My FanFic: Continuation from 082504 - Page 39

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Posted: 18 years ago
gangster???...lol....πŸ˜† ......continue soon plz!!..it was toooo funny!!!πŸ˜†
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Posted: 18 years ago
gr8 part...ure ending this fanfic...aww...i will miss it 😭 😭 ...cont soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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the gangster look will suit agand a lot! πŸ˜†
great part poor anjali 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
Part 98

(Angadrox insisited... so couldnt let them down)

Guy is getting mad!!!!!!!

Guy: LOok i dont know who you are!! Just leave!!!

A: Is this a way to treat ur guests?? I told u i would help you!!

Guy: I dont want anyone's help!!!!!!

A: But..

Guy: Leave!!!

A: But...

Guy: I said just leave!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

A: Okay okay! Dont be so nasty about it!!!!

Guy pops his eyes out!!!!

Angad is about to go

He back comes to the guy...

A: Are you sure u want me to leave?

Guy: Yes!!!!

A: Sure??

Guy: Yes!!!!! Now leave!!!

A is walking backwards and is talking @ the same time!!

Then he pretends to be clumsy.....

ANd he drops some things off the table!!!!

The girls are jus there watching

They were so yelled at the guy.. that they are scared of anything!!!

They just stand still and watch!!!!!

Angad; Omg! I am sorry!!! Sorry!!

He tries to pick it up

When he does

He drops it again!!

He does it on purpose!!!!!

Guy: Okay just leave it and go!!!!

Angad; My mother always taught me if you drop something u put it back!

Guy: Who cares!! Leave!!

Angad goes slowly

He waves to the girls

They just look at him!!!

Angad is just stalling

Angad: I waved bye.. how come none of you guys waved back???

Angad waves

They still dont wave!!

Angad; I have to teach u!

Guy is like omg!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Leave already!

Angad looks at each one of them

He feels so bad

They are under his control!!!!!!

He is just stalling

Cuz he is running out of ideas!!!!

And if he gets caught

It might be bad!!!

So he just plays along as he goes!!!!!

Guy takes out the gun

Guy: If you dont leave w/in the next 5 sec....

Angad turns around

He is shocked to see the gun again

A: Look i am not here to cause trouble.. i came to help you!! But u didnt want it... so i am like fine!!! Then i say bye.. but they dont wave back... so i try to them how to wave!! Is that so hard!!!

Guy is about to lose his cool!!!!

A: U have a whole girls camp going on...... so i am jus seeing!!

GUy: Yes girls camp! U saw .. now leave!!!

Then some guy comes

And he says that Anjali tried to escape!

Guy is getting furious...

Angad melts when he says her name

Angad; U have more?? Wow!!! Its a whole army!! I wanna see

Guy: No u stay here!!!!!

Angad: But i wanna seee!!!

He whines like a little kid

Guy: I thought u were tough!!

A: I am! I have two different sides of me!! One's bad boy! The other.... softy!!!!!

He smiles

Guys like what a freak and why he is here??

He looks up and is like oh no!

Guy goes to Anjali

Angad follows him

Guy: Hey!! What are you doing?

A sees her

He's so sad!

He's is about to cry

But he holds his tears in

Guy comes closer

Angad tries something

But he hopes that Anj doesnt ruin it!!!

A: Aww.. another cutie pie!! Angad waves

Anj looks at him

A: U see none of them wave!!!

Guy: SHut up will u!!!!!

A sticks his tongue out!!!

Guy is like what a freak!!!!

A: I cant be mean in front of the kid!!!!

Anj looks at him

She's like i have seen him before!!!!

Guy is coming close to her

Angad beats him to it

And he kneels down before her!!!

Angad; Hi! My name.. is.. whatever u want to call me!!!

Anj looks at him

Guy looks at the gal

Angad notices

Then he gives her signal...

And tells him that he is Angad

Anj is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

meanwhile Kripa is getting worried for him!!!

Angad called her up about his plan

She is hoping nothing goes wrong

The whole family is tensed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Angad brings Anj out

Makes her stand w/ the other girls

Angad tells her to keep quiet and not say anything!!!!!!!!!!!


The End!

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Posted: 18 years ago
luvd it

thnx 4 cont

angadrox
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Posted: 18 years ago
lovely part...he shud beat the other guy really hard πŸ˜† πŸ˜† cont soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome parts
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Posted: 18 years ago
very funny part....πŸ˜†
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Posted: 18 years ago
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funny i wish i could have seen this on the show
plz write soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
Part 99

Guy is telling Angad to leave!!!

