izhaareishq"THE LOCKET" and promo(pg-31) du c!!!!!

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   yarron pehle saare parts maine first page par update kiye huye hain ok

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dolly

part 1==

raju is a pow kept in a karachi jail

jailer ==ghulam sahib,he really likes raju and treats him as his son

alekh to comes to this jail as a prisoner

he discovers that raj is here

with lot of difficulties he manages to cal naina and tell herthat our capt sir is,,bt the phone is disconnected with a shriek and a bullet fire

all people think alekh got killed.....

naina ,ali r posted in kashmir,,both r capts ,,annd maj huda ,capt ud r in delhi,,head of their team is gunny aka jai,,

ths is a short update of the first part

i got it lost sory

========Ok friends so this is izharr-e-ishq episode-2==========
Jailer ghulam sahib ,,, ko aaj bhi yaad hai 5 saal pahle kis haalat mein raj ko firangi nahi vo gadar bharat laye the??
Raj ko apna koi hosh nahi tha , bad se batter haalat this uski
Gadaron ne uske illaj k liye koi docter bhi nahi bulyaa,
Raj ka koi bahut bura accident hua tha ske jism par kai chotein thi??..
Uska bachna bahut mushkil tha..
Jailer ghulam sahid ko shayad apna beta yaad aa gaya tha
Jo Pakistan mein huye ek aatankvadi humle ka shikar ho gaya tha?.
Haan raj bilkul shahid ki tarhan hi tha?.
Vo apne bete ko dubara kaise marte huye dekh sakte the
Unhone vahan k hakim ko bulvaker raj ka pra illaj karvaya
Is ladke mein zaroor khuda ka noor hai??
Raj ne phir unko bataya k Hindustan mein kis tarhan usko marra hua sabit kar deshdrohi sabit kar ,,vahan se bahar laya gaya tha
Ghulam sahib ne jab use bataya k yeh sab kisi lala k kehne par ho raha tha jo ek terrorist associaton k head the?.
Unka kisi desh se koi lagaav nahi tha vo to bas takat k bhuke the?
Raj ko unhone bataya k kis tarhan pak mein bhi us insaan k ek ishaare par lakhon log mar diye jate the?..
Jab is group k logon ko kahin chupne k liye jagha chahiye hoti to vo Karachi k masum parivaron ko apna shikhar banate
Unke ghar mein apne hathiyaar chupate the
Log darte the ?kuch nahi kar pate the??
Raj ko jab pata chala k in sab k peeche lala gehlot ka haath hai to vo beechara apne aap ko maaf nahi kar paya?
Lalaji uske saath itne saalon se the uske pita the
Yeh kaise ho sakta hai??????..
Raj ne peechle panch saalon mein ghulam sahib ki madad se ek choti si party khadi kar li thi
Jo logon k darr ko door bhagati thi?.
Jo Karachi mein tenat rehti thi
Kisi bhi kone ki koi halchal ka karan pata karte
Isi team ne ab tak kai aatankvadi humle rok diye the
Par dushman tenat ho chuke the???
Is baar unka nishana Hindustan k kayi bade shehar the
Jimmein rajasthan,kashmir ,Mumbai,delhi,Chennai,bhi the
Yeh puri conspiracy bharat k rajye ko paltane k liye thi
Kyunki lala gehlot elections haar chuke the
In humlon k zariye vo presidents rule chahate the
Aur phir khud politics par kabza karma chahate the??
Yeh hum log nahi hone denge
??????????????????????????????????????????????
Aaj subha se hi naina bahut ajjeb sa mehsoos kar rahi thi
Alekh k vo aakhri bol,?naina humare capt bhi?..
Usko bhul nahi rahe the
Alekh kis ki baat kar raha tha
Kahin raj ki to nahi
Nahi mein khud ko unki yaadon mein nahi dhakelun gi bahut mushkil se khud ko sambhala hai
Naveen bhayiya to bekasur sabit ho gaye the lekin capt rajveer ko abhi tak shaheed nahi kaha jata the
Vo ek deshdroho mane jaate the
Tabhi phone aata hai
Naina=hello
Pooja=ho hai kaisi hai tu aur ali kaisa hai aaj mummy ji ka phone aaya tha nasim ka nigha the ho chukka hai usko bata dena. Dulha delhi se hai. Vahan businessman hai uska naam akram sheikh hai..
Naina=are vah pooja , vaise aapke miyan ki behan ki shaadi hai aap khud use kyun nahi bata deti
Pooje==dekh naina abhi tak humari ladai khatam nahi hui
Unhone mere ko vo gulabi salwaar kameez nahi lekar di aur itne din ho gaya ek baar bhi call nahin kiy
Achacha vo ?? sab kaise hain
Naina=haan ali theek hai
Sidha bol uske bare mein poochna hai
Pooja==achacha huda se baat kar
Huda==haan bhai phoolan kaisi hai
Naina=theek hoon tu bata kaisi chal rahi hai zindagi
Huda=naiana Pakistan ki us jail se jailer ghulam sahib se contact hua hai
Bada achacha insaan hai
Ek khushkhabri hai
Unhone kaha apna allekh zinda hai
Aur vahan k log us humle ko rokne mein hum,ari puri madad karenge??

