FAN-FIC A WHOLE NEW STORY! - Page 15

i luved this chapter! Cant wait to see wht happens next!

bye,

Hera

Sorry yaar...I forgot to comment while reading this last part!!! It was fantabulous!!! Please continue Zara!!! 😛...this kinda reminds me of Hulchul 😃

nice plot..& nice lines..keep it up

Continued!!

At Armaans House

After they have hugged, Jassi pulls back

Armaan: Kya hua ??

Jassi feelies a little bad for what she is doing.

Jassi: Kuch Nahin, Main bas soouch rahi thi kei , tum our Malika??

Armaan: Dont think about her, i m gonna tell my parrents who my real love is and smiles😊

Jassi smiles back.

Armaan: Tum aaj yahan peh sou jayou.

Jassi: Lekin

Armaan interups: Lekin wekin kuch nahin, agher tum mujhse pyaar kerti houn tu phir tum nahin jayou ghi!!

Jassi: Per...

Armaan interups again: Per Nothing, Plzzz stay, humnei phir bhi sona nahin hei!!😆

Jassi: what do you mean???😲

Armaan: Mera matlab yeh nahin hei keh kya tum sooch rahi hou, mera matlab yeh hai keh Zara ka tu wait kerna hei hena??

Jassi: ohh okii,

Armaan sits on the couch and so does Jassi, after a while they both sleeps on the couch 😳

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At Morning, at The ghaar!

Rahul wakes up and sees Zara who has her haid on his chest and her arms around Him.

I have to go now!!

Bye...

I will cont.  today ... but late...

Lots of love

ZaRa

 

Awww that was sooooooooooooooo sweet Zara!!! Plz continue yaar!!! I can't wait to read it!! I look forward to tonight! See ya later! Take care.

lots of love,

Abs 😛

At Morning, at The ghaar!

Rahul wakes up and sees Zara who has her haid on his chest and her arms around Him😳, he just looks at her and just smiles, and then Zara wakes up and and rubs her eyes then she sees Rahul who is staring at him, she is like WHAT HAPPEND??

Zara: Rahul tum mujhe aise kyoun deekh rahei houn?? Rahul wanna make some fun so he is pretending like he is very sad

Rahul: Tumnei jo mere saath kal raat kiya woh...

Zara: What😕 maine kya  kiya??

Rahul: Tumnei tumnei

Zara: Kya maine kya???

Rahul: Itni sharam ki baat mein keh bhi nahin sakta!!

Zara: What do you mean very upset is about to cry

Rahul: tumnei tumnei Merrriiiii izat luti hei and is cracking up with laugther

Zara: You You and is very upset because she thougt she have done something very bad,

Rahul: haan meri izzat kou tumnei and laughs alot

Zara: Shut up

Rahul: Kyoun tum phir meri izzat peh dhakka maro ghi 😆

Zara: yoooooooooooooooooooou and runs after him, runs

Rahul: Heheheehe, you should have seen your face and runs

Zara: Jab mein tumhei pakhar lou ghi mein tumhei.... aaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Rahul then stops amnd bends down cuz he cant run same time and laugh and he is mid on the way

Zara screams  : Rahuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuul

Rahul: Whatt?? cant understand what she mean

Zara goes over to him and is not to close to him she is 20 cm meter from there

Rahul: Kya hua

Zara: Kuch nahin ,, just wanted to stop you 😃

Rahul: pehle ka stop hua huwa tha

Zara; Yeah yeah,

then Zara can se something red on Rahuls shirt, it is a gun shot so you can be sure that it will hit the man you want to shot then she sees up, and sees a guy dreesed in black, and is with a gun, zara then SCREAMS

Zara: RAHUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUL, move

Rahul: Zara, you cant use it two times .. it gets boring..

Zara then runs and pushes Rahul and takes the bullet for his sake 😳😕🤢

Rahul is schocked and he looks up and sees a man who runs from there.

Rahul runs to Zara and takes her on his hands

Rahul; Zara tum ,.,

Zara is uncouncheins (SPELLING)

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AT ARMAANS HOUSE!!

