New Fan Fiction-Kuch Naa Kaho - Page 2

but your story sounds interesting!!! 😃

Okay..i will post my first part in some time.. and sorry if i bore you..its the first part..its just a intro and a way to get the story going 😉

Part 1

The Beautiful girl comes out of the bathroom...she is wearing a blue bathrobe. Her face still slightly wet, she gets her towel and pats it on her face, under her chin... She looks towards the clock and heads towards her suit case...she digs in the suit case, trying to find something to wear... she takes out casual black pants, a red shirt which says "I'm Feeling...." in diamonds. With that, she takes her jewerly box. She quickly changes into her cloths and heads towards the dresser and sits down. She grabs a natural color lip gloss and spreads it across her lips. Then puts on her contacts, a sweet honey/hazel color and fixes her eye liner. She opens her jewelery box and takes out a pair of dangeling diamond earrings. She taps on her earring and says - Beautiful As Ever. A Smile Spreads Across Her Face, Right then, her cell phone rings..she quickly turns as her straight hair with soft curls hit the other side of her face..she runs towards her bed and picks it up..she checks the ID and gets excited..

Jassi Beta...

J- Mamma! Aap Kaise Ho...aur Papa

Amrit: Beta Mein Teek Hoo aur vo bhi...Tu Kaasi Hai..Sab Kuch Teek Hai Na...

J: Mamma, Sab Kuch Teek Hai... (after a 3 second pause or so) Mamma, mein ka actually late ho rahi hoon...mein aapko baad mein phone karlu gi...

Amrit: Teek Hai Beta..Aapna Dhian Rakha

J: Bye..I love you....

Jassi disconnects the Phone, Grabs Her "guess" purse and heads heads towards the door... she stops and looks back... she goes back to her suit case and takes out a black dupatta and heads outside..she goes into the elevtor...she heads to the receptionest and hands in her keys...

Her Car Stops In front of a mandir. She Takes the dupatta around her head and steps outside... as she walks towards the stairs of the mandir people run up to her for her autograph. She smiles and gives her autograph to everyone and heads off. she takes off her shoes and steps inside the mandir.. she folds her hand infront of the god and prays

J- Ganeshji...mein kal raat ko mumbai aye hoo, iss anjane shear mein sirf ek insan ko janti hoo..mujhe aapka ashirwad chaia ke sab kuch yaha pe teek hoo...

Jassi Stands Up and takes blessings from the pandit... and starts to head back...and suddenly the pandit says - Ruko Beti..

Jassi turns around - Ji Panditji

The panditji takes a small murti of ganeshji and gives it to Jassi. - Ye lo beti, yeh tumari raksha zaroor karege...

Jassi takes the murti, takes blessings and leaves. Jassi Puts the murti in her purse and wears her shoes... she heads on down but cant see her car anywhere...she walks to the place that she had parked it....

J to herself- Mene Yaha he to park ki thi...kaha gayi...

Jassi looks around again and sees a board which says "NO PARKING AT ANYTIMES"

J to herself madly - S***! Aab Mein Kya Karu

Edited by Princess - 18 years ago

Cool beginning Mallika!!!  I like it very much!!!  Please continue!!😃

Thats a good begginning, very interesting!! I hope you continue soon! 😛

Thanx i will cont soon! 😉

that was very good plz continue soon

Part 2

 

J to herself- Mene Yaha he to park ki thi...kaha gayi...

Jassi looks around again and sees a board which says "NO PARKING AT ANYTIMES"

J to herself madly - Shit! Aab Mein Kya Karu

Jassi looks around to see if she can seek any help...Right then, her cell phone rings...

J- Hey Gaurav...

G- Jassi Hows It Going...

J- (Angrely) Not Good...

G- Kyu kya hua...any help?

J- um....i guess i can use some....

Jassi tells gaurav about everything...and gaurav says that he would be comming...

A few minutes later a black car stops next to jassi...he pulls the window over...- Jassi...

jassi turns around..its Gaurav! He is wearing blue jeans, a while shirt and a brown jacket on top, with light brown glasses..looking super hot...

Jassi opens the door and sits down..

J - Thankgod..tum agaye..(angryly) Yeh...ye...what kind of place is this! meri jadi...it got towed!

G- Jassi Chill, agar tumne galat jaga park karni hai to yeh to hoga he naa...

Jassi roles her eyes- Whatever

Gaurav laughs at seeing jassi mad - tum bhi naa... kaha jana hai...

J- Gulmohar

Gaurav Drops Her there...

J- tum mere liya ek aur kam kar sakte hoo...meri gadi...

G- Teek hai..teek hai..

Jassi gets out of the car and leaves....

G- Kasi Ladki hai..thanx bhi nahie bola...

he leaves off..

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In Gulmohar

Jassi comes inside..and everyone looks at her in amazment saying "kitni kubsurat hai" to each other...jassi walks over to the receptionest - Mr. Suri's Office

Rec- straight to the left...

J- thanks

Jassi gets to Mr. Suri's Office when the the secutiry stops her

Sec - Excuse me..aap andar nahie jaa sakti..

jassi angerly walks over to her

J- What? Mein Andar Nahie Jaa Sakti!

Sec- Sorry, he isnt here at the moment..Plz take a seat over here...

J- If he isnt here at the moment..yeh meri problem nahie hai....and no..i will not have a seat

Sec - As you wish...

Jassi is going crazy now...she looks over at her and yells at her - SICK!

Right then Mrs. Suri comes... Simren, whats going on...

jassi turns around... - Aunty!

Ila- Jassi Beta Tum...

J- Aap Yaha Kase...

Ila- Aao..hum andar ake baat karte hai....

Ila and Jassi Go inside Mr. Suri's Cabin

Ila- Jassi..Tum yaha?

J- Vo..mein iss company ke liya modeling kar rahi hoo...aur aap?

Ila laughs...- Ye Mere Bete ki company hai..

J - Oh..i'm sorry..Aapka Beta?

Ila- Haan mera beta... Ar...

Jassi's cell rings right then

J- Excuse me...

Jassi is talking on the phone when Mr. Suri comes in...

Mr Suri - Hey Mom!

Jassi turns around and is shocked... she turns off the phone - ARMAAN!

Armaan is wearing a pink shirt, with black pants and a coat. His hair dark brown...his cute romantic eyes brown....And his cute, super cute...smile

A- JASSI!

Ila- Jassi, Yeh Hai Mera Beta.. Armaan, Armaan Suri, Gulmohar Ka owner

Jassi looks over at Ila- Kyaa? Beta? Armaan? Mr. Suri? Gulmohar Ka Owner?

****Edited by the Moderator****

Just adjusted the font size. It was too small to read.

Edited by Princess - 18 years ago

Wow!!!  Simply too Mallika!!!....plz continue yaar😊

Wow mallika.... that was great... please continue......😊