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Prologue


Set after the divorce of Abhira & Armaan. Abhira had here handed the divorce papers after the Charu incident....He was not in mood to divorce Abhira....Just before marriage Armaan realizes that he has fallen for Abhira and she was not just any "responsibility for him". However now that he has realized the tougher part is convincing Abhira....Who has hardened herself more and more with each passing day...Abhira has been staying in Women's hostel,has completed her LLB and is now working full time with Dev Shekhawat and is also pursuing her masters......Wooing his back is not the situation Armaan Poddar expected himself to be in.....


The story will be their journey outside their married life....Here there was no deal with Dadisa...


P.S-Please suggest the name of the story.....

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Posted: 1 months ago
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Charecter Sketch


Abhira Akshara Sharma-Abhira has made herself away from Armaan and rest of the family....She is heartbroken but it is not Abhira's nature to shown her wounds to anybody else....Except Madhav she is not in touch with anybody.Unknown to her,Armaan Poddar has realized that he is head over heels with his now ex-wife....Abhira knew about Armaan's marriage to Ruhi and was heartbroken and angry that Armaan never mentioned that Ruhi was his chitwali ladki......She has slowly started to get her anger back on anger and is slowly coming out of her heart break....


Armaan Poddar-A Tortoise in real sense.Has realized that he has fallen for his now ex-wife.Breaks his wedding with Ruhi and tells Kaveri everything about his past with Ruhi.....he is extremely angry with himself for not realizing his on time...He knows that convincing Abhira is going to be a hellish job especially since he has broken her heart....


Ruhi Birla- Finally Karma has hit back at Ruhi and now she is going to get all the pain she gave to Abhira...Her heart breaks into millions of pieces when Armaan breaks the wedding announcing that he is in love with Abhira....She doesnt know how to get out of her heart break.Manish is too angry on her to talk since everybody comes to know that Ruhi had designed Armaan and Abhira's breakup.....Everybody is disgusted with her....

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Posted: 1 months ago
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Looking forward. 

My suggestion - Road to redemption 

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Posted: 1 months ago
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Good one !!

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Posted: 1 months ago
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Excited to read more

Story sounds amazing 

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The plot sounds extremely exciting and the one I'm waiting for very eagerly. Ruhi needs to get her dues very soon because she's done some beyond vile things in her mad obsession. It would be disgusting if she's left unscathed after all the agony she caused Abhira. Looking forward for further chapters 🤍

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Posted: 1 months ago
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Totally different concept 

Update soon 

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Posted: 29 days ago
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Chapter 1–Of Realization

 

Armaan stared angrily at Ruhi.Nobody could stop the anger that was about to burst from Armaan Poddar today..Dadisa had decided to get him and Ruhi married after Abhira divorced him...Decided was the wrong word,had forced him....But today he had absolutely enough.The chorus Gang seeing their Armaan bhai angry smirked...Today Ruhi Birla Goenka was gone,nobody could save her......Charus miled seeing Karma bit back at Ruhi.She had tampered with her ambitions,caree rand most of all played with her bhai and bhabhi’s marriage...

 

Armaan(angrily)-How dare you ? Himmat kase hui tumhari ye sab karne ki ? How low can you actually stoop Ruhi.....Tumhare khwaishe poori karne ke liye tumne meri aur Abhira ka rishta todawa diya......Tum iss duniya ki sabse ghatiya auratho....Abhira needed me..Uske exams baaki the...She hadn’t even secured a proper job....

 

Dadi sa(shocked)-Ruhi tumne hamare Rohit ko dhokha kaise diya ? Agar Armaan mana kar chukka that oh tum apne parivaar se keh kar ye rishta todva deti.....Tumhari vajah se Rohit,Armaan dono ki zindagi,shaadi sab kuch barbaad hogaya.....(looking at Armaan)-Kya tum isse sach mai...

 

Armaan(not letting her complete)-Bilkul nai dadisa ....Na jaane kabse par Ruhi se me bahut pehele move on ho chukka tha....Aapki wajah se mai ye shaadi kar raha tha.....Mujhe isse koi rishta jodne mai koi interest nai hai....

 

Charu(snickering)-Ha bhai ko kaise pasand ho gi Ruhi....Bhai toh Abhira didi se pyaar karte hai.Hai na bhai....

 

Armaan(out of words and confused)-Woh mai....

 

Kiara(explaining)-Soch ye na bhaiyya....Jab Abhira didi ko chot lagti thi toh aapki saas rukh jaati thi.....Aap ghar walo se tak lad gaye unke liye....Aisa toh pehle kabhi aapne nai kiya....

 

Vidya(fondly remembering)-Aur jab uska accident hua tha....tab uska haal dekh kartera kya haal hua tha bhul gaya......

