👏👏👏 lovely update.
Now the story would start. Thanks for lovely update.
Rom-Com FF
👏👏👏 lovely update.
Now the story would start. Thanks for lovely update.
Very interesting update dear Neelu ☺️
Just loved it 🤗
Well I am really happy to see that Maan has started to get effected by Geet & now they are getting closer like man and wife ☺️
Though it's not denying that Maan had that attraction since the beginning & Geet too but was bit unsure
I loved the last part of the update when they both took entry & enjoyed the party & then started to dance on the floor
Waiting for more
Thanks for the PM ☺️
Keep writing ✍️
Wonderful update fab looks like Maan is lost in geet totally looking forward for next
Well written chapters.
Wow loking this progressand wish Geet makes some progress too
Part 32
Fabulous and Vibrant Update
Maan is just lost looking at beautiful Geet dressed up
as his lady
he also warns her before hand if does get drunk , she must leave
him there
but I doubt this time Maan will want to get drunk
now both are dancing hopefully they can actually get to dance romantically with each other
Lovely sweet update. Thank you! Hoping for some more romance in the next update. Looks like things are finally heating up between the two. Maan doesn’t think he will be able to control himself and Geet is getting affected.
Congrats to all the winners
Part 32
Profound update… exceptionally written
great that Geet will be accompanying Maan to the party
Maan looks dashing
of cos Maan cannot get his eyes of Geet
she does look gorgeous
he is indeed affected
well Maan was clearly happy that she was wearing her wedding ring around the chain
at least he complimented Geet
Maan's comments to Geet says a lot
so Geet was affected by his closeness
good that they attended the event hand in hand
as expected no one assumes that they are married
Geet was clearly relieved
pleased that Maan introduced Geet to people he though that could be connections for her
loved that they danced
Gosh he kissed her hand
Geet's reaction was justified
what does Maan want to tell her?
update soon
Arrey wah!
Spa, neck massage and face pack...waiting for geet to make his ponytail...maan left like a real gentleman...I am glad he clarified that he didn't think about her like other people did.
Part 32 raised heartbeats. Maan has been attracted to geet and this time geet felt it too...where is he sending her off to...go ro your home not the apartment...as in her parents' house? Do we get to see some action in the next part?
Star Commenter Awards
(Part 32)
Congratulations to the following winners!
Early Bird Award- janu2006
Star Commenter Winner- Crazymaneetian
Special Mention- Khwaishfan
Part 33
M - Dance with me.
He extended his hand inviting her.
She smiles and places her hand on his.
He raises her hand and gives a light kiss on back of her hand.
She blinks a few times rapidly.
Did she see an illusion just now?
She followed him to the dance floor and placed her other hand on his shoulder as they start to dance.
Maan placed his other hand at her upper back in a very standard ball dance stance position.
Since the dance floor was quite noisy, he draws her a bit closer than standard, not wanting to broadcast their conversation to the other people dancing next to them.
M - Did you get a bite to eat?
G - Yeah, I ate.
M - Any pasta dishes being served?
Geet giggles and shakes her head.
M - Do you still get angry at me when you think about that night?
Geet looks up at his earnest eyes and then looked away.
G- No…I don't get angry anymore. It happened for the best.
M – Good
G - That time ... you didn't do it to humiliate me, right?
M - You are right. I just wanted to dance with you.
Maan smiled at her charmingly.
His styled hair was a bit disheveled now, or rather perfectly messed up a little.
A lock of hair even falling on his forehead giving him a bit of rakish air.
She looks at his smile feeling a bit mesmerized.
He pulls her a little more closer.
M- You never told me how I look today? Was it okay? To simple? Too common?
Geet could hardly look down at his clothes as they danced so close and when she looks at his face, she is reminded of the first time she saw him.
G- Handsome. Very handsome. The first time I saw you... you had looked so handsome ... at first, I just wanted to have a drink with that handsome guy.
M - Is that so?
Maan asks her in a teasing tone. Smiling at her.
Geet nods, blushing a bit.
He lowered his head right next to her ear.
M- Did you know your ears turn a bit red when you blush?
Geet’s ears turn a shade redder.
What’s with all the hot air blowing into her ear and talking in such voice...
She didn't even register at first what he had said to her.
Maan tilts his head a bit, grasping her reaction and then chuckles deeply.
Once again talking close to her ear.
M - Are your ears sensitive?
Geet turns her face away and tries to increase a little space between them.
Unwilling, he pulls her closer.
Removing the final distance between them.
They stood too close.
His hand had already encompassed her entire waist.
She leaned against his chest.
Feeling his elevated heartbeat.
He murmures close to her ears, his lips almost brushing against her ears.
M - Your blush... it's on your neck too... I wonder.... how much further does it go?
She clutches his suite jacket lightly.
Unsure how to respond.
Somehow her heart too began to thunder, clamoring to match his heart’s pace.
She couldn't help feeling shy at the scandalous talk.
At same time her body trembled a little, involuntary responding to him.
Her woman mind was in a daze and her body seemed to be totally out of control.
As Maan slowly glides his fingers down from her neck to her lower back.
She feels a pleasurable shiver run up her spine.
At the same time, she feels the air was not enough.
Maan could also feel her response to him, and he knew if this continues.
He takes a deep breath.
Slightly moves his head to murmur onto her.
M - Dearest. I am drunk.
Geet feels as if the words were spoken from far away and she didn't want to bother with them.
She like being held closed like this as if she was his cherished treasure.
But eventually the brain processed those words and she felt as if she had woken up from a dream.
She looks around.
There are still other people here!!!
And she had being clinging to an allegedly married man!!!
And And!!!
What kind of voodoo had this man done?!!!
She pushes away from him.
She is red with embarrassment.
Geet cleared her throat.
G- I'll ahem... go and find your assistant.
M - Take me with you?
G- No! You go sit there!
Udhar, dekhne walon ko kuch samjh nahi aaya ki ho kya raha hai.
Ye insaan open mein affair kaise kar raha hai?
This was a sight to behold as Maan Singh Khurana had never dance with anyone like this at a party. Never ever.
Man watches her almost run-away feeling regretful.
Maybe few more minutes, then remind her... or maybe...
He gives a derisive snort.
Yeah... he really isn't in any shape to make any decision.
Geet informs Maan's assistant that he was drunk and to take him home.
While she finds lady A and they drive away in her car.
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On the way she pats her chest finally regaining regular heartbeat.
This man... He is not a devil. He is incubus. MALE INCUBUS!!!
She is willing to testify this as a fact in court.
She thought she was playing the beauty trap first time they had met.
No wonder she failed... it wasn't her bad acting ... no....
It just that the opponent is the grandmaster of seduction, okay?
Truly, if he hadn't warned her early in the evening and reminded her again just now....
Geet shudders
But it wasn't with horror.
It was her shudder from her cold body seeking the warmth of his embrace.
Geet clutches her hair.
What is still riding with her?
Isn't she out of area of influence??
Incubus voodoo shit!
She cursed mentally trying to put away his handsome face which kept leaning towards her and whispering in her ears.
G - Wait!!! Stop!
Lady A - What happened?
G- That ummm... can I crash at your place tonight?
Last A- My place? Did you and Sir have that big of a fight?
W- No... just…can I?
Last A – Sure. Sure. Beauty sleeping at my place tonight. No objection at all.
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