Hello dearies as I asked who’s in for Shana story .
So I have started forming character sketch and people who will be part of it . Here I would be taking few instances from past few of the current events . But everything would just a work of fiction .
Character sketch :
Suyash : everyone knows him as a very good and old friend of shaalien . They have a Delhi connection .
Kishwar : friend of shaa, wife of Suyash . She has a deep bond with shaa and has an impression of giving it straight in the face .
Behzaad : our Sam Arjun bond is as good off screen as it is on screen .
Siddharth Sen ( our shree ) : show has ended . Friendship doesn’t . They prove it .
They have been been friends from the show and after that too .
Sahil : shaleen’s Delhi connection and a very old friend from his struggling days . He knows .
They have gathered for celebrating friendship day and games night .
Also , Shaalein is unmarried here .
Wow...great character sketch. Carry on...will be waiting eagerly to read the first chapter asap.
Wonderful cs 👍 Pinku 🤗
Just loved it
Will be waiting for more
Keep writing ✍️
Part 1
They have been sitting and chit chatting about personal and professional matters.
Shaleen and Siddharth were standing in a corner .
Shaleen: tu restaurant mein kafi busy rehte hai .
Sid: ha yaar and honestly kuch itna achcha mila bhi nahi. . Job satisfaction na de wooh kaam kyu karna .
Shaleen : isi wajahse hum beRozgar ghum rahe hai ,
They laughed at this .
Sid : are Sana is coming right ?
Shaleen : ha she said she would be late.
Sid : aur kabhi use bataya about your feelings ?
Shaleen : ofcourse not Sid. I don’t think she has the same feelings for me . Ab use baat ko bohot time hogaya hai . Let’s not talk about it .
Sid : did you move on ?? Did you get into a relationship?? Why ?
Shaleen : are relationship hai koi mazak nahi Jo kisi se bhi kar lu. Feelings bhi honi chahiye .
Suyash : hey let’s play some games . Malhotra sid come
Kishwar : I was thinking let’s play truth and dare . Long time we haven’t got some good truths out of everyone and had some dares . Hey but Sana ?? Shaleen phone kar use .
Shaleen : she will be here by 10:30 pm .
Behzaad : Chalo tab Tak sabki tang khiche.
Com on .
They started playing and started getting interesting stuff out of truths and dare .
( I m coming directly to our hero)
Sid gave a signal to bez to raise this topic . Everyone knows about how Special Shana relationship is .
Behzaad : truth or dare .
shaleen : dare ofcourse .
Behzaad: tu Sana ko confess kar apni feelings when she comes .
Shaleen : of course not mein esa kuch nahi karne wala bez . You know it’s not that easy . Uske upar she is busy doing movies , working on modelling contracts . Aur mein mere career ka koi thikana nahi . Bohot chese hai joh Sahi nahi bethti.
Kishwar : do you think it matters to her how successful you are or not ?? Tumhe bolne mein kya problem hai ? Socho agar suyash nahi bolta will we have been together ? Hamari age gap and lots of other things were a problem. Tumhara toh wooh bhi nahi hai
Shaleen : Hamara bhi hai . She is 5 yr younger to me .
Sahil : tu bas excuses de raha hai . You should tell her after all this years .
Shaleen : koi aur dare do yeh chodo .
The bell rang and Sahil opened it . It was our diva Sana . She met everyone with a bright smile and warm hugs and finally it was his turn .
She just gave him the tightest possible hug .
They remained in a hug for a while.
Sana : my home my safe place .
Shaleen : yeh batao kaise ho ?? Aur itna late kaise ho Gaya ??
Sana : are wooh shoot lamba chal Gaya
Sid: are Sana come we are playing truth ya dare you join Infact tu hu Baki hai .
Kish: I vl ask . Truth or dare .
Sana : truth I don’t have energy for dares .
Kish: Sana how is only he your safe place ??
Sana : because I can come to him anytime anyhow and tell him everything I feel . He won’t judge me . Mujhe itna comfort kabhi nahi lagta with anybody . I have not met him since a year now but esa lagta hi nahi that I haven’t met him . When you say he is got my back he really has .
Everyone clapped for her and indirectly giving ishara to shaleen about her words .
Sana : guys I have an announcement. I have been offered kkk13 .
Bez: Woow congratulations Sana . You are going to rock the show and learn a lot I am sure .
Sana : I need you to train me and make me strong shaa .
Shaleen : ha ofcourse I vl . I vl get you connected to my trainer.
Sana :Shaa I m hungry .
Shaleen : ha Lata hoon .
She was enjoying chit chatting with everyone when he got her food .
There was his plate lying there too .
Sana : yeh kis ka hai ?
Sid : wooh sha ka .
Sana immediately picked up some chips from it and started munching .
Bez : are jhootha tha .
Sana : shaa ka tha na it’s okay . Bohot khaya hai meine Arjun ke set pe.
Sid : are bez don’t you remember after few days they ate together in a plate .
Sahil : aaj bhi esa karna ek plate kam use hogi .
Everyone was giving each other winks and naughty looks .
Shaa: lo . Are Meri chips ?
Sana : meine kha li .
Shaa: ok . Le Tera khana .
They started playing games . When everyone was tired and tipsy .
They sat down listening to some good music .
Sana sat down next to shaa and rested on his shoulders .
Sana: shaa blanket .
Shaa got one and covered them. They were listening to the music and enjoying.
Around 2 pm, everyone slept where ever they found place .
Shaleen got Sana into his room and made her sleep on his bed .
Sana : Shaa mei kar paungi kkk. Meri health . I lost so much coz of it .
He just held on to his cheeks .
Shaleen : tu sab kuch kar sakti hai Sana . You are strong woman. Nothing can break you or stop you . Jo hua usko chod . Just see ahead .
Sana : Har stunt se Pehle Tera prep talk chahiye . Aur mera phone Uthana.
Shaleen : aaj tak esa hua hai Tera phone na uthaya ho?
Sana : tu bhi chal na mere sath Meri bag mein pack hoke.
Shaleen : utana bada bag nahi milta Sana warna I m sure you would pack me in.
Ok good night now. So ja
Sana: are Tum kahan soge??
Shaleen : Bahar . Tum so jao. Good night Sana .
Precap :
What will happen if shaa confess? Please write your thoughts too.
Hope you liked the part .
Starting with a lovely friendly chit-chat session of Sha with his friends was really great...I loved their conversation very much. As for Shaa's confession, I think Sana already is so much emotionally dependent on Sha regarding everything happening in & around her life. She also trusts him very much, like she said - he already has become her safest comfort zone, her home, in fact, I guess she herself is giving him indirect hints from so long by all of her little gestures such as - eating his jhoota, hugging him so tightly infront of every other friends of Shaa, getting tired & leaning on his shoulder to relax and so on, so that, she can read his mind & know what he feels for her or thinks about all these actions of her. Also it seemed to me that, she too is waiting for Sha to express his feelings for her at first.
Keep writing...tnx for the tag. Will be waiting to read more.
Awesome start dear 😍
Just loved it
Hai ye dosti yaar zindagi iska ek pal jaise ek Sadi
Pyar main jio itna Jaan loo Dil ne jo kaha usko Maan loo. ... Le lo maza zindagi ka hai har pal suhana ... Shana Nana. Shana Nana ... 🥰🤗🤗
I just loved the starting both Sha & Sana are are best of friends & Sha too has a special feeling for her even Sana too seems to be in the same boat
Well there are few things that are not matching but I really hope Sha confesses his love for Sana soon 🤗
Thanks for the Tag 🏷️
Keep writing ✍️
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