Ff:izharre ishq=======part 3====-----

Huda=naina aaj phir yeh ehsaas ho gaya vo log bhi apne hi hain yeh dono desh ab milkar insaaniyat k dushmano ko khatam karenge

Naina=alekhzinda hai . vo theek hai

Teri usse baat hui

Hummein jaldi milna hoga

Huda=are apni khushi pae kabu pa phulan jaanta hunt u ktni khush hai

Ghulam sahib keh rahe the vahan ik ishq naam ka group hai jo zulam se ladta hai..

Uska leader ek Indian capt pow hi hai..

Naina==huda us din alekh isi capt ki baat kar  raha hoga.

Hummein governments se baat karke inhein jaldi chudana hoga?????.

Pak aur bharat peace keeping k liye kuch aur pow?s ko chod rahe hain hummein un logon ko vapas lana hi hoga

Khuda ne chaha to ab sirf aman hoga.

Huda =amen. kher phoolan mein ghulam sahib se phir contact kar ke un capt se baat karne ki koshish karunga????????????????????????????????????????????????????? ?

Scene 2==

Raj was feeling sad 4 alekh?s condition and shameful too. Bcoz deep inside his heart he was feeling quiet happy on having alekh here. Even on alekh?s condition?????

Ghulam abba ne bataya tha k usko hosh aa gaya hai??????..

Raj was moving towards his cell.. a strange feeling has engulfed him he just wanted 2 run and hug him

When he reached his room he saw alekh was having difficulty in taking water of the shelf due to his injured shoulder????

He darted 4wards poured water in the glass and helped alekh to drink it.

Alekh didn?t speak just drank the water as if his eldor brother was giving him???..then raj met his eyes, they  were wet.

He just looked at him as if his life was depended upon him??

Alekh had known raj as his eldor brother , mentor and guide, raj knew this

Then the both hugged .alekh sobbed over raj?s shoulder,,

Then taking a grip over himself

Raj spoke.bt his viose seemed 2 betray his smile?.

Ek sipahi apni aakhri saans tak ladta hai

Jab tak vo ek aakhri saans baki rehti hai umeed baki rehti hai or???????..

Bt he could not complete the sentence

He had got back one of his family after so many yrs .tears poured down from their eyes

Feelings as if they had never known b4 came washing over them.

Alekh= sir aap aap nahin jaante aapke jaane k baad humne khud ko kaise sambhala .naina to bilkul gunsum si ho gayi thi ek pal nahi jismein vo aako bhul gayi ho?.

Sir asool bhai aur mobile ki dukan ki shadi ho gayi hai, aur meri aur neelu ki sagai

Raj forsed a shaked laugh then with all his strength tried 2 ask where is naina bt could not mutter a word ahead naina??

Alekh seemed to understand bcoz he said keeping a hand over his shoulder??

Sir aap aur naina zaroor milenge???Ab to sari kayannat is kaam mein jut gayi hai?..

Raj looked in his eyes smiled and said

To bc kaise hain?.

