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Posted: 8 months ago
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Loved it dear 😍

Awesome update πŸ˜ƒ

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Continue soon πŸ€—

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Posted: 8 months ago
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Thanks for the pm


Part 2

Lovely update... majestically written

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Posted: 8 months ago
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Part 2 


A Lovely and Colorful Update 

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Thankyou Kavitha,,taahir,khwaishfan,glitter_goldie.

Manmarziyaan(The Heart's Wish) Part 3

In the morning...

Brinda:Today is the kitchen ceremony of the newly wed bride.Pihu beta.. you make something traditional.

Pihu became dull.

Pihu:I started cooking only after going abroad.There cooking myself was a necessity.But I don't know to cook Indian traditional dishes.I know only western dishes.Can I make pasta?

Brinda smiled:Why not?I simply suggested traditional Indian dishes.You can make whatever you want.

Pihu smiled.

Pihu cooked pasta and served it to everyone.

Aditya:It's so tasty.

Brinda:You really surprised me Pihu.This is the best pasta I have ever had.

Angad:Yes...it's too good Pihu.

Pihu smiled happily. 

Angad said in his mind:I am so happy that my parents are loving Pihu so much.After all they know her since childhood.

Angad whispered to Pihu:It's been said that the husband is lucky if the wife is a good cook.That way I am lucky.

Angad and Pihu shared a romantic eye lock.

Pihu and Prachi attended the group call of Namita.

Pihu-Prachi:Hi Namita di...

Namita:How are you my dear sisters?I really miss you both.

Pihu and Prachi:We also miss you Nami di.

Namita:How was the kitchen ceremony?

Pihu:I made pasta.Everyone loved it.

Namita:That's amazing.

Prachi:You rocked Pihu di.

Namita:Tell me about your kitchen experience Prachi. 

Pihu:P must have turned the kitchen upside down with her blunders.

Namita and Pihu laughed. 

Prachi:Don't make fun of me.I have only Raghav at home.So i had no unnecessary kitchen ceremony to impress elders.

Namita:So you escaped.

Prachi:Yes.

Pihu:Lucky girl.

Namita:Exactly.




Namita was in the library looking at some books.When she turned back after taking a book she got surprised to see Sumeet.

Sumeet:I am surprised to see you here.You comes to the library to take books also?

Namita:Yes.But the books are for my mom.She reads a lot.What about you?

Sumeet:To be frank while I was driving I saw you entering the library.So I followed you to the library.

Namita could not believe it.

Namita:You followed me?Why?

Sumeet:I was longing to see you and talk.

She blushed.

Sumeet:Shall we sit and talk?

Namita:Yes.

They both sat on the chairs.

Namita:What do you want to talk to me?

Sumeet:Just casual talk.You must be getting new Ads now.Right?

Namita:Yes.I am getting top directors' Ads also.Tomorrow there is a shoot.

Sumeet:I am very happy for you.I had predicted that after the Kalyans Ad you will become more popular.

Namita smiled:Yes.The Ad has become really popular.You made it very well.

Sumeet smiled.

Sumeet:What do you think of marriage?

Namita:I am not thinking of marriage now.Right now I am concentrating on my career.But if I get the right guy I will get committed to him.

Sumeet became happy.

They shared a romantic eye lock.





Sumeet and Parvati were chatting.

Parvati:By the way did you talk to Namita about marriage?

Sumeet:Not really.But she said openly that she is not planning to get married anytime soon.

Parvati became dull.

Sumeet:But she is willing to get into a relationship.If we become a couple I will wait for her till she is mentally prepared to get married.

Parvati smiled.





After some days....

Raghav and Prachi were sitting on the bed and talking.

Prachi:Since we are newly wed all are inviting us for lunch..dinners ....we are eating so much.Veey soon we both will become chubby.

Raghav smiled.

Raghav:We are having too much of junk food these days.We should have home cooked food.

