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Posted: 18 years ago
#11

haila...you started a ff too...great start... 👏 ...cant wait to see what happens with JB...uff...chi...jigs and cobra 🤢 ...ewww...lol..a.di and dadi are too funny...cant wait to see what happens next...

omg...i just saw...you had boxers...😲...uff...guli toh pehle se hi bigar chuki hai...aab aur bigar jayega....😡,...uff...not done yaar...not done...
JAZ

Edited by jnawaz - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#12
Boxers!!!! 😳 i loved this FF already!!!!!!!!!!!!......

(Jaz.. u read nothing!)

awesome

yaar get rid of this roshni!!!!!!!!!!

plz cont soon!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
#13

that was a nice part.. hope bani gets the job.. pls continue soon...

us roshini too😡😡😡

hope massi plays a gtame and get jb get married..😉


davia

Edited by davia389 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#14
Great start
loved it.
Bani is going to apply for job in WI.....looking forward to it ke vaha kya hoga. 😉 😆
Roshni 😡 😡 😡 hate her...Jai giving her this such importance...didn't like at all...Good that Massi and Dadi don't like Roshni.
plz cont. soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#15
Hey Sonu, congrats on ur first FF 👏 👏 👏 ..Introduction was really interesting..Thank god, no Pia here 😆 😆 😆
So Bani going for the interview in WI..hmm Jai puttar sudhar ja..Roshini ko chod..woh teri nahi, teri paise ki GF hai. 😡 😡 😡
Liked the bickering between Adi n Jigs..as usual hilarious..
Good part dear n pls continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Jaz : Yep Sweety i started one, because Davia pushed me into this 😆
Dont worry i'm a fully JB, so jo hoga acha hi hoga 😉
Exactly Jai in boxers but also with sheets 😆
Thanks for the comment , will try to update soon . 😊

Guli: Ok sweety i'll try to put more boxers 😆 ( Jaz mein ne kuch nahin kaha 🤔 )
I'll get rid of her soon, dont worry 😉
Thankx for ur replies, will try to update soon. 😊

Davia: Thanks hun, for ur comment , yep dont worry they'll be together soon 😉 And u are right Massi will get them married, How ? stay stunned 😉

Ridhijai : Thanks for ur support , glad u liked my start , dont worry i'll make even better 😊
Dont worry jo bhi hoga, mere hote hue, acha hi hoga 😉 Yep aur dekho ke yeh maasi karti ahi kya , nau se baran 😆
Thanx for ur comment 😊

Ofcourse : Hey sweety, thanks hun for ur support, yep hun, no Pia here , Roshni kaffi hai , Exactly aur yeh paise ka nasha main utarungui 😆 , i'm glad u like my stupid convo between Adi and Jigs, i keep writing all the ideas which were coming on my head 😃
Thanks sweety for ur comment , will try to do so 😊

A big jhappi to all of u 🤗
Humera.
Edited by sonu4ever - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#17


Hey Humera..


Nice update....hmm, it's only the first chapter and you've made him wear boxers, age kya hoga kisse pata...

and Roshni...oh god, what does Jai see in her...


Jai seems royally spoilt...

update soon

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Posted: 18 years ago
#18

Hey Birsty

Thanks for ur support hun 😊

Yep I made him wear a boxer 😆 aur 2 nd part mein to .... u can read it i wont break the suspense 😛

Yep Roshni ad mein kya batoun, dont worry there's no Roshni in the 2nd part 😊

and yep Jai is a bit spoiled lekin Massi knwos how to control him 😉

Thanks for ur coment and enjoy teh 2nd part 😉

Humera . 🤗

Edited by sonu4ever - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 2 :



Jai grabbed fastly his gown, wears it and opens the door.
Jai: Massi , kuch kaam tha

Massi : Jai puthat , abhi tum breakfast ke liye kyun nahin aye?

Jai scratching his head: Massi mein Abhi aya fresh hoke.

Massi: beta ek baat bataoun .. Tum yeh dico wagera chodo , abhi buhot hogayi mauj masti , abhi tum shaadi karlo , mujhe bahu chaiye.

Jai: Maasi , mein Roshni se jald propose karni ki koshish karta hoon

Massi: Nahin beta, mujhe Roshni type bahu nahin chahiye, mujhe aisi ladki chahiye, jo ghar ki khushion ko band kar rakhe, jo pura ghar sambhale, jiske sanskar ache ho, jisse baron ki respect , tu samajraha hai na.