 

Charu(exclaiming)-Oh god bhai aap toh sach mai tortoise ho.....Kitna waqt lagate hoto realize that you are in love with Abhira....

 

Krish(knowingly)-In sab cheezo ka koi matlab nai hai aab Charu ......Abhira didi ke gusse ka lava hum sab dekh hi chuke hai.......And frankly speaking Abhira didi deserves somebody jo unse itna saara pyaar kare....unhe samjhe.....Aur unka nature dekhte hui mujhe nai lagta Abhira didi zyada time single rahege.....She will also get married soon to somebody.....

 

Madhav(smiling)-Ha toh mai khud doodh duga uske liye ladka.....She deserves all the happiness in the world....

 

Armaan(angrily)-BAS kijiye aap log.....Aapne hi ghar ki bahu ki koi wedding plan karta hai bhala....

 

Manisha(sarcastically)-Par woh toh tumhe divorce de chuki hai.....

 

Phuphasa(angrily)-Mai kab se yahi toh bolne ki koshish kar raha tha ki ye shaadi nai ho sakti kyuki in dono ka talaq ab tak nai hua hai......Armaan ki signature mai kuch technical issues hai....Abhira abhi bhi bahu hai hamare ghar ki bahu hai....

 

Charu(snickering)-Technical issues toh hoge hi na papa.....Bhai ke toh haat hi kaap rahe the divorce papers sign karte waqt......Waise aap itna bhadak kyu rahe hai bhai.....I mean Abhira kabhi na kabhi toh shaadi.....

 

Armaan(angrily)-STOP it....Abhira ki wedding planning karna band karoo.......I know i feel something for her Charu....Isliye divorce nai dena chahta tha.....

 

Ruhi(with tearful eyes)-Armaan how could you ?


Charu(mocking)-Aww Ruhi ko bura laga.....Karma is a bitch Ruhi....Jab mera pyaar poora nai hone diya toh mai aapna hisaab toh karugi hi nai........Sab kuch aapki wajah se hui hai....Aapne mere bhai bhabhi ka ghar barbaad karne ki koshish ki......Aapko pata ha aap jaise ladki ko kya kehte hai.....HOMEBREAKER......Khud ke koi ambitions nai hai isiliye meri education ruka di....mara kaam rookva diya......You deserve every bad that happens toyou......Aap ka pyaar kabhi poora nai hoga....

 

Suwarna(angrily)-Charu Ruhi aab bhi Rohit ke patni hai,tumhari bhabhi....

 

Vidya(angrily)-Bilkul nai....Rohit aab wapas nai aayega....Toh aab aap Ruhi ko aapne paas rakh sakete hai....Mere bĂŞte aur bahu ka ghar tod diya.....Abhira kitni akeli hogi socha hai aapne.....Dil tod diya uska....

 

Krish(angrily)-Humari bhabhi ke toote hui dil ki wajah Ruhi didi hai.....Rohit bhaiyya chale gaye uski bhi reason I am sure ye hi hogi......Warna bhabhi toh bhai se aapni dil......

 

Suddenly Krish stopped talking after taking elbow from Manisha.....Armaan became alert...Did Abhira love him....What did he do....He was so angry at himself...What the hell did he do.....He signed Krish toh speak forward but Manisha chachi was nodding him no....

 

Armaan(sadly)-Chachi sa please bolne dijiye Krish ko....Please bata mujhe.....

 

Krish(confessing)-Ha bhabhi aapse pyaar karti hai.....But aab na situation badal gayi hai bhai.....Unka saara pyaar na unke gusse ke niche daab gayahai......She is very very angry at how you handled everything.....Charu aur Devke bare mai....

 

Armaan(sadly)Kya kar diya maine ? Abhira kaha hai ? Hostel main na ?

 

Charu(nodding)Nai.Bhabhi Kasauli gayi hai....Unke papa ka shraddhh hai aaj....Uske liye....She will be back in 3 days.....Bhai tayaar ho jao....Lava will burstall over you....

 

Suwarna and Manish became aware at Kasauli’s name.And today also happened to be Abhinavji’s death anniversary....Was she their Akshu and Abhinav’s daughter.....Suwarna and Manish glanced at each other.Should they even ask Armaan about Abhira’sparents.....Manish mentally hoped that Abhira would not be their grandchild because that would mean that Akshu would be dead......Manish decided to ask about Abhira’s parents.They had to know to if their Kartik and Naira’s daughter was dead.....Ohh what would he answer to Kartik.....Suwarna was thinking that there were all the chances that Abhira could be Akshu’s daughter.....She remembered how Manishji felt like Abhira was just like Naira and even looked like Naira.....

 

Suwarna(hesitatingly)-Armaan,Abhira ki parents ka naam kya  tha beta ?