Prachi:That's true.We will keep a servant.

Raghav became dull.

Raghav:Servant?No need of keeping a servant.

Prachi:If you prefer fast food it's ok. 

Raghav:Not at all.I am fed up of having junk food.I want home cooked food.

Prachi:Then why you don't want to keep a servant?

Raghav:I am not used to having the food prepared by servants.We are middle class people.We were not able to afford a servant.Till my mom was alive she cooked for me.

Prachi:But now you are financially well off.You can afford servants.Then why?

Raghav:I told you na Prachi...i am not used to servant's food.Only if we eat the food cooked by our dearest one the food will taste like home cooked food.

Prachi:If you don't want the food to be cooked by servant's you cook yourself.I have no problem.After all..you are used to cooking.After your mom passed away you used to cook by yourself.Right?

Raghav became dull.

Raghav:Yes.I will cook.No issues.But I have office work also.It's hard to manage both.So please try to make atleast one meal Prachi. 

Prachi was shocked.

Prachi:You want to make me cook?I have not done any household work yet.

Raghav:Prachi...my intention is not to make you work.But I just need your help.Also like any other husband I also long to eat the food cooked by my wife.

Prachi:Raghav...till now you cooked food without anyone's help.Suddenly you need help seeing me.You just want to dump everything on my head.Right?

Raghav:No Prachi. I have no such intention.We are married.Husband and wife should do sharing.Right?If we share our work our life will be smoother.

Prachi:But no work Raghav.I can't. I think you are saying this because you think I will remain as a house wife.Not at all.I am going to start dance classes soon.Till now I was only doing stage shows. Now I want to teach dancing.

Raghav:You are misunderstanding me Prachi.But I am glad that you are going to start dance classes.

Prachi:Anyways don't talk about it Raghav.This topic is boring.

Prachi lay on the bed and closed her eyes.

Raghav just looked at her and lay down. 





In the day time....

Angad got inside his room.

Pihu extended her hand and called Angad near her with a sweet smile.Angad got excited.

Angad said in his mind: Our nights are boring always because of Pihu drinking and sleeping.Maybe ours is not first night..but first morning.

Angad went near Pihu romantically.

Pihu pulled him towards her forcefully humming.Angad got stunned.

Hmm..La..La..La..
La..La..Laa
οΏ½ (Rururururu..)

She started singing and dancing with funny expressions.

Angad was shocked.

Zara sa jhoom loon
Arey na re na re na
Zaraa sa ghoom lu main
Arey na re na re na
Aa tujhe choom lu main
Arey na re baba na
Main chali.. banke hawa..
Rabba mere.. menu bacha.. (Repeat once)

Mausam yeh beimaan
Masti ka yeh sama..
Roko o logon zameen pe
Girne laga aasmaan
Thumak, thumak ke jhulungi
Mein udke gagan ko chhoo lungi
Main chali.. banke hawa..
Rabba mere.. menu bacha..

Zara sa jhoom loon
Arey na re na re na
Zaraa sa ghoom lu main
Arey na re na re na
Aa tujhe choom lu main
Arey na re baba na

Angad thought:Oh no...Pihu is drunk.

Brinda and Aditya heard the song which Pihu was singing.

Thandi thandi pawan
Jalta hai yeh badan
Ji chaahta hai bana loon
Tujhko apna sajan
Hua nahin yeh pehle kabhi
Meri chaal
Badal gayi abhi, abhi
Main chali.. banke hawa..
Rabba mere.. menu bacha..

Zara sa jhoom loon
Arey na re na re na
Zaraa sa ghoom lu main
Arey na re na re na
Aa tujhe choom lu main,
Arey na re baba na

Brinda:Why this song now?

Adi:Brinda...they are a newly married couple.They maybe singing and dancing.Remember we have also done it during our honeymoon days.

Brinda blushed and rested her head on Aditya's shoulder.

