FanFic-Sagar-Vidya -Update p34 - Dec 16th - Page 6

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Posted: 18 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: afreen13

omg its was so touching 😳 and u r so bad 😆 u made poor sgar cry 😭 so much LMAO (JKS)plz don't mind man don't make him cry i feel bad 😭 😭 😭



oh dont wry...i knw exactlyyyyyy wht u mean...i hate to see him cry too...but im sry i had to make him cry a lil bfr the happy/jealous times ahead...😛 soo get set to read some fun....hope ull enjoyy....and thanx for the lovely comment...and enjoy my ff..
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Posted: 18 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: afreen13

omg its was so touching 😳 and u r so bad 😆 u made poor sgar cry 😭 so much LMAO (JKS)plz don't mind man don't make him cry i feel bad 😭 😭 😭



awww..dont wry..soon he'll be very happyy....now no villian....😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanxxxx sooo much everyone...pls keep the lovely comments comin and soon the next part will be updated... 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awwwwwwwwwwww i'm sooooo happy 😃 to read dat sagar is not going to cry more 😳 thnxxxxxxxx 4 da lovely newssss 😃 and waiting for da next update plzzz cont soon😊
Edited by afreen13 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow!!!! Wow!!! WOW!!! hun 👏 👏 👏 .....read the latest 2 updates n i must say they were mind blowing.... 👏

not only did every 1....find out bout the witchy witch sindoora ...lol 😉 😆 😆 ....but sagar actually got sum of his sense bak.....n threw her out of the house....yipeeeeee 😛 .......can't tell ya how happy i m 😃 .... 😳 😳

n secondly....as of yet....the best part is tht sagar has finally realized his feeling for our sweetheart vidya 😳 😳 .....yay!!!!!! 😛 .....n 2 actually add to the excitement....tushar n chinu is working together to help bring vidya n sagar together 😉 ..... 😳 😳

simply wonderful...luv ur FF hun 👏 👏 👏 ....(now if only this cud actually happen in the real show....hehe 😳 )

too excited.....can't wait till the next part.....continue soon!!!! 😛

later!!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
#56
Its just awsome i hope this could happened in actuall story..........but just one thing cont sooon can't wait 👏 👏 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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love it..surely continue..can't wit to know what is sagar is gonna say!!
Edited by friendrani - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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First of all, sorry everyone for the late update...something had come up and i had to go out of town for a few days...but now im back...and here's a new update...

and most of all...THANK YOUUUUUUUUUU all soooooooooooo much for the lovely comments...really motivates me to continue...

Recap - sindoora is exposed and saagar is feelin very very guilty now...as he wants to clear his misunderstandings with vidya...but now there is a kabab mein haddi for a bit tushar...tushar and chinu have made a plan to make saagar jealous...

So as tushar leaves after giving vidya her present...vidya has a huge smileee on her face and saagar dislikes it...

vidya takes her blanket and pillow and prepares to sleep...

Saagar - vidya....voh...(searchin for an excuse to talk to her)
Vidya - humein ab neend aa rahi hai..
Saagar - (disappointed) - theek hai...good night...

Vidya doesnt answer and saagar just lays down thinkin...he thinks.."us tushar ke lite english mein "thenk u" keh sakti hai...lekin mere liye ek good night nahi bol sakti" thn again thinks..."kya mujhe vidya se pyar? arey nahi nahi...meh aisa kaise soch sakta hoon..." all these thoughts rule his mind while he goes to sleep....

the next morning...as usual vidya is awake bfr saagar and goes downstairs and prepares breakfast for everyone....she doesnt even go up to wake up saagar...she's wearin the orange saree tht tushar bought her....saagar wakes up, gets dressed and comes downstairs...he sees vidya in the orange saree serving to everyone...and jealousy overtakes his being...he wants her to change tht saree nowww....nowww...how could she wear tht saree tht tushar asked her to wear? so he quietly goes and sits at the table..vidya is still busy talkin to tushar..

Vidya - arey aap toh kuch kha hi nahi rahe...lijiye na tushar...
Tushar - arey vidya...tum toh mujhe khila khila kar mota kar dogi..(everyone laughs except for saagar...he wants to punch tushar at this point....) aur haan vidya...yeh saree tum par bahut achhi lag rahi hai...(vidya blushes as tushar said this and tushar exchanges a "bingooo" glance with chinu...)
Saagar - (in a sarcastic tone...as vidya is feeding sameer and bharat..) - agar kisi ke paas waqt ho toh mujhe bhi khana milega...
Vidya - arey chinu bhaiya aap inhe yeh parathe de dijiye na...
Saagar doesnt like this at all...she has time to serve everyone...esp tushar...but not him....now sameer, bharat, tushar and chinu are more important to her...he angrily gets up frm his seat and goes towards vidya...
Saagar - (looks at vidya) - mujhe bhook nahi hai ab...sirf thoda sa juice chahiye..(he picks up the jar of juice frm near vidya and purposely spills it on her saree...)
Saagar - (with a fake puppy face..) - arey im sooo sorry vidya....voh galti se gir gaya....ek kaam karo tum yeh saree badal lo...ekdum kharab ho gayi na...im soo sorry...(in his mind he thinks..'chalo ab saree toh change kar legi..and chinu and tushar exchange a knwin glance...)