Jai: Maasi Roshni mein kya kharabhi hai ? woh bhi sabki respect karti aur ghar ki khushion ko band kar rakhe gi woh ( well teri dolat ko lol )

Maasi : agar tu apni pasand ki shaadi karna chahte so i have no prob with it, lekin Roshni se harkiss nahin ..

Jai cutted in : Lekin Roshni se kun nain ?

Massi: Maine kehdiya na Roshni se nahin , aur yeh mera akhri faisla hai, main ter liye ek patni ki talash karti hoon, abhi tum fata faat , niche ajao .

Jai a bit sad: Ji maasi ... and Massi went.

After freshen up, Jai comes out weraing a black Armani suit, looking Handsome and Hot . He goes downstairs and had breakfats , then leaves with Adi and Ranveer to office.

At Walia Industries in Ranveer's cabin :

The phone rings And ranver picks it up .
Ranveer: Ranveer Shukla speaking ...

Bani: Ji meine apki AD ke bare mein phone kiya, actullay mein is Manager ki post ke like Aply karna chahti hoon ..

Ranveer : oh right, to aap ek kaam kijiye , apni sab degrees ke saat , kaal idhar ajaye, aur candidates ke saat apki audition hogi, phir shayad apko yeh post miljaeyi.

Bani: Thanks a lot, so see you tomorrow, Bye Sir.

Ranveer: Bye Miss .. and he hungs up
Ranveer's tought : Kamal hai naukri bhi nahin mili aur abhi se Sir bana diya hai usne, Good girl ...


In MT Abu

Bani: Maa mujhe kaal Mumbay jana hoga , ek naukri ki apply ki hai meine, wohi jo papa ne suggests ki thi..

Kiran : thik hai beta , tum jao rano ke saat ticket ka intezam karlo ..

Bani: Ji mom ..


Bani and Rano have taken a ticket and bani haven't done any pacling as she did'ntknow if she'll get the job .


The day after in Jai's office :

Ranveer , Adi and Jai were attendings candidates , three have already have been seen, and no one had the perfect qualification . Just then Ranveer goes in the waiting room and call in the next candidate.

Ranveer: Please come in

Bani: Ji .... Good morning ...

Jai goes through Bani's degress and said : very good, u've been first student and u gor the highest mark of ur college, very good, so u know managment wery well as i can see ...

Bani: Ji Sir ..

Jai: But the prob is that u dont have any experiences , and we need someone who can take the responsibilities fastly, without the need for us to initiate him ..


Bani: I can understand i dont have any experiences, but i have the knowledge and i'm sure i wont let u down and will make this compagny to have great profits ... Aur waise bhi how will i have experiences without someone trust me and give me a job ...


Ranveer and Adi were quite agree with Bani and Adio said to Jai : I think she's right we can trust her and give her the post ... Ranveer also said : Besides she hadvery good degrees ..

Jai thought a sec then said :Ok Miss Dixit, we'll give u the job and u have one mont to prove urself .

Bani : Thank u very muvh Sir, I'll try to give my best and wont let u donw ..

Jai to Ran : Ok Ranveer show her cabin u start from this afternoon ..

Bani : Ok Sir ...

Jai while reading her profile :: Wait a sec u dont live in Mumbay ..

Bani : No Sir i live in Mt Abu ..

Jai : And u live in a hotel here ...

Bani :Ys Sir i'll live in a hotel untill i find a flat

Jai : No need for that we have a couple of flats for our eployees , u'll give the rent , u'll go with Ranveer who'll show them to u and then u can join us tomorrow no problem .

Bani: Thanks a bunch Sir

And she goes with Ranveer ..

In the Car :

Ranveer : Congratz , i must say u are very ambitious and stong willed girl ..

Bani : Thank u Sir , yep i try my best to keep my parents proud of me

Ranveer : Well thats' good, u seems to have a very good background and BTW Bani call me Ranveer .

Bani : Ok Ranveer , thanks ..

Ranveer : No Prob bani, dont think u are alone here , now u have a freind ..

Bani: Thanks for everything Ranveer ..


Bani choosed a flat , all flat were with 2 rooms , a huge living with a terrace, an equiped Kitchen and a bathroom with a small jacuzzi ..
She installs hereslef in the flat, she finds it very luxurious , her father , mom and Ranu went in Mumbay to give her her stuff and then when they wrere sure that she was well installed they left for Mt ABu ..

Few days Later in Office :

Bani : Hey Ranveer , Whats' up dude ?

