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mehvishrainbow2 thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago

Part-14

Next day Jassi went to Mr.Suri office

Mr.Suri:Hi Jassi

Mr.suri:May I Help You

Jassi:My best Nandu want a job

Mr.suri:Sure, I have one opening and if he really want it then tell him to come tomorrow and meet here in my office

Jassi:Thank You So much sir

Mr.Suri:No Problem

Armaan:hi dad,how r you?

Mr.suri:I'm Fine Armaan

Armaan:Dad I need your car

Mr.Suri:Why?

Armaan:My car is in workshop and i will bring Raj with me

Armaan:so I can bring my car back from workshop

Mr.suri:ok

To be continue....

 

mehvishrainbow2 thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago

Part-15

Armaan and Raj went to workshop to get a car back

Workshop owner saied your car still not fix because it's need to fix a lot of things in it

Armaan say you told me on phone that my car is fix and now you are saying it's not fix

Later Armaan get into big fight with workshop owner and Raj try his best to stop him from fighting

The workshop owner say what is wrong with this man

Please Mr.Raj take him away from here or i will call Cop

Raj say ok but fix it tomorrow and workshop owner say don't bring this man again here

Raj say sure

Raj say come on Armaan let go

To be continue.....

mehvishrainbow2 thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago

Part-16

Raj:Armaan what's wrong with you

Armaan:I have call this man and he saied your car is fix so come tomorrow

Armaan:then i went next he say i'm sorry sir it's not fix yet

Raj:then what happened next

Armaan:he doing same thing again and again

Raj:Armaan plz cool down

Armaan:how i cool down

Armaan:he is saying this for about 2 week

Armaan:I need my car back

Raj:ok

Raj:i will speak to him tomorrow

Jassi saw this all and get upset about this and come to Armaan and Raj

They are suprise to see her there

To be continue....

cutelovelygirl thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago

Nice to read pls continus.. I m curious to no whats Jassi doing in Wrokshop

mehvishrainbow2 thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago

Workshope owner is Jassi older brother and Armaan and Raj didn't know about this

mehvishrainbow2 thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago

Part-17

Jassi's older brother left home long time ago because he got fight with his father when Jassi was 4 year old and Billu didn't told about his older brother to Jassi

Also Billu told his wife and mother to not talk about Aman at home and don't tell about him to jassi too

They all hid this 7 year and one day jassi heard this from bebe and she come inside bebe room

ask her why you hid this from me

Bebe I'm sorry but your father don't want us to speak about your older brother

Jassi say I want to meet him and you know where he is?

Bebe say yes i know ,he own workshop here and told her workshop

Jassi say i know where is this workshop

To be continue....

Aabha thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
Hmm...sounds a bit like K3G storylinešŸ˜ƒ....and like my grandparent's pastšŸ˜­šŸ˜­....it's real, that's why I like it!!!  Go Mehvish!!!


AabhašŸ˜Š
mehvishrainbow2 thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago

Part-18

Jassi went to workshop to meet her older brother but she stop by workshop gate

Jassi bring her car in workshop

Aman:Miss can i help you

Jassi:Sure

Jassi:My car giving me some problem so can you fix it

Aman:I will see it now and tell you what wrong with your car

Jassi:ok

Aman check Jassi car and he say there is nothing wrong with car but it's doesn't start

Aman:I will try to fix it for you today

Jassi:Thank's

Next moring Jassi come again and he say what happened now

Aman:is car going good

Jassi:yes

Aman:good

After meeting like 6 time and when jassi come for 7th time

Jassi:Hi Mr.Aman Walia

Aman:How you know my full name?

Jassi:I know you very well

Aman:how?

Jassi:Are you Mr.Balwant Walia older son?

Aman:what?how you know my father name?

Jassi:I'm her younger brother

Aman:you mean you are my sister

Jassi:that right

Aman:i see that why you break the car wire so i can fix it for you

Jassi:you know that

Aman:yes

Jassi:i'm sorry

Aman:It's ok

They both talk togther and then have lunch togther

To be continue....

mehvishrainbow2 thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago

Aabha I'm sorry for your grandparents and thank's for liking my story

Have you ever write a fan fiction here

What is your real name and where you from?

mehvishrainbow2 thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago

Part-19

When Armaan get into fight with Aman(workshop owner)that time Jassi come to meet his older brother

Aman:That man don't have any manner to talk to people

Aman:now i will not fix his car

Aman is getting so mad at Armaan

Jassi:kool down brother

Aman:ok

Jassi:he is my boss

Aman:what?you work for him

Jassi:yes you heard me right

Aman:that man is mad

Jassi:no he is not mad man

Jassi:he is good and you make him mad

Aman:anyway

Jassi:when you are comming back home?

Aman:ever

Jassi:why?

Aman:ask papjee

Jassi:ok i will ask him today

They say bye to each other jassi go back home

To be continue....