Kasturi---FanFiction Story part 40 pg 74 - Page 6

Totally LOVED IT!!

Seeing this devious side of Robbie is so exciting!!

I have a request. I made the same request to Davia too...

Please don't take a break for the weekend, the way the serial actually does!!!! 😭. Please post every day of the weekend. That way, Kasturi ke viraha/judaai kaa dard thoda kam ho jaayegaa 😉

Sorry, for being so selfish!!!

What say guys, you all agree with me?????? 😊

Originally posted by: pragalbha

Totally LOVED IT!!

Seeing this devious side of Robbie is so exciting!!

I have a request. I made the same request to Davia too...

Please don't take a break for the weekend, the way the serial actually does!!!! 😭. Please post every day of the weekend. That way, Kasturi ke viraha/judaai kaa dard thoda kam ho jaayegaa 😉

Sorry, for being so selfish!!!

What say guys, you all agree with me?????? 😊

haha awww pragalbhaa..i agree widd u😆  omgg wow thiss fanfic is sooo goodd ..good job augustt!! plzz dooo continue!😳i loved it😃

[QUOTE=pragalbha]Totally LOVED IT!!

Seeing this devious side of Robbie is so exciting!!

I have a request. I made the same request to Davia too...

Please don't take a break for the weekend, the way the serial actually does!!!! 😭. Please post every day of the weekend. That way, Kasturi ke viraha/judaai kaa dard thoda kam ho jaayegaa 😉

Sorry, for being so selfish!!!

What say guys, you all agree with me?????? 😊 [QOUTE/]

thank u for ur wonderfull comments YES I WILL TRY MY BEST TO POST EVERYDAY

 

 

Originally posted by: jess.amit<3

 

haha awww pragalbhaa..i agree widd u😆  omgg wow thiss fanfic is sooo goodd ..good job augustt!! plzz dooo continue!😳i loved it😃

thank u amit next part u will also like surely

NEXT PART I WILL POST TODAY IN EVENING JUZ THE THE LASTPART OF TODAY'S PART IS REMAINING SORRY FOR MAKING U GUYS WAIT

Edited by august_026 - 16 years ago

finally 6th part is here hope u all like it is a lil sad but this sadness is the sign of coming up joy so keep reading

PART 6

seeing them kasturi takes her hand back
robbie is deadly shocked as he has got a current of 250 volt
robbie : aap log
bauji : kasturi humare ghar ki beti hai uss k pass hum nahin aaein ge tu aur koun aaeyga
robbie : ( he is tensed ) nahin nahin
bauji : waise tu yahan kya kar raha hai
robbie : woh uncle kasturi ka accident hogaya tha aur woh
bauji : kis haq se tum yahan aaey ho ya phir tamsha dekhne aaey ho k kaise haal kiya hai tum ne
robbie : nahin app mujhay galat samjh rahe hain
bauji : main tu tumhain shuru se hi janta tha lekin iss kasturi ne mujhay sochne pe majbore kardiya k tum dooseret ameer logoon ki tarah nahin ho par tum bhi waise hi ho apne se chote logoon ki izaat k saath khelna tum jaise logoon ka shouq hota hai
robbie wanted to explain him about but he was not giving him chance to speak
bauji : dekh main terey agay haath jore kar kehta hoon ( robbie tries to to say nahin nahin uncle ) ab humain akela chore dey pehle sey hi humari izaat se khel chuka hai ab bass kar
alka : arre bauji aap iss k samne haath kuin jore rahe yeh aadmi tu haath milane k kabil bahin aur hum apna waqt yahan par kuin barbad kar rahe hain hum yahan kasturi ko leyne aaey thaey so chaliye hum chalte hain
every one leaves except robbie he thinks
robbie ; dammmmm
robbie : kasturi ki family ko bhi abhi aana tha shehh acha khaasa plan kharab kardiya
socha tha yahan se usse wahan lekar jaon ga jahan sirf main woh
robbie also leaves
he is in the car he gets a call from that manager
robbie : hello
manager : sir aap kab tak aarahe hain
robbie : kabhi nahin
manager : ji sir
robbie : arrey wahan akela aaker kya mujhay akele akele date manani hai
manager : magar sir
robbie ; saare arrangments cancel kardo
manager : magar sir
robbie : kya agar magar laga rakha hai kaha na saari arrangments cancel kardo
manager : ji sir
he keeps the phone he reaches home quitly moves to his room he takes out kasturi photo lays on bed looking at her smiling face and says
robbie : kya haas rahi ho itna acha chance tha merey pass tha tum ne woh bhi ley liya par koi baat nahin aaj nahin tu kal sahi haan par ik baat ka dukh hai k agar aaj tumhari family naaaey hoti tu aaj main humari saari problems saari misunderstanding dooor kar deyta par chalo theek hai tumhare liye khuch bhi
devika comes calling robbie he hides the photabehind the pillow and gets up
robbie : ji mom
devika ; robbie beta chal k khana khalo
robbie : chaliye
they have the dinner