Angad thought:My parents will understand that Pihu is drunk hearing her sing.I should not give them that chance.

Angad forcefully took the singing Pihu to the bathroom. 

There also she was dancing holding Angad's hand.

Jati hai tu kahan
Jaaneman jan-e-jaan
Ladki hai tu khubsoorat
Ladka mein naujawan
Tujhe, gale laga loon aa
Palkon mein tujhe basaa loon aa
Ho gaya.. mujhe nasha..
Rabba mere.. menu bacha..

Zara sa jhoom loon
Na re na re na
Zaraa sa ghoom lu main
Arey na re na re na
Aa tujhe choom lu main
Na re baba na
Ho gaya.. mujhe nasha..
Rabba mere.. menu bacha..
Aa.. aa.. aa.. aa..(DDLJ).

 

 He opened the shower.Both got drenched.

After getting drenched in water for sometime Pihu got recovered from intoxication.

She looked at Angad deeply.They shared a passionate eye lock.

She came back to senses.She became shy and got out of the bathroom.Angad smiled.



Pihu and Angad changed their wet clothes.

Angad:Pihu.. you sang well when you were drunk.

She felt embarrassed.Inorder to cover it up she looked at her phone simply.

Angad:But sing in a low voice.Otherwise my parents will hear it and they will understand that you are drunk.

Pihu became dull.

Pihu:They won't accept me and love me as I am?They already know that I am alcoholic.

Angad:They will always love you Pihu.But now you are their daughter in law.No parents in law will want their daughter in law to sit and drink.They won't be able to digest it.

Pihu became sad.

Namita went to meet Sumeet.

Sumeet:I am glad that you came when I called you.

Namita:What Ad are you planning Sumeet?

Sumeet:I did'nt call you for Ad film discussion.

Namita was stunned:Then?

Sumeet:To talk about our personal life.

Namita:Means?

Sumeet:Do you remember our first meeting?

Namita:Yes.We met each other first at the Ad film shoot.

Sumeet:Yes.



Flash back...

It was a costume Ad.Namita came wearing a stylish gown.Sumeet was lost in her beauty.

Present...

Sumeet:During our first meeting itself you captured my heart without your own knowledge Namita.It was love at first sight for me.

Namita became dull.

Sumeet:I know that you are not ready for marriage now.But I will wait till you get ready.But I want an assurance from you that you will be committed to me.

Namita:Sorry.I can't.

Sumeet became sad.

Sumeet:You told me that you are willing to get committed if you meet a nice man.

Namita:Yes.But that person is not you.

Sumeet was shocked.

Sumeet:Then who?

Edited by jasminerahul - 7 months ago
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Posted: 7 months ago
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Looks like Pihu's in-laws are understanding as they allowed her to make Pasta. Loved the family appreciating her pasta. The conversation between three sisters were cute. The Angad Pihu scene was romantic and it was a sexy song. The bathroom scene was romantic. 

Sad to see that Prachi refusing to cook for Raghav as she is not used to cooking, but glad that Raghav allowed Prachi to start her dance class. 


The library scene between Sumeet and Namita is romantic. Sumeet is under the impression that Namita will commit if she gets a right guy and thinking that he is the one. Sad that Namita rejected Sumeet's proposal. I am wondering what guy does Namita want. Will she go by her parents choice or does she love someone else.

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Posted: 7 months ago
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Loved it dear 😍

Awesome update πŸ˜ƒ

Thanks for the PM ☺️

Keep writing ✍️

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Posted: 7 months ago
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Part 3

Amazing update... nicely written

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Posted: 7 months ago
#18

Part 3


Fabulous Update 


I'm just hoping Namita and Sumeet can fall in love 

with each other 

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Posted: 7 months ago
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Namita was impressed with Sumit's game. He liked that she came and watched.

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Posted: 7 months ago
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Aliya is making a lot of assumptions. That is so nasty of her. She wants to get the business from their unhappiness.