Saagar now walks off and leaves...vidya goes to change her saree...she feels really sad cause saagar left without eating...she wants to feed him with her own hands....she remembers the time whn saagar was jealous of sameer..."kahin yeh...phir se jal toh nahi rahein...(on 2nd thoughts) arey nai nai..aisa kaise ho sakta hai...voh toh aise hi gusse mein honge...lekin kuch khaya bhi nahi..." she looks very upset...but takes her worries as a decision of fate and moves on...

Saagar on the other hand while driving thinks..yeh mujhe kya ho gaya hai? kyun mein aise behave kar raha hoon...kyun tushar se mujhe itni jalan hoti hai...aur sameer, chinu aur bharat se bhi...but as usual he decides to push his thoughts away and move on with his day...

its late evening now and saagar hasnt reached home yet...everyone is gone to bed except for vidya...she's waiting for him..and gettin worried...she tried callin his cell, his office everywhere but he's still not home....on the other hand saagar decides to come home late so he can spend some alone time with vidya...and he doent wanna see tushar-vidya together...he just cant take it...

its around midnight whn saagar comes home...he sees vidya waiting for him...and his face lights up...

Vidya (walks towards him..and unknowingly..) - kahan the aap? ek phone toh kiya hota...kitni fiqar ho rahi thi humein jante hain...jab chahe ghar aa gaye....aapko shayad humari koi fiqar na ho...aur phir subha se kuch khaya bhi nahi...chaliye khana khaiye...chaliyeee...
Saagar - (with a slight smile...atleast vidya still cares for him a lil..) - voh...vidya..
Vidya - (still in her trance..cuts him off..) - kya voh...har galti ke baad..SORRY keh diya..bas..(yes yes...she said sorry in english...remember her lessons? theyre still on...behind the scenes...anyways...so saagar has a surprised look on his face...seeing her say something in enlish...but still listens to her scream at him like a lil kid..)humari toh jaan hi nikal di thi...ab mera muh kya dekh rahe hain..khate kyun hai..
Saagar - (with a cute smile...) - vidya...tum dat na bandh karogi toh mein khaoonga...(vidya now realizes wht she just did...and turns red to the core..)
Vidya - (now back to her..new cold self..) aap khalijiye ga..hum chalte hain..(starts to walk away)
Saagar - (knowingly) - tum nahi khaogi..
Vidya - (lying..) - humne kha liya..
Saagar - vidya...tum mujhse jhoot nahi bol sakti..chal aao...kha lo..(he gets up and goes near her...grabs her arm and brings her to the table..)
Vidya (her heart just melts at his touch..) - humne ne kaha na....(but still continues to go with him...and sits next to him...she couldnt even finish her sentence..)

saagar leads her to the table and quietly takes a piece of roti and some sabji and puts it in her mouth...she eats it without even realizing wht theyre both doing....tushar sees this frm a far...and thinks in his head.."im sry vidya...but time for Interruptoin # 2)
at this he comes to them and coughs....this startles both saagar and vidya...saagar has this frown on his face...he hates tushar right now....

Tushar - voh vidya...mere sar mein dard tha...mujhe kuch milega pleasee..
Vidya - (concerned..) - arey...aap ne humein pehle kyun nahi kaha...aap behtiye na..hum abhi aap ke liye doodh late hain...aapko achha lagega..(she leaves to go to the kitchen...and tushar sits across frm saagar..)
Tushar - arey saagar...ure a very lucky man..u have the bestt wife..
Saagar - (throwing daggers at tushar by now..) - janta hoon...agar tum bhool gaye ho toh...voh meri wife hain...
Tushar - arey saagar...mein toh sirf...( in his head he thinks..'mission successful..")

Vidya comes and brings tushar his milk...saagar cant take it anymore...he gets up and leaves...and goes out in the garden..

once outside..his mind once again has million questions...why? why? why? wht is happenin to him? why is he sooo jealous of tushar? vidya..why does he feel soo protective of her? ohh goshh...is he fallin in luv..is he? is he? omg...it hits him..he's madlyyyy in luv with vidya...but does vidya still luv him? now its very imp for him to find out...soon..:)

kk guys...thts it for today...:)) will continue tmw for sure..with a longer part...:) thanx again for ur comments....pls keep them coming.




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Posted: 18 years ago
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aww thats a great part! soo real 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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woooow great part cnt wait 4 da nxt one i love saagr e sooo cuteeeee 😆 😆

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