Fichain #2 | Last part P.44 - Page 36

Originally posted by: Bee222

Segment #5

That guy is so heartless omg I wonder what this note is now

Very well written Beeee you depicted the emotions so well

Originally posted by: Quantum-Dot

# Segment 6

That Abhay is so heartless....he doesnt deserve her tears

segment 7

You are just so good at writing emotional stuff Tia! I loved the last line where she couldn't trust anyone again!

I hope Sam remains loyal to her until the end and she learns to trust him gradually

segment 8

so V got an abortion...poor thing I feel sooo bad for what she's going through....but then I also felt bad for Sam when she blasted at him he's such a gentleman...i hope he doesnt change!

segment 9

Finally we got some background on Sam thank you for writing this so beautifully Bee!!

segment 10 was another well written one...good to see other characters POVs too!

Nice twist in segment 11 Shiri!

segment 12

Nice to see how Abhay is coping after divorcing Veronica....I have a feeling he won't last long with his new wife either

I hope Nica starts trusting Sam

segment 13

Omg you killed Sai and Shwetha chalo characters to thore kam hue....seemed like every guy was in love with Nica If only she knew how much she is desired, my heart breaks for her, she yearns to be loved so desperately...

segment 14

too many tragedies man, poor Veronica never gets any happiness...one shock after another koi to isko khushi de do