Armaan is up

Armaan is making some breakfast for Jassi 😳 (why by the way is sleeping)

Jassi on the couch, wakes up and looks up and sees Armaan making breakfast

Jassi: Armaan??

Armaan: JEssica it was sapoused to be a surprise

Jassi: Ohhh, how sweet then i will pretend like i didnt saw you okii??

Armaan: Smiles and says okii

Jassi pretends to sleep

Armaan ; Jess, ab uth jao..

Jassi Pretending; Mujhe sunei do na

Armaan: UTHO NAA!!!

Jassi: No (makinhg fun)

Armaan: Ab itna bhi nahn banu, plzz open you eyes,

Jassi opens her eyes and sees, the breakfast on the table infront of her

Jassi gets some tears which is rolling down her cheeks

Armaan: Oho, Tum ladkiyan bhi na kitni emotionel ho jati houn!!!

Jassi: Armaan you are sooo sweeeet

Armaan gets next to Jassi

Armaan: Woh tu main hu lekin ab tum khaoun bhi na

Jassi: Ok, lekin eik sharat per

Armaan: Kounsi sharat

Jassi: Tumnei mujhe apnei hatoun sei khilana pareh gha

Armaan: Yeh lou khanna bhi mein banao our khilao bhi main???

Jassi: You know you are sooo unromantic1

Armaan: Achaa baba, here you go takes a bide from the bread and gives it from his hands,

Jassi eats it, and there eyes meets,

Jassi : Ab meri bari

Armaan: Okii

Jassi takes another bread and gives it to Armaan , then he takes a bread and there eyes meet again and they smile to eachother  😳

Okii, I have to go now... I hope you all liked it....

PLZZZZZZZZ COMMENT

Lots of Love

ZaRa

awww Zara!!! That was so romantic and cute yaar!!! How I wish this would happen in reel life, instead of this boring crap they are showing us now!!! Rekha Modi needs to get a clue!....but at least Armaan has realized what his mistake was thanks to Nandu Bandu!! We love you Nandu!! 😛😳

awww tht was so cute!! Continue soon!!

bye

Hera

AT The Hospital

rahul is waiting out side the emergensy room, just then the docter comes,

Rahul: Docter, Kya Zara Theek hai??

Docter: She has loste alot of blod, and she is in a very danger contitiun, i dont think that she can make it.

Rahul: Plzz Dont say that, you are a doctor, docter doesnt say that, they cant just give up, they give up when the person is died,

D: Haan Rahul, lekin Zara ki jaan khatrei mein hain, agher hum abhi operation na kerei then she could die 100 % and after operation it is 50 50 % chance that Zara can make it!

Rahul: Oki, then what are you waiting for do the Operation!!

D: Rahul, woh ladki tumhari kya lagti hei???

R: What do you mean??

D: You have to have a relationship with the girl we are going to oparate, because if her family doesnt want to oparate then we cant, and if we oparate without asking them, they can sue us!!

R: I do have a relation with her

D: What is it then??

R: I m her HUSBAND (I M LOVING IT 😃😆)

D: Then plzz sign here!

R: Oki, and he writes his name and surname!

He then Calls Jassi on her cell

J: Hello???

R: Hello Jassi its me Rahul

J: Rahul??

Armaan is with Jassi, so he is being cind of jeloux

R: Haan, mein tum Armaan kou batao kei main us ki bahen kei saath hospital mein houn!

J: HOSPITAL and gets worried!

Armaan is a little happy  when he hears hospital word, because then he thinks that something is happend to Rahul, but then a little bad to, because jassi looks so Worried.

R: Haan, Zara has been shot!

J: WHAT, Acha tum batao tum kahan hou hum abhi ateei hein!

R: mein general hospital sei baat ker rah a houn!

J: Okii, we will come!!

And she turns her phone off.

Jassi: Armaan, Zara is in hospital

Armaan: SHOCKED SHOCKED SHOCKED!

I have to go, cuz i have to make some tea to my dad, so plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz COMMENT

LOVE ZARA

 

WOW!!! I'm hanging by a moment here with you!!!...Plz continue hon! 😊