(FF) Modern Love Story (2) Epi 79: Pg 9 - Page 5

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Posted: 16 years ago
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first of all GOOD LUCK ON YOUR EXAMS!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ and second of all.....post whatever you can!!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ and that too ASAP!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 16 years ago
#42
i think after yr xams. cos i dont wanna b blamed if u get distracted. lol. all the best! (:
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Posted: 16 years ago
#43
Hi guys, thanks for all your best wishes for my exams. I'm pleasd to tell you that they went well and that my place in university is locked.
I know I haven't updated but after exams I got busy with University stuff and I'm moving to so everything's a big huge stressfull mess.
To be very honest with you, with how KS is going these days, I'm really uninspired to write. None of my ff couples are actually together.
Thanks to all the people who PM'd me and asked me to continue. It really inspired me.
If you guys are interested, then only I'm gonna continue this ff. If no one's reading this, then I honmestly will not even bother. So more updates totally depend on your votes.


EPISODE 78

Tarun: Lets go, we are getting late for the mandir.

Roshni: We?

Tarun: I forgot o mention? I'm going with you.

Roshni: I forgot to mention? I usually meet your mom there.

Tarun: Oh!

Roshni: (with a sweet smile) Exactly.

Tarun: Well I'm still coming

Roshni raised her eyebrow at him giving him a sceptical look.

Roshni: Fine. Then don't complain about your or my parents teasing, because you ask for it.

Meanwhileโ€ฆ

Jai: Okay so I don't get any time alone with you at all till we're married?

Bani: Pretty much.

Jai: Ab hamari shaadi kab hogi?

Bani: In a month. You approved the date last night jai.

Jai: One month? What was I thinking?

Bani: Jai, cut the drama. And anyway, a month isn't that far away. Dekhte hi dkhte we will be married.

Jai: A month is really far away Bani. Mera bas chale to we will be married tonight. I can't wait.

Bani: You know, you are probably the first guy to say that. Most guys usually escape from marriage.

Jai: Yes, but most guys don't have you.

Meanwhileโ€ฆ

Rashi was sitting on a couch in the suite reading a novel totally ignoring Ranveer.

Ranveer: Rashi I'm rally sorry jaan. Kuch to kaho.

Still no response.

Ranveer: Okay I'll make it up to you. How about I cook dinner tonight?

Rashi: (Raising an eyebrow) You cook?

Ranveer: Anything to get you to forgive me.

Meanwhileโ€ฆ

Tarun parked his car outside the mandir and him and Roshni headed inside.
As usual Anjali was waiting for Roshni at the entrance. There was no mistaking from her huge grin that she had seen Tarun with Roshni.

Anjali: Hi Rosh beta. Tarun tum yahan?

Tarun: Yeah mom. I felt like coming to the mandir today.

Anjali: You felt like coming to the mandir? Since when has that started happening? You never liked coming to the mandir.

Tarun: Well I didn't want Rosh to come alone so I thought I'd escort her.

Anjali: So sweet. But Roshโ€ฆ

Tarun: (cutting her off) Mom aren't we here to pray?

Roshni: Yeah let's go.

They all stood together and prayed. Tarun glanced over at Roshni and just kept looking. She had a slight smile on her face, but an otherwise peaceful expression. Her eyes were closed and her lips moving silently.
Tarun gasped in pain when he got a sharp nudge on the ribs from his mom. She had caught him staring at Roshni.
Tarun gave her an annoyed look and continued to pray.

A little while laterโ€ฆ

They were all heading down the mandir stairs together when Tarun edged closer to his mom.

Tarun: (Whispering) Why did you nudge me so hard?

Anjali: Because beta you were watching Roshni pray.

Tarun: So?

Anjali: So I don't want any buri nazar on my bahu.

Tarun: Buri nazar? Aur mein?

Roshni: What are you guys talking about?

Anjali: You beta.

Roshni: What about me?

Tarun: Mom doesn't want buri nazar on you so I'm not allowed to look at you anymore.

Roshni: Oh great! Thanks aunโ€ฆ mom.

Anjali: (Beaming) No problem beta.

Tarun: Rosh tum bhi?

Roshni: Haan. Kyon nahi jaan?

Tarun: I can see what marriage is going to be like.

Roshni: (Grinning) I'm going to have fun!

Tarun: (Grumbling) Come on Rosh we have to go back to work.

Meanwhileโ€ฆ

Rashi, still a bit pissed was sitting out on the balcony of their room and enjoying the gentle breeze which held just a slight chill. She took a deep breath and smelt something burning.
Suddenly alarmed she rushed to the kitchen to see Ranveer struggling with a roti which was half-burnt.
Rashi rushed up to Ranveer, threw the half-black roti into the sink and then observed Ranveer's slightly scorched hand.

Rashi: Tumhara dimag kharab hai kya? Tum kitchen mein kya kar rahe the?

Ranveer: Mein tumhare liye khana bana raha tha.

Rashi: Kyon?

Ranveer: Because I thought that would cheer you up and then you'd forgive me.

Rashi: Oh Ranveer, it was a horrible joke to play, but I don't want you to und up hurting yourself, because then I'd really be upset.

Ranveer: (Suggestively, wiggling his eyebrows) Well you could teach me then.

Rashi: (Grinning slyly) Sure but I get to hold the spoon!

Ranveer: Okay with me. (Slipping his arms around her) I have other things to hold.



So please tell me guys wether you are still intesrested in my ff. If not I'll just get this post locked.
If you want me to continue, then I promise updates will be more frequent. And JB wedding coming up soon!
Please give me your feedback!

Yuks
Edited by queenyuks - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Double post ๐Ÿ˜ณ Edited by queenyuks - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#45
the update was long due but you have done justice to that
lovely update enjoyed reading it ...............
update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#46
hi
gr8 part ๐Ÿ‘
cont. sooon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#47
Hey Yuks..finally u back n happy that u have done well in ur exams...
Haila..Tarun tho abhi se joroo ka gulam ban gaya..bcosm e bodyguard.. ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ..

Poor Jai...Bani is not even giving him enuf time n he is bcoming a devadas ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ..Sabar kar Jai, sabar kar...sabar ka phal meetha hotha hai ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰

Ranveer is sho sweet..cooking to manaofy wife..hmm..abhi yeh dono kitchen mein khana tho pakaney walein nahi hain..aur kuch hee pakney wala hai ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†

Pls continue..I like ur FF very much as all the couples r happy n in love here unlike Mayii's which is going down the road..
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Posted: 16 years ago
#48
Great part.
loved it.
plz cont. soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#49
great part... good to see that you have done well in your exmaz.. pls continue soon. cannot wait for the next part..
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Posted: 16 years ago
#50
good to see u back.
great part and please continue soon

swati