at kasturi's house

they make kasturi to sit in her room for resting
her mom is there with her
koushaliya: rab ka lakh lakh shukar hai k tujha zayada injuries nahin aaein aur kal teri engagement bhi tu hai
kasturi : haan ma mujhay yaad hai
koushaliya : waise ik baat poochoon robbie wahan kuin aaya tha
kasturi : maa woh hi mujhay hospital lekar aaey thaey
koushaliya : tu phir tu ne pehle kuin nahin bataya tha bauji uss bechare par itna gusa kar rahe thaey
kasturi : nahin maa main khuch kehti tu aap tu janti hain woh mujh sepehle hi kitna gusa hain main bauji ko aur gusa hoote nahin dekh sakti
koushaliya : jo tum theek samjho acha ab tum soo jao kal jaldi uthna hai
she leaves
AT SABRAWAL HOUSE

raunak comes to robbie and asks kya hou
raunak: arrey robbie tu kahan reh gaya tha ab jaldi bata kya hou
robbie : khuch nahin hou yaar
raunak :matlab
robbie explains him everything raunak is shocked to know about her accident
raunak : robbie tu ne itna sab khuch kiya
robbie : koi faaeda ( benefit ) nahin hou
raunak : agar kasturi ko khuch hojata tu
robbie : tujhay lagta hai main aisa hone deyta hoon
raunak : hmmmm
robbie and raunak talk for little more time then they sleep

IN THE MORNING IN THE OFFICE
robbie is waiting for kasturi raunak comes
robbie : acha hou tu aagaya yeh kasturi kahan hai kahin dikh nahin rahi
raunak is a little tensed
robbie : tu chup kuin hai bol na kahan hai
raunak : woh actually robbie aaj kasturi office nahin aaey
robbie : kuin ! arrey kya usse zayada chote tu nahin aaey
robbie : bol na rauank teri yeh khamoshi mujhay dara rahi hai aakhir aisa kya hogaya
raunak : woh aaj kasturi iss liye nahin aaey kuin aaj uss ki engagement hai
robbie : kya! bass itni si baat tu ne mujhay dara diya
raunak : tujhay koi farq nahin parha
robbie : abbey duffer yeh baat tu ne jo kahi hai iss se jitna mujhay farq parta hai na utna kisi baat se nahin parta
raunak : dekh robbie tu meri samjh se bahir hai tu aakhir karna kya chahta hai
robbie : tujhay kya lagta main yeh hone doonga
raunak looks at him
raunak : nahin
robbie : thanx batane k liye
robbie : aaj main iss engagement ko hone nahin doonga uss k liye chahe mujhay apni jaan bhi kuin na dey ni paare
raunak : whats the plan
robbie explains him everything
raunak : nahin robbie tu aisa nahin karega iss se tujhay jaan ka khatra hai main tujhay aisa nahin karne nahin doonga
robbie : dekh raunak agar woh meri zindagi main nahin tu phir iss zindagi ka kya faaeda (benefit )
rauank tries to say but robbie didn't lets him

