KKB is good story
Even most actors of show are good
Especially i like RV and Kushi tashan - its just brilliant
The way RV sits on chair after coming to Purvi home and challenges Kushi just by his body language and not speaking a single word was brilliant and his dialogues taunting Kushi when all are there was very good
Even Kushi doing very good job but i think she tends to over do the villan role - a bit more subtle would make her brilliant
Problem is with writers way of telling story
There are many issues in story some major i will note down
1) Why RV exposed his plan in front of Kushi and even own family. I would prefer hes lone wolf who makes plan and executes and no one in world knows anything what hes up to for long long in serial. You can always show his thoughts speaking to himself to show his ideas to viewers. I would do that if i am writer of this show. ONly RV does and execute all plans and no one knows anything not even his family members. Only after he destroys kushi and armaan he exposes his plan and ideas he did at last
2) Second issue in this story is always till now 5 months RV and Purvi are never together in most scenes 90% of time
3) Where is RV mom, dad, brother, sister scenes they are invisible. Atleast give one scene a day with RV mom, dad, brother, sister to show what is their relationship and develop their story too. We have no clue who they are what are they etc
4) Too much scenes of that monisha and her sister
5) Too many scenes of Kushi, Purvi, Diya and Prachi family
Start tashan between RV and Purvi even if no love bet them start fights atleast and send them out alone to shopping or temple or function. Why is monisha always there or their family there? Send them out alone to Purvi college or RV friend function etc
I would say keep wedding of Purvi friend and dadu orders RV go attend all functions with Purvi
Keep wedding in kandala or lonavala waya from mumbai even better farm house
Send Jasbir behind them to kill RV and kidnap Purvi as hes obsessed lover
Send ashutosh and family to this wedding as guests to taunt Rv and Purvi
If viewers only have to give all ideas better change writers, serial requires good writers
Send Kushi and hubby also to this wedding so RV kushi tasahn continues
Just to spite Kushi let RV act romantic with Purvi in front of all guests and kushi - jal jal ke burn ho jani jahiye yeh kushi jisne divorce paper diya tha RV ko aur restraining orders
Send Yug and dadu dadi also to aag lagao - i mean cupid jahiye na dono ko warna yeh dono nale log bas jagda karke rahenge romance ke liye dadu should order and yug should act cupid
last send monisha too behind RV, monisha should marry jasbir nice jodi hai dono obsessed
lol than jasbir become relative to Rv
Kuch bhi karo get RV and Purvi out of mumbai bas
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