My FanFic: Continuation from 082504 - Page 38

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Posted: 18 years ago
finally angad n kripa found out the truth...they shud save anjali soon. cont pls!
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Posted: 18 years ago
very nice
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Posted: 18 years ago
i knew it!!! awesome gulli!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
FOR EVERYONE WHO READS THIS FAN FIC....

I AM ENDING IT ON THE 100TH PART!!!!!

SO I THINK TODAY.... IT WILL BE THE FINAL 4 PARTS TODAY!!!!!! AND IF NOT TODAY.... ON THE 100TH PART IT WILL BE IN THE FINALE!!!!!


THANX!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
GULI U GOING TO END THIS FANFIC??!! I'M GOING TO MISS IT SOO MUCH😭!!..PLZZ CONTINUE!!! AND PLZZ MAKE THE PARTS LONG CUZ U GOING TO END IT!!
Edited by angadlover<3 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
that was a wonderful part guli!
finally angad and kripa found out the truth
plz write soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
Part 96

Angad and Kripa are shocked!!!!!

They are like oh no!

Kripa is crying!

Angad consoles her

He is telling her nothing will happen!!!!

They both leave from there!!!!

Kripa wants Anjali!!!

Angad is like we will get her!!!!

An is sad!!!

She is locked up in a room

She is sad!!!!

They give her food

But she doesn't eat it

They force the poor girl!!!!!

She wants to leave!

But there's no way she can leave!!!!!

Angad is thinking where could this guy be!!

Becuz when the aunt and uncle were talking

They said his name!

They arrive home!!

They ask Kripa whats wrong!

She cries on Naina!

N: Kripa? Wat happened?

A tells them everything

They are shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

They are like omg!!!

Angad goes and looks for her!

He goes to the police station

No one has heard of this dude!!!!

Angad is thinking that he probably changed his name!!

He thinks and thinks

How will he get Anjali

And where could she be!

Then Angad gets an idea

He's not sure if it will work but gives it a try!!!

He leaves in his car

He is hiding out by the aunt and uncles house

He calls them

He pretends he is one of The guys men!!

And that boss has called them!!!!!

They say okay they will be there!!

Angad is like phew! They fell for it!

He's like thank god!

He sees them coming out

He ducks down

They leave

He gradually follows them!!!!

He is behind them

But he doesn't make it obvious that they are being followed!!!!

They arrive at the place

They do like for a look out!!

Angad parks his car…

A little far

He gets down

Runs and hides at the same time!!!

He sees them going!!

Then he comes by the place

The aunt and uncle come

The guy is like why are you here

They say that u called them

He's like no!!!

They tell him about the call

And he says no!!

Uncle is like whatever!!!

Then they leave!!!!!

Guy is like u aren't doing anything behind my back!

U is like no!

U gave us money we are happy!

That's all we want!!!



The End!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: guli444

FOR EVERYONE WHO READS THIS FAN FIC....

I AM ENDING IT ON THE 100TH PART!!!!!

SO I THINK TODAY.... IT WILL BE THE FINAL 4 PARTS TODAY!!!!!! AND IF NOT TODAY.... ON THE 100TH PART IT WILL BE IN THE FINALE!!!!!


THANX!!!



joooo hukum sarkar ka!!!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
Part 97

The uncle and aunt leave!!!!!

Guy keeps looking at them!!!!

They are talking

ANd he listens

So he knows that they arent up to something

He looks around

And he closes the door again

Angad is standing right there!!!!

He's thinking how can he get in

This guy could be dangerouos

He thinks and thinks

The guy takes out all the kids

They are all girls

He has about 10 of them!!!

An hates it here

The others are use to it

So they gave up

Becuz they know they cant do anything!!!!

AN is sad

She wants to leave from there

The guy is yelling at them!!!

Saying that he doesnt want any funny buisness around here

And once they come here

They cant leave at all

An is crying

The guy sees her crying

And tells her to shut up

Cuz he doesnt like anyone that cries!!!

After a while

He gets fed up

And throws her back into the room

The others are use to it

So they arent saying or doing anything

Angad is thinking what should he do!!!

So then he gets an idea

He leaves from there

(He cant call the cops or else guy might to something)

He leaves

Comes back

This time w/ a whole gangster look

W/ a bandana and the works

He knocks on the door

Guy opens it

Angad: YO!!!

Guy is like who are you!

Angad: I am the bad man!!!!!

Guy: Hey.... who ask for money over there!

Angad: I am not here for the money!!!! I am here to help you!!!

guY :What?

A: How would u like to make money!

Guy: I am rich!

A: Not rich as me!!

A gives him a high number .... for how much money he has

Guy looks at him in a funny way

A: Hey what are you looking at???

Guy pops his eyes out

A: I told u!! i am capable of doing anything!!!

Guy: OH yeah?

A: Yeah!!

Guy: can you kill someone???

A: Oh yes!! I am good at that!!

Guy hands him a gun

A drops it

A: Whhhaaaatttt (Stutters) What is that?? I... I.. know wat that is?? I was testing u!!

Gives me a wink

Guy is like something is going wrong somewhere

Angad is thinking and thinking

WHat can he do!!

Angad sees the girls in a line

Angad; Arre... is this some show!!! Are you guys dancing??? I wanna see!!!!

Guy: They arent dancing!!!

A: Then!! Fashion show!! Oh my!!!

He's making the guy mad!!!!

Angad comes close to the girls

He tells them to give them a five!!!

Guy: HEy what are you doing?

A: Wat i am saying hi!!!

Guy: Come here!!!

A comes to him

Guy: Look i dont kno who u are.... u better leave!!!

A: Why? I wanna help u!!

Guy: No!! I dont want anyone's help!

A: U look like something that needs it!!!!

Guy: Leave!!!

A: No!!

Guy takes out another gun

A: Whats w/ u and guns??

Guy: They are my friends!!

A: Oh u do have friends! I do to!!

Guy makes a mean face

And tells him to leave!!!!

A is like no!!

Guy is shocked

No one ever tells him no!



The End!
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Posted: 18 years ago
nice part
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