at kasturi house

evryone is ready for engagement the party is going on ring ceremony is about to start
the ring ceremony is started rings r present their
robbie is outside the house talking to raunak on phone
raunak : tu janta hai tu kya kar raha hai
robbie : achi tarah se kasturi ko paane k liye agar mujhay khuch bhi karna paare main karoonga agar woh hi nahin hogi tu iss zindagi ka kya kaam ab tu phone rakh wish me luck
raunak :best of luck khayal rakhna
inside the house
rohan picks the ring and is about toinsert it in kasturi's finger
robbie comes
robbie : ik minut MR rohan ( he is moving near them as kasturi is hand in front for rohan to insert ring he holds kasturi hand makes her stand by the side of him )
everyone is shocked
robbie : i m sorry rohan par tum yeh engagement nahin karsakte kuin jis tum engagement karna chahte ho woh kisi aur ki chahat hai
bauji tries to stop him but he says aaj nahin bauji let me talk today
rohan father says : yeh kya mazaq hai
robbie : mazaq nahin uncle sachaey hai . main kasturi se buhat pyaar karta hoon main hi kya hum donoo ik dosery se buhat pyaar karte
kasturi : sir plzz aap yahan se chale jaey jaonga kasturi par apne saath tumhain bhi ley jaonga
before kasturi could say anything he holds her hand and moves kasturi family shouts but they didn't stop because light went off after few minuts light came rohan's family left for ever and they tried to find where robbie took kasturi
outside
robbie makes kasturi sit is car kasturi is shouting : leave main chore dijeye mujhay kahan leyja rahe hain mujhay aap
robbie : janta hoon jo kiya galat kiya par iss waqt bhi agar humne baat na ki tu phir sab khatam hojata main tumhain khona nahin chahta
kasturi : aap car rokiye
it stops at the hill
kasturi fastly gets out and run fowards (but can't go anywhere there was hill so
robbie : kasturi kasturi
robbie : kasturi plzz ik baar meri baat sun lo ik baar
kasturi : mujhay aap se koi baat nahin karni
robbie hold her from both of his arms
robbie : kasturi plzz kya mujhay ik mouqa bhi nahin doo gi . plzz ik baar ik baar kasturi tears r filled in his eyes
robbie : main janta hoon mujh se buhat baari galti hoey hai par mujhay usse theek karne ka mouqa tu do main tum se buhat pyar karta hoon buhat pyaar plzz mujhay maaaf kardo i promise aagay se aisi galti nahin karoonga mujhay maaf kardo
kasturi : maaf kardoon aap ne sirfmerey saath hi nahin meri purii family k saath khela aapn ne merey pyaar thukraya meri feelings meri izaat sab khuch aap ne ley liya aaur aap kehte hain main aap ko maaf kardoon
every one reaches their raunak too robbie was in such a bad condition
kasturi : pyaar karte hain na mujh se uss waqt yeh pyaar kahan gaya tha jab aap ne puri duniya k saamne mujhay kahin ka nahin chora aap ki waja se mere parents ne jaan deyne ki koshish aap ki waja se meri puri zindagi barbad hogaey aur app kehte hain aap ko maaf kardoon
robbie : main janta hoon sab meri galti hai mujhay tum pe bharosa karna chahiye tha par uss waqt haalaat hi aise thaey k main khuch samjh hi nahin aaya
robbie : tum mujhay sirf ik mouqa doo main sab theek kardoonga plzz kasturi plzz
kasturi : bass aap ne kaha meri baaat suno main ne sunn li ab main yahan se jaa rahi hoon
she is about to turn he again holds her hand
robbie : kasturi plzz mujhay aise chore k maat jao main mar jaon ga main jii nahin paon ga
she replies nothing
robbie : theek hai kasturi agar meri zindagi main tum nahin tu iss zindagi ka koi faaeda ( benifit ) nahin ( he leaves her hand she moves infront and robbie taking his steps back he knows their is hill )
they both r taking their steps together but one infront one back
robbie is taking his steps back while i m sorry kasturi i love u
robbie : ( he is now on the edge ) i love u kasturi ( his voice filled with sadness )
suddenly their was a silence she turned their was no one she was horribly scared she shouts sirrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
watching this raunak immidietly goes down calls ambulence while kasturi sits their where she was everyone is shocked from her family too

coming up : robbie is in critical condition par phir bhi woh behoshi ki haalat main bhi kasturi kasturi keh raha hai

luv u all,

rabail

Edited by august_026 - 16 years ago

wow..what a part..
davia n u both r fabulous writers...
do continue..

so fast sofia that is the biggest part till now written by me oh god

well thank u

Edited by august_026 - 16 years ago

Originally posted by: august_026

waiting for ur comments on this this was really tough to write it has become soo big it would have been a lil difficulty for guys to read but i had to complete the scene slowly slowly it became thatmuch but hope u guys enjoy it

i can read anything ...no matter how long if rk r together 😳 😳

👏 he kidnapped her that was good....
i know nothing must have happen with robbie as he maust have net over down...
all acting pls continue.. if the lie is said for good then it is good..

pls conitnue sooon.
davia

Originally posted by: davia389

👏 he kidnapped her that was good....
i know nothing must have happen with robbie as he maust have net over down...
all acting pls continue.. if the lie is said for good then it is good..

pls conitnue sooon.
davia

 

he kidnapped her infront of everyone

 

davia u rad the coming up that is written robbie's condition is critical he will be saved but he is still critical

Edited by august_026 - 16 years ago