Alekh was abt to answere when ghulam sahib came rushing in the cell

?raj beta mehsood bata raha tha industani army k jis sipahi se humara contact hua tha vo tumse baat karma chahata hai.

Raj=?abba un sahib ne apna naam bhi bataya ya nahin

Ghulam sahib== haan kya naam tha are haan amardeep huda aur uske saath ek ladki thi jo keh rahi thi pata nahi kya bol rahi thi

Kehti,?ab to pak aur bharat mein sms exchange hote rahenge bilkul free,,,,,????.

alekh looked at raju with a look of disbelieving on his face and said,? bhooton ki baat karoto bhoot hazir then he laughed so stupidly that he hurt his shoulder with the consequence k usko raj ki daant khaani padi aur dubara bandage lagwani padi?????????..

Part-4===============================

Raj was back in his cell. He was thinking abt the time when they would b able to establish contacts with huda, it can?t be now at the day time ofcourse, when lala?s men will be patrolling his cell every 2 hrs. if he got caught then abba will be in great trouble. That was the reason why all ishq works were done at night when the guards were given sleeping pills by abba in their rum???????

The guards came patrolling his cell . he pretended to b asleep. They were talking and he was hoping there  talk would b worth overhearing and surely it was?????..

Guard 1== asim bhai ab to delhi mein dhamaka hone hi vala hai. Akram miyan ,are humare delhi vale corresponment?.

Guard 2== bhaijaan aapki englis bhi na, are correspondent hota hai corresponment nahi.

G1= are vahi vahi, haan akram miyan hi is dhamake ko anjam denge, vo bhi apne nigah par jaise hi dulhan nigah Kabul karegi dhamaka ho jayega? phir to maza hi aa jayega?.

?????????????????.

Raj opened his eyes ,he knew abt this plan they were planning a series of attacks in delhi, Mumbai , kollutta and rajasthan to destabilize the government. He was sure they were talking in codes bcoz a blast at a wedding can?t necessarily contribute to turning over of a government unless the wedding involved some important officials and is being held up at an important place,well this made contacting huda even more importent .

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Scene 2=======

Ali returns home after a hectic day. One of a resident of gulmarg had been there ,salim jaffer, had informed them that in a house in their coloney he thinks some militants had taken shelter. On raiding the shack they indeed found copius amount of explosives bt no one was present in there??.. even the neighbours said they had seen no one there 4 yrs , bt salim was convinced he heard people there at night??

This had been 2222222222 strange .why would they leave so much amount of arms at a place so unguarded?. He could?nt solve the mystery all right!!

Naina has still not returned, ali wanted 2 discuss the matter with her.

When the doorbell rang he jumped up and opened the door and was shockingly surprised on seeing pooja there in that salwaar kameez which has caused the fight within them

Pooja==miyan ji aise kya dekh rahe ho.  Phone ka recharge khatam ho gaya kya? (laughs) are yeh suit mujhe amin ne diya hai after all nasim ka connection jo right signal pakdene laga hai. achacha ab mun band kar???

Ali (closing his mouth)== pooja aap kab kahan kaise.matlab Hum aapko bahut miss kar rahe the nahi matlab amin ko ,kya matlab nasim ka connection lag gaya?????

Pooja==haan vo to mujhe pata hi hai k tera mobile mere sms ki kitni wait karta hai, kher nasim ka nigah 10 may   ko hona teh hua tha b tab date 16 march ho gayi hai, ladka kafi well setteled hai akram sheikh hai naam uska??.ya allah ye dekhiye  biwi kkitni der se bahar khadi hai gale laganna to dur andar bhi nahi bula rahe hain??

Ali===Hummein maaf kijiye ga

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Scene 3==

Huda==oye udiye idhar ek baat bata 3 ghante se tu laga hua ek capt se connection nahi kar pa raha.

Ud==bro is mein meri koi galti nahin.vo aa hi nahin rahe. He must b having so much of problems ?.