Ranveer : I'm fine buddy, Here i have some files for u , the clients wants the detalis ASAP, so can u checkes them , then i'll give them to Jai Mama.

Bani : Ok Ranveer i'll check them and give them back ASAP ..

and left in her cabin , in the hall , bani was with the files in her hand, and jai were coming towards Ranveers' cabin, and didnt saw bani, and they bumped into each other and bani dropped the files , all the papers fall .


Jai: cant u see where u are going ...

Bani: Sorry Sir i was reading the files ..

Jai : I know u want to make profit faster but go in ur cabin and studied them carefully there , there are lots of people who comes in teh hall ..

Ranveer who heard some noise, came out of his cabin : arre yeh shor kaisa , what's happening and then saw bani collecting paper from the floor , he goes and helps her ..

Jai in a bit sarcastic tone : we bumped into each other because Miss Dixit were too buzy with her files ..

Ranveer : Oh Jai Mama aap bhi na, why are u scolding her , i told her to be fast so it's my fault ..

Bani while taking all the papers from Ranveer's hand and from the floor : Thanks for ur help .. and went

Jai to Ranveer : Ok forget it , i have to chekc a project come to my cabin ..

and both left ..

Bani tought : Ouf Yeh Akru boss bhi na , i have to be more careful, warna main to gayi kaam se ..

Sunday morning In Walia Mansion

Massi went in Jai's room , she saw the bed empty and heard the shower , just then teh batroom 's door opened and Jai came out with a small towel only covering the part under is belly till his knees , and was singing just then he saw Massi

Jai : Massi app Yahan , and was abt to run

Massi : atrre beta ruk to maine, tume pura nangga bhi dekha hai jab tum chote te , aur phir mujshe kya sharmana ... and was laughing

Jai embarassed : went back in te bathroom and Massi Left

20 mins later; He came out wearing a dark blue jean and a black Tee , looking really dashing and went in the living

Massi and Daadi were there .

Jai: Kya Massi batake to ana tha

Dadi while laughing : Aree beta ismein Kya sharman ,tume pura nangga bhi dekha hai jab tum chote te

Jai ; Tab ki baat aur thi ..

Dadi and Maasi were laughing

Jai embarrassed and pissed of now said : Abhi boliye Massi kya kaam that , itne subha ..

Massi: Subha arre 11.30 baj chuke hai , tum mere saat mandir ao

Jai : Ky aMandir, nahin mein nahin Mandir jaunga .

Masi: Chal to , maine manat manghi hai teri jald shaddi hone ki ..

Jai cutting in: Tab to mein bilku hi nahin jaunga ...

Massi: acha to phir yahan se chali jati hoon, aur phir jo man mein aye tum karna main kabhi tume zindagui bhar pereshan nahin karoungui

Jai : Goes to massi : Nahin massi aap aise mat kaheiye please, aap janti hai ke app hi mere seb kuch ho, meri ma aur baap , he was getting emotional now ...

Massi : Chal phir rona band kar aur apni ma aur baap ki baat mano aur chalo mere saat ..

Jai: Thik hai chalo maasi

And they both gioes to th eMandir ..

And Adi comes in the living and said to his mom : Maa Kya baat hai , Jai aur Mandir .. last timme jab woh gaya tha .... hum yaad nahin araha kab tha ..

Dadi: Woh isliye ke wo jata hi nahin hai, lekin Billo ke emotional blakmail ne mamla fit kardiya , and they both give each other a high five ...


In the Mandir


Jai and Massi were in the Mandir , Massi was talking to the Priest and Jai was besides her ..

And then Bani also come in teh same Mandir, she was climbing the stairs ...


To be continued ...

I hope u enjoyed it and dont worry in the mandir kuch acha hi hone wala hai .. Stay stunned

Humera.
🤗




Edited by sonu4ever - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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oh my godd that was a rocking update...

and humera thnk god i asked u to start varna u would have never... i am really happy .. tum bahut achhi writer hoo.. the simple and the best..

i said u .. it will be good and see u write soo good.. i am able to view it in my mnd.. massi and jaii that was soo good... massi teasing jai...😆😆😆

now ranveer and bani are friends great.. to mandirt mein ofcourse bani hongi.. and u kow ... massi wil see her and jai falls on her or not massi will fall for her and makes her get married to jai... 😉

pls continue soon.. hosake to abhi... cant wait...

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davia

Edited by davia389 - 18 years ago

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