 

Armaan(confused)-Aapko kyu janna hai....? Meri wife ki information ?

 

Manish(hesitatingly)-Because there is a chance that we might be related Armaan.....Please batao.....

 

Armaan(stunned)-Akshara Sharma and Abhinav Sharma....

 

Manish sat down with a thud..Their granddaughter was right in front of their eyes and they didn’t recognize her....Tears started flowing from Suwarna and Surekha’s eyes....Their Akshara was dead and they couldn’t even see her one last time....They regretted their decisions right now but those regrets were of no use.....Ruhi closed her eyes....Her Akshu masi was dead.....Abhira was her sister....She remembered Abhir being so excited about arrival of his new babysister.....What had she done.... ? She tried to hold Manish but Manish shovedher hand away.....It was because of Ruhi that Akshara had went away,her sacrifice all went to waste....

 

Manish(tears flowing)-Hamari Akshu,Suwarna chali gayi hame chod kar......She is gone.....

 

Suwarna(crying)-Abhira nazar ke samne thi hamri and we couldn’t even recognize her.....Hamari Akshara aur Abhinavji ki beti.......last memory of our ABhinavj iand we couldn’t even recognize her.....

 

Vidya(stunned)-Aap jaante the Abhira ki Ma ko ?


Suwarna(revealing)-Akshara poti thi hamari....Abhira Par natin hai hamari.....

 

Armaan(angrily)-Toh phir mam akele kyu thi ? Why was Abhira alone ?

 

Ruhi narrated everything about how Akshara was responsible for her mother’s death.....Ruhi was remorseful, she never wanted Akshara to die...Abhira.....What did she do with her....Armaan was in state of disbelief......His guru could do no such thing......He was angry at Goenkas for doing such a heinous thing.....Not just Armaan even the Poddars were disgusted atthem.....How could they throw out their pregnant granddaughter.....

 

Armaan(angrily)-Mai ye baat kabhi nai manooga that Akshara mam could do suchthing......Guru thi woh meri......Mere liye goli khai thi unhone....She sacrificed her life for me......

 

Manish(angrily)-Nai kiya tha usne kuch........Sab kuch Ruhi ki wajah se huatha......(crying)-Tumhari wajah se Aarohi ka accident hua that Ruhi.....Akshara took the blame for you and I let her.......Meri galti ki sazah meri Abhira ne bhukti hai........All of Akshu’s sacrifice waste......

 

Ruhi was stunned.She was the reason her matashree died....How could she.....She killed her own mother.....She also lost her Akshu masi and Abhira hated her.....Ruhi stumbled while walking back to her room at Goenka House......Manish and Suwarna were devasted.....Akshu.....What would he tell Kartik that he didn’t take careof her own daughter or how he couldn’t recognize his own granddaughter......Vidya tried to console Suwarna....Suwarna remembered what Manish had told her back at the resort in Mussorie....

 

Suwarna(explaining)-Mainishji aapko yaad hai.....Aapne hi kaha tha Mussorie mai that Abhira bilkul Naira jaisi hai.....Dikhti bhi Naira jaisi hai.......Humme tabbhi pata lagana chahiye tha......I am sorry maine aapko roka......Kartik and Nairawill never forgive us for Akshara and their granddaughter Abhira.....

 

Surekha(emotionally)-Abhinavji left Akshu in our care,with the trust that we wil take care of her and his child......hum toh kuch aur hi kar bethe.......Par ek minute wasn’t Abhir with her......(looking at Armaan)-Abhira ka koi bhai thakya ?


Armaan(remembering)-Jaha tak mujhe yaad hai she has not even mentioned any brother......And she and mam lived alone.....

 

Manish(confused)-Why did she got shot....?

 

Armaan(explaining)-Ek stalker Abhira ke peeche pada tha....Yuvraaj....He tried to forcefully marry Abhira....Usse aur mujhe bacchne ke liye Mam sacrificed herlife.....

 

Soon the Poddars left for their house.Armaan left straightaway for his room.......He angrily kicked his things around.....How could he not trust Abhira.....He knew her the best...He tried her phone but it was off....How would he even convince Abhira to come back.....She was angry with him....And he knew Abhira’s anger was very dangerous...Not something to be played with........But he had to be patient and deal with her anger patiently.....She was after all hurt and right.......Now he had to wait for her to return soon......Till than he had to figure out his feelings......


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Abhira and Armaan meet

 

 

 

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Posted: 29 days ago
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lovely, to tag me


could y if possible write in English the dialogue.


take care.

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Posted: 29 days ago
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Outstanding chapter 1

Loved chorus gang helping armaan realize his feelings for abhira

Excited to read more on abhira lava like anger bursting on armaan