?????. Eh wait a sec bro this is it. connection establish ho gaya I think ghulam sahib hain jaldi aa

Huda ==hello hello ghulam sahib

Ghulam sahib== haan balkhuldaar hum hi hain tumhari mobile ki dukan vahin hai kya aaspass (huda and ud exchange looks)

Huda ? aap pooja ko kaise jaante hain??

Gs?are kisi ne usse vakif karwa   diya tha ,kher der k liye maaf kareeiga lekin aaj vo asim sone pe hi nahi aa raha tha, zyaada chad gayi thi use, phir gusse mein humne use chikad mein Dhaka de diya aur vo vahin so gaya?.

Tumhare capt sahib aa gaya lo baat karo

Both stand there Utterly bewildered. huda regains his wits first

huda== capt sahib aap hi hain naa pls hummein batayie aap kon hai?

raj== huda kya mujhe naam batanne ki zarr00 _________

the connection had gone haywire again

bt ud and huda were frozen enough 4 not  trying to establish the contact again .it took them nearly a min to regain there selves this time it was ud who became ok first ,with one glance at huda ,he started almost feverishly to establish contact again but something seemed to have gone wrong with the instrument,, huda collapsed in the near by chair, the whole headquarter office seemed 2 spin around his eyes ,this was unbelievable, how could it b ,he was too afraid 22 belive it , if it turns out to b only his imagination, he will not b able to stand it .; he looked at ud and saw his feelings reflected in ud?s eyes.

It was then that huda relised his eyes  were wet??.

Ud== huda vo vo capt the huda he is alive huda he is alive

Ff=izharre ishqpart7=========

There was an odd ringing in the atmosphere around ,in which all the other

Sounds seemed pointless to naina,,only one line held meaning,that was what ud said few moments ago, ?capt raj is alive,vo zinda hain.?

That was all she needed,

And then::::::::::::::::::;

Ud=naina r u there, ali pooja yaar answere pls hello!!!

Ali =ha haaan ud bhai humne sun liya raj sir haan nasim mein delhi nahin mein naina ko delhi bhejta hun aur us insaan ,salim ko mein aur pooja jakar abhi hirasat mein lete hain bye:::::::::: a aud bhai us akram ko meri taraf se dhokebazi ka tofa zaroor de dena

Ud==haan zaroor khuda aaffis!!

Ali picks up his cell with shaking hands ,and dials the no to send commanders to get salim..

Pooja(still shocked ,notices tears mixed with sweat on her face, looks towards naina)

This news seemed to be far from tears of relief to naina, she was just sitting there as if she was a statue and she could not move.

Pooja(shaking naina) naina aaj itne aarse baad teri call ko vo signal mila hai tu chup kyun bethi hai,naina raj sir zinda hai ,naina tera pyaar naina speak up)

Naina aha singh ek sipahi apni khushi ko is taran nahin chupata!!

Naiana?s blank mind suddenly seemed to be fuul to burst ,she looks st pooja, tha word ah singh seemed to hsve crashed thw whole truth on her,

She couldn?t bear to sit there still, and then she hugs pooja and broke down completely ,

Her raj was back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Huda and ali were at airport ,brig jai had send them to receive naina,

They both were to eager to see naina?s face full of happiness her firsty true smile since the day of raj sir?s death bt the flight was 3 hrs late , so they had to wait

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!raj was waiting for the night ,and this stu[pid night was not coming  ..only a day before actually on the previous night when raj had to go alone to ishq headquarters without aba (bcoz incidentely aba has himself gone drunk in his attempt to give sleeping pills to those lala?s paltu dogs, and aba was singing on top of his viose ahen raj left the jail)

Raj has talked to huda who promised that he wil be bringing naina soon to delhi

Raj was not looking on the way while he was lost in his thoughts of naina.

Finally the night has come after what seemed to be billion of years and he was walking alongside abu to the headquarters.

Abu was saying something to him bt raj was noy paying a  least attention to it

At this moment he didn?t have a single thought to be spared 4 anyone else,

He was smilling to himself and also he couldn?t understand why was he blushing. All the surrounding seemed so beautiful now, bt then there was something that should not have been there, atleast not today,,,,

They were suddenly surrounded by a dozen armed personnels,

Oh no they were caught

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