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Posted: 4 months ago

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Posted: 4 months ago

I read this as part of the contest. This is so sweet. Both her mom and Maan celebrated mother's day for Geet even though she lost her baby.

Happy that they got another little one.

Posted: 4 months ago

Beautiful os, it shows so many relation, husband wife love and support, parents support to daughter and son In law and new parents feelings 

All written so beautifully loved it 


Posted: 4 months ago

one of a masterpiece

loved reading this one again  ❤️

Posted: 4 months ago

Emotional OS…. beautifully written 

adore the bond between Geet and her mom

sad that Geet lost her baby when she was 7 months pregnant

feeling for Geet

her thoughts well portrayed

her fears were reasonable

liked Maan's surprise, wish and gift for Geet

she was overwhelmed

Maan's curiosity seeing the letter from the hospital was justified

great that he spoke to Geet

he was naturally tensed and restless

glad that she opened up to Maan

so they offered a prayer and mannat at the dargah

Gosh Geet is pregnant

so happy for Maaneet

aww Geet had a cute baby girl

enjoyed the banter and teasing all round

lovely name....

hmm Maaneet love their baby girl so much

she has bought love and joy in their lives

she also healed them

Posted: 4 months ago

Amazing story .congratulations for contest

Posted: 3 months ago

Beautiful os.. 

I had read it in the contest thread... 

Really beautiful story... 

Loved it.. U did a fantastic job.. 

Posted: 2 months ago

Beautiful n emotional story. 


Geet Hui Sabse Parayi 

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