Kasturi---FanFiction Story part 40 pg 74 - Page 4

nice FF..kasturi has a guts..i hope robbie come fast..
waiting for next part.. 👏 👏

thanx u soo much guys for ur gr8 response
most of u liked the robbie and raunak's conversation these lines r my fav also cause they r little funny

PART 4

Rohan : kya
rohan : ahaan samjh gaya tum chahti ho k main iss rishte se na kardoon
kasturi : nahin
rohan: tu phir
kasturi : woh mujhay chore kar chala gaya
rohan : oh ho so sad
kasturi : main sirf aap ko sach sach batana chahti thi main nahin chahti k kisi rishte ki buniyad jhoot ho
rohan is about to say something tanu comes chaliye aap ko neeche bula rahe hain
kasturi looks at rahul
rohan says lets go
they come sit in the hall
rohan's parents ask rohan what u say
he thinks and then says haan as he says haan kasturi eyes which were down they were up
rohan dad says : tu phir humari taraf se yeh rishta paka kasturi beta tum khuch nahin kaho gi
kasturi : meri khushi meri ghar waloon ki khushi main hai main iss rishtey k liye taeyar hoon
every is happy they serve sweets n all that

AT SABARWAL HOUSE
they r having their dinner
devika looking at robbie who is looking change now completely
devika : (in her heart ) robbie ko hou kya hai yeh itna badla badla kuin lag raha hai
while she is thinking robbie asks
robbie : kya hou mom app kya soch rahi hain
devika : khuch nahin bass tumhare liye soch rahi thi
robbie : mujhay kya hou hai main theek hoon khush hoon aur kya
devika : nahin main tu bass
robbie : mom aap bhi khamkha sochti rehti hain ab khana kha khaeye warna thanda ho jaey ga
devika and robbie both give a smile to each other at the same time raunak enters the home robbie looks at like his eyes were asking from raunak what happened
raunak winks robbie with a smile seeing this robbie also smiling and winks him with both eyes
then they again become serious as devika don't knows about their patch up
raunaks mother : kahan thaey tum raunak
raunak : maa woh ik zaroori kaam kaam tha ( raunak and robbie look at each other ) bass wahi kar k aaraha hoon
she again asks : aisa kounsa kaam tha jo tumhain itni dair hogaey
raunak : bas mom tha koi aisa kaam jis ka hona buhat zaroori tha
raunak's mother : khair choro chalo khana khalo
raunak : ji mom mujhay bhi buhat bhook lagi hai
devika makes a strange face when raunak is talking to her mother
they finish their dinner
after some time when devika goes to sleep robbie come to raunak's room
raunak : kahan tha robbie kab se intezar kar raha hoon tera
robbie : woh mom bethi thi meray saath so nahin aapaya chal jaldi bata kya pata chala
he takes a file from drawer gives it to robbie
robbie : he looks at the file doesn't opens it ) abbey duffer main ne tumhain office ki file nahin mangwaey thi
raunak : tu khol k tu dhek
robbie : thanx buddy he gives him right arm hug then sits and starts checking the file first their is the photo of rahul he takes it out looks at him
raunak : rahul naam hai woh kya karta hai kahan rehta hai kahan jaata hai uss k kitne family members hain sab hai iss file main
robbie : hmmm ( he stand up looking at the photo )
he keeps it in the file
robbie : ( looking at the papers of the file ) yaar tu ne itni saari information kaise haasil ki
raunak : bas ik detective ko kasturi k ghar ka pata aur khuch extra paise diye
robbie : he laughs chalo meri dosti ka khuch tu assar hou
they again laugh
then robbie leaves
robbie is sitting on his bed reading the file after he finishes it
then again he gets the photo
robbie: i m sorry MR ROHAN janta hoon kasturi tumhain buhat achi lagi hogi aakir kaar woh mera pyar hai par woh tumhari nahin hosakti kuink woh tu meri hai hum donnon ik doserey se buhat pyar karte hain so usse tu main tumhain nahin dey sakta
he again keeps it in the file and keep the file on the side of the bed he is going o sleep he keeps his head on pillow and thinks about kasturi gets her in his dreams

IN THE MORNING AT OFFICE

robbie is sitting in his cabbin dicussing some project with some one
after some time raunak comes in robbie's office
raunak : hey yaar kaisa hai
robbie : theek hoon
raunak : aur bata kasturi se baat hoey
robbie : abhi tak tu nahin par hogi aaj hi
raunak : office ka time tu khatam hone wala hai aur tu tu janta hai woh jaldi chali jaati hai
robbie : haan janta hoon woh nikal ne waali hogi par woh bus tak nahin pohanch paey gi kaise tu woh mujh par chore dey
raunak : he looks at him strangly
robbie calls some one tells him something to do he keeps the phone says sorry kasturi i have to do this tumharey dil main phir se wahi position paane k liye main khuch bhi karoonga janta hoon jo jaga tumne mujhay di woh tum kisi aur ko nahin do gi aur main deyne bhi nahin doonga .

coming up : kasturi and robbie in hospital one of them has suffered from accident

don't get upset with this part because their is everything which u guys r expecting so don't stop reading

luv u all
rabail

Edited by august_026 - 16 years ago

waithing for the next update pls continue soon.

davia

Edited by davia389 - 16 years ago

Originally posted by: davia389

waithing for the next update pls continue soon.

davia

DAVIA ur ff is so cool even much much better then mine really loved it juz rite now i rad it

its shocking to know that u like mine ff as ur ff is best then mine

well thank u soo much for it

great story, please continue soon

swati

Originally posted by: nailaqureshi

no both r doing good job davia n august 😃

i agree both FF r gr8!!

august_026,

hey, I just read all the parts of your fanfic. I think it is great!!! I will now read both your's and davia's. I think both these alternate stories are great.

Please continue writing.

Thanks.

Edited by pragalbha - 16 years ago

awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee parts
plz cont soon dear
can't wait 2 read da next part

well my name is rabail

thank u every one for ur lovely comments i personly like davia's ff also it is really sweet n funny
next part will be posted in ma next post

luv u all

rabail

Edited by august_026 - 16 years ago