was thinking to write a fanfic on AR hope u like it

THEY ALL ARE IN UNIVERSITY

R: calls sapna's cell (sapna picks it )

S: hey ridz what happend?

R: there is a dance comin up just for fun the dean has confermeand

S: so what everyone knows bout it?

R: sapna i wanna go with him

S: ohhhhh that's the problem?

R: yes it is

S: ask him for it (disconnects)

R: ohh ab mein kya karo?

ridz is by her locker gettin redy for her next class

A: hi riddima

R: ehhhhh hiii armaaan ?

A: i just wanted to ask u out for the dance comin up

R: WHAT????????

A: is there any problems?

R: no there is no problem

A: so it's a yes

R: ofcourrse it's a yes

A: ok see ya tommorow

R: ohh balla balla shava shava are yar usna hee mujhe dance ka lie ask out kar liya😆😆 just cant wait me and him dancing (she says to her self)

how was it do reply i'll give u a little hint what is gonna be next there close up dance and some romantic stufff😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
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CUT THIS PART SORRY I DID IT WRONG CUT IT
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Posted: 17 years ago
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CUT THAT PART I SEND I SEND PART 1 AGAIN CUT IT OK SORRY BOUT THAT I AM SORRRY THAT IS END PART I AGAIN
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Posted: 17 years ago
#34
Thanks again for such a wonderful part! Really enjoyed and yay! Armaan punched kelvin in the nose...and he had blood gushing out of it! Time to party! lol...when I imagined the scene..it was Rahul getting punched on the nose by Armaan, that why I am happy!! Continue soon!

Kajal 😛

Btw can you make you updates longer and not in capitals cause it is sort of hard to read it! Thanks Deva!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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SO WHEN AMIT AND THEM WERE TALKING THEY WERE LOOKIN IN THERE EYES

BACK TO ARMAAN RIDDIMA
A: riddima tum bahoot sundar hoo
ridz get's shy
R: armaan tume na ya soo (100) bar se bhi jada bol diya
KELVIN GOES BY
A: ohi kya dekh rahi hai
k: kuch nahi mera pyaar dekh raha hoo
r: shutup 😡
and then kelvin goes away
riddima's dad calls (p is for papa)
r: hi dad
p: riddima kasi hoo
r: papa mein dikh hoo
p: tum abhi plane mein hoo kya
r: hai mena batya tha na ki hum paris ja raha hai
p: beta ek kushkahbri hai
r: kya
p: tumhari shaddi fix ho gayei hai
r: kisi? 😕
p: yad hai rajeev uncle ka beta kelvin
p:usa
r: kya?
p: hai ab bus paad kar aa jao aur shaddi ki tyari karo
(dissconnects)
r: papa papa
riddima crys
a: riddima kya hou
r: armaan armaan
a: kya hua riddima
r: meri shaddi fix ho gayi hai
a: kisa
r: k k k k kelvin
a: kya?
r: ha mein papa ko kasa bato?
somebody announces plz buckle ur seat belts up we r bout to land
they all buckle up
both AR r sad riddima is very very sad armaan is too
they all land
BACK TOO SAPNA
sapna and amit are very close now they goo
AR GET OFF SALDY SHOW THIER PASSPORT
r: yeh kya ho gao
a: tum apne papa ko batao na
r: ok
riddima calls her dad bak
r: papa mujhe app ko kuch kenhna hai
p: bolla beta
r: papa mein apki hera bath sunti ayi hu mena ap ko kuch nahi kaha jub apne padama aunty se shaddi ker li mujhe bina batayein mein padth likh apke liya doctor banni papa meri ek bat main li jiya
p: bola beta
r: papa mujhe kelvin bikull achha nahi lagta he called me sexy babe sweety tried to kiss me on purpose dad
aur mein kisi aur se pyaar karti hoo
p: kaun
r: armaan malik dad
p: what??????????
r: papa plz
p: no riddima
riddima gets mad
r: tikha papa phir ap mujhe kabhi nahi dekho mein sirf armaan sa hi shaddi karo go
(dissconnects)
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Posted: 17 years ago
#36
ooh nice twist! continue soon

Kajal
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Posted: 17 years ago
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my anfic is not much of a hit should i write or not no one looks intresteat onli23
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Posted: 17 years ago
#38
I think you should continue writing...maybe people arent replying cause they dont know you have updated! Or maybe because you update super quickly! lol

Kajal 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey its really gr8 plz do cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#40
nice part tht kalvin is so annoying make armi kick his butt

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