FF :Yeh Raastey hai Pyaar Ke:pt14 p42

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Heres' goes my very fisrt ff , hope u guyz will like it 😊 Thanks To Davia, who really helped me and who told me to start a ff , so a special thanks to her 🤗

Yeh Raastey hai Pyaar Ke

Introduction:

Walia Khandan

Jai Walia, India's first buisiness tycoon
he is very rude and like perfection
He's only sweet to Roshni, her girlfreind , well even if sometimes he's really to her

Massi , she has brought jai up, and nowaydays she's after jai, she wants him to get married , but the problem is that she hates Roshni and try to find a suitable match for jai

Daadi , she always cracks jokes and try to cheer everyone's mood

Aditya always shares her mom's ( daadi ) jokes ,and is divorced to the cunning Jigyassa

Jigyassa, loves being a Walia, is divoced to aditya Bali , and leaves in WM with her childrens : Ranveer , Sahil and Anu

Ranveer, veey sweet guy, works in Walia industries , single ( what say ready to mingle 😆)

Sahil, goes to uni, but not for working, only to enjoy himself with his freinds

Anu, sweet but nakhreli girl, after all she's Jigyassa's daughter , but unlike her she's an honest an reliable person

Roshni , Jai's Girlfreind, but actually his money gf , she only like Jai's status and money nothing else

Bani , a sweet simple girl, who's done an MBA , and now is searching a job, but her sister rano always tell her not to worry, as she has a very good degree

Rano , bani's younger sister , who's also doing an MBA, she hates boys , Why ? because they are stupid , she only concentrates on her carrier

Nishikant and Kiran Dixit , parents of Bani and rano, they have always taught to their daughter to walk on the right part and always be on the truth side

And these character will be leaded to the Raste Pyaar ke 😳

please comment should i continue it or not, all sort of feedback is welcome either bad or good, it'll help me to make my ff improve 😉 and write what u guyz like

Humera. ( nope it's not a character of the ff 😆 )

Part 1 page 2 ,Part 2 page 3 , Part 3 page 5 ,part 4 page 8 , part 5 page 11 , part 6 page 15 , part 7 page 18 , part 8 page 21 , part 9 page 23 , part 10 page 26, part 11 page 28, part 12 page 32 , part 13 page 37, part 14 page 42

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Posted: 18 years ago
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that was good one.. atlast u started ur ff.. pls contniue sooon..

the intro was interesting ..waithing for part 2
davia

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Posted: 18 years ago
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me 2nd ..

looking forward to it.....
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Posted: 18 years ago
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YAY! ur first FF.. im way behind on FFs as it is.. but ill try and read this one 😉

i like the way u totally missed out Pia 🤣

Sounds interestin 😉 congreatulations on ur FF..

Henna x

PS.. its funny.. Ranvirs single.. and so am i! 😲 what would u knw! 😆 kiddin 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thanks Henna for ur support i'll try not to decieve u 😆
Yep Pia isnt there in thi sff , for the time being , Kal kisne Dekha hai, but still i hate Pia so no Pia here 😆
Thanks a lot 🤗
Hmm i know who'll be my next entranvce here Henna 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey Humera, your first ff...congrats...


very good start, cont int..😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Great introduction.
liked it.
looking forward to read this ff.
plz cont. soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks Birsty , i'll just update the next part 😉

thanks Ridhijai , here goes the nextr part hope u'll like it 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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sorry doulble post , Enjoy guyz 😉
Edited by sonu4ever - 18 years ago
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Part one :

In Dixit 's house, In Mont Abu:

Bani got up and after taking a shower,dressed herself in a simple blue salwaar kameez went in the pooja room and starts her praying , just then Rano wakes up by hearing her di doing the pooja and goes to take a shower . Bani finishing the pooja turns and saw her mom behind her, so she touched her footh, and her mom gived her Ashiward and took the arti .Then Bani goes in the living to give the arti to her father, who was reading the news paper , he took it and gives her ashiward too.

ND ( Nishikant Dixit ) : acha beta tumne naukri ki talash shuru kari . bani 's father works in polictis, thats' why couldnt help bani to find a job.

Bani: Ji papa , maine ek do compagnies main apply kiya hai.

ND : Good beta, aur yeh dekho , newspaper mein ek AD aya hai , Walia compagny ko ek manager chahiye , shayad wahan bhi apply karke dekhlo

Bani: Walia industries to ek buhot bari compagny papa, aur unke boss to worldwide known hai, aur mujhe to koi experiences bhi nahin to mujhe woh nahin rekhange

ND: Arre lekin first time to sabhi ka hota hai na beta, aur tum bas aply kardo bad mein jo hota hai dekha jaeyga ok , yaylo newspaper usmein se AD ka number dekhe unko phone karlena ok

Bani taking the newspaper : ji papa, phone karloungi , then goes to Rano 's romm and gives her the arthi .

Rano while taking the arthi: Kya huwa di aap itni sad kyun hai , papa ne kuch kaha kya?

Bani: Nahin Rano woh Kya hai na Ke papa chahte hai ke mein WI mein apply karloun

Rano: To Karlo na ismein kaunsi perachani hai

Bani: baat yeh hai rano ke woh ek buhot bari compagny mein kaisee ...

Rano cutting bani : To kya huwa di, aur waise bhi aap uni mein fist ayi hain, apki degrees bhi achi , kyun nahin milagui apko job

Bani: i hope tum thik kaherari ho and they hug each other

even if Bani has lots of degrees she was afraid to aply ther , but rano convinced her , and bani couldnt say no to rano, who always had the last word with her .