Angad: Arre bhai!! Whats the rush? Cant I stay here!

Guy: Look I have had enough of you!!!!

Angad: Arre bhai wat did I do?

Guy: What is this bhai bhai!! Kaun Bhai? Kiska bhai?

Angad: Ur a guy!! U look like a brother!!!

Guy: Ahhh!! Please leave!!!

Angad: I will!! Don't be so mean!!!

Anj is looking at Angad through out the whole time!!!

Guy: Hey what are you looking at??

Anj is scared!!!!!!

A: She is looking!! Is there any crime in that!!! Give her a break!!

Guy: Hey who are you to tell me!!!!!!

Anj keeps looking at Angad!

Guy: Stop staring!!!!! Go in! come on!!!

A nods his head

Telling her don't move!!

Anj understands

Guy is getting mad

He's like didn't you hear what I said! Go!!!

Anj doesn't move!!!

Guy: I guess I have to tell u in another way!!!!!

He takes out his belt!!!!!!!

Anj is crying!!!!!!!!

Angad is shocked!!!!!

Angad is giving her signal

Just to stay there

She is literally shaking!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

A: Wats the need for the belt!!! Havent you heard.. Violence is not the way to ur problems!!!!

G: Shut up!!!

A: Okay!!!!!…. I say something nice I get a shut up back!!!!

Guy is looking all scary

Anj is scared!!!

Guy is coming closer to her

Anj eyes are popping out!

Then Angad screams!!!!

Guy: Wat??

Angad: There's…. a…a…..a…..a….a..a…

Guy: What??

Angad; Cockroach!!!!

Guy looks

Guy is like oh my god!!

Guy: U are scared of that!!!!!!

Angad: It's a cockroach!!!!!!!!!!!!

Guy: Shut up!!!!!!!

Angad puts his finger over his lips!!!

Guy is coming!!

Angad screams again!!

Guy: Now what!!

Angad: It's a mouse!!!!!

Guy: Where!!!

Angad; Right there!!

It goes away!!!!!!!

A: Do u ever clean this place!!

Guy is getting annoyed!!!

A stays quiet again!!

Then he screams again!!!

Guy looks at him

A: Oh no just felt like doing that!!! 3 for 3!!!!

Guy is about to lose his patience!!!

Guy comes to Anj

Gets his belt ready!!!!!!

He's about to hit her w/ it!!!

When he takes it back!!

Angad grabs onto it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Guy is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Angad: If you dare to hit her……….. then u will be sorry!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Guy looks at him!

Angad: Don't even think about it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Guy is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!

Angad takes the belt!!!

More like snatching it away from him!!!!!!!!!!

And punches him!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Guy gets up quickly!

Guy: HEY!!!!!!!!! Who are you??????????

Angad; Ur worst nightmare!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

He punches him again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

He keeps punching him

Guy goes for a punch

Angad blocks and hits him again!!

He kicks him in the stomach!!!!!

Angad tells everyone to run!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

He tells them to run!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Anj runs!!

The others follow

Guy is yelling telling them to stop!!

Angad; Now no one will listen to you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

He hits him again!!

Angad is doing a really good number on him!!!!!!!!!

He kicks him and punches him

Picks him up and puts him through a table!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Even after all of that

He still manages to get up!!!

Angad keeps throwing punches at him

Which leads to the outside!!!!

Guy is still standing

Angad keeps punching him!!!!

He's on the road

Everyone is watching!!

Anj is right there!!!!!!!!

Angad keeps beating him up!!!!!!!

He beats him all the way to the police station!!!!!!!!!

Guy is like oh no!!!!

Cops take him in!!!!!!!!!

They throw him in the cell!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Anj is shaken up a little bit

Angad comes to her!!!!

She hugs him to tightly

Feels like she hasn't seem him in years!!!

Angad hugs her

She is crying!!!!

Angad is consoling her!!!

Angad picks her up!!!!

Goes to her aunt and uncles house

Anj is like I don't want to come here!!!

Angad calms her down!!!

Uncle opens the door

Angad has a mean face!!!!!

Uncle is shocked!!!!!!!!!!

He slaps him!!!!!

U is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Anj is there

U is like what he doing there…….. etc….

U comes to know

Both are shocked!!!!!!!!!

Police come there and take their cash away!!!!!!

Angad: Anj from now on!!! You will never come here ever again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

They both leave!!!!

They arrive back at home

kripa sees Angad!!!!

She sees Anj!

Kripa is crying cuz she is happy!!!

Anj sees Kripa

Anj runs to her

Kripa hugs her!!!!!!!!!

Emotional scene!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!




The End!!!