Both rano and bani goes downsatirs , while bani was helping her mothe with the breakfast , rano was rading her book as she had and exam today but she's really confident ...

On the other hand , teh sun also rises in WM, but in a different way

Massi: Tony , hum saab yahan breakfast pein agayey, yeh jai kahan rehgaya , jake bula lao usse

Tony: Massi Woh Kya hai ke Main gaya that unhe bulane, likin woh phone par the , bas athe hi hongue.

Massi: thik hai tu rukh, tujhse nahin hoga jai ko bula lana, main khood hi jati hoon

Jigz : Kya Massi aap bhi, Jai bhaiya kal disco se dher se aye the,obviously ab wo sorahahe honge

Massi: Yeh hi to mujhe nahin pasand , jai ka disco main jana , aur agar jata bhi to us Roshni ke saat kyoun, logon se baat karne ka bhi dhan nahin hai usse ,

Daadi: aur buhot burri adatein hai uski, agar tum batane lagoun na to raat hojaregi, jao billo tum jai ko bulla lao.

Maasi : Ji aap thik kehrari hain , mein abhi bulati hoon usse and she went upsatirs.

Jigs : phir se churu hogayi mabharat

Adi: arre jigyassa, aaj tumne kaunsi sarri pehenli?

Jigs: Kyoun ?

Adi : Arre tumhara Tikka match nahin hai isliye

Jigs: arre deko mere tikke mein blue hai , aure thora sa pink bhi , jo meri sari se bilkul match karta hai, aur Adi, ek baat aur mind ur own buisiness .

Adi: Kya Jigyassa , kitne saloun se mein tumhare khandan ka business hi sambhal rahahoon jai ke saath , aur ro aur Ranveer bhi madat rakta hai meri, lekin aaj tumne baat achi ki hai, mein ek aur buisiness churu karat hoon, jiska name hoga Jigyaasa TT .

Jigs : Jigyaasa TT? manti hoon ke meri teeth perfect hai, tumhare jaisse nahin lekin yeh kausna ghatian buisinnes khologue , who bhi mere naam pein?

Adi: Arre Jigyassa Teeth nahin, balke Jigyaasa Textiles aur tikkha, abhi dekho tikka aur sarry match honi chaye na, And both Adi and Daadi laugh.Jigs trow an angry glare at both of them who stops laughing , when Ranveer and Anu also joins them.

Adi: are Sahil nahin utha, usse Uni nahin jana hai Kya ?

Ranveer ; Woh abhi sorarahai mein

Anu : han dad mein gayi thi usse utha ne lekin woh kehraha tha ke uski subha ki class nahin hai, kunki uski teacher bimaar hai.

Ranveer : are woh kaisse hosakta , mujhe to usne kaal kahan ke subha ki class cancelled hogui hai , labs mein kich kharabian thi isliye unhone class cancelled kardi

Adi: Bhai dekho Jigs tumhara beta bilkul tumhare pe gaya hai, excuses dene mein woh first hai, lekin uski akal tumhare pe gayi hai

Jigs in an angry tone: Tumhare kya matlab hai Aditya ?

Adi: Yahi ke kamsekam anu ko aur ranveer ko same excuse to dede ta

Jigs while getting up: Chup karo Adi , mein usse Utha kar lati hoon , woh mera beta hai , merui hi baat manega

Adi : usme koi chak nahein, lekin kya woh mera hi beta hai ?

Jigs throws him a cold stare and said : I hope ke na hota, tab woh intelligent to hota na ,and goes to Sahil room.

Adi daadi , Ranveer and anu then talks while waiting Jai, Massi , Jigs and sahil to come ...

In the meantime in jai's room :

Jai was in his boxer ( sremain setated galz, dont eb exited ) and was laid on his bed, with his bed sheets covering him ( sad nah galz , he's covered )

Jai on the phone : Hey Roshni darling: what's up ? We had a blast na yesterday ?

Roshni : Yep u are right, what's ur programm today ?

Jai: u told me ?

Roshni: i've heard that Nikhil ( a stupid freind of Roshni, dont pay attention , u wont this name again ) was throwing a party because of his engagement , lets' go there ?

Jai: Oh really finnaly, but i pity the girl

Roshni: yay same here , so lets' go ther , u pick at 5 pm sharp , today

Jai: 5 pm

Roshni: Yep his farmhouse is a lil far so wel'll have to go early if we want to reach teher at time

Jai: Damn , but i have a meeting

Roshni: But u cant postponed it no prob na, nothing is more important than me right ( in ur dreams )

Jai : Right hun, but teh deal is very important , i can have a loss of crores if i dont go, but still i 'll manage

Roshni 's eyes popped out after hearing crores : Actually jai , u go and attend this party , we'll go tomorow ... ( thinking about an excuse ) , as he told me .. that he'll throw another party ... for his cousins ..

Jai : His cousins ?

Roshni : .. uhm yeah they live abroad so they'll take some time to come, so we'll go tomorow ok

Jai: Ok hun as u wish, but still we'll go to dinner this night ok ?

Roshni while thinking, till u will attend ur meeting : Of course darlin

Massi knock on jai's door : Jai puttar

Jai shouts : Ji massi

Roshni : Hey dont shout in my ears

Jai : Sorry darling i'll have to go, i'll call u laterz bye, kiss .. and he hang up

Roshni : listen .. thum thum ( teh sounds when someone hang up ) how dre he hang up on me ...

To be continued ...

Hope u guyz like the part, sorry for the boredom, i tried tto give an intro with all the characters .

the first parts will be lame , dont worry the JB parts will come soon 😉

Humera.


Edited by sonu4ever - 18 years ago

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