Posted: 2 months ago

Vidhi's view

Kya Dev Sir ko Zara bhi fikra nahin hein mere liye? Maine aisa kya kaha kee unhein phir se gussa huye ? Ego ,aaj pata chala kee uss shabd kaa kitna bada asar hein zindagi mein. Aise dekha jaaye toh Dev Sir ko bhi ego hein. Goa mein kaise cards jab decline huye aur maine unse kaha kee kaash mere pass bhi thode khud ke  paise hote toh manage kar paate unhone turant kaha kee saare problems Sir khud handle karenge... Aise paison kee kami aana nahin chahiye. Par woh asli solution thaa hi nahi..Aur aaj Baalghar mein bhi naukri kee baat aa gayi toh Sir ne kaha Vidhi mere paas hey solution. Tumhare Paapa maan nahi rahe hein. Unhein ego hein..Pehle mujhe lagta thaa kee Dev Sir ke paas meri har problem kaa solution hein. Par aaj jab mein khud apni family kee problem solve karna chahti hoon apne pairon pe khade hoke toh unhone mujhe hausla dene ke bajaye kyun mujhse .....

Vidhi's eyes went teary and unfortunately her finger got hurt between the thorns of the rise  flowers which she were holding. 

Bimla: Gulab ke phoolon mein kaate bhi hote hain Vidhu. Yahi asli zindagi hein.

Vidhi: Maa!!

Bimla came and caressed her wounded finger.

Bimla: Teri yeh aansu mujhe sab bata rahe hein Vidhu. Tum chahe mujhse kuch kahe yaa Naa kahe .

Vidhi: Maa !!

Bimla hugged Vidhi and pat her back.

Bimla ; Aaj bhi baat nahi bane naa Dev ji se. 

Vidhi : Mujhe toh kuch samajh mein nahi aa rahi hein Maa. Aisa lagta hein kee mein pinjre mein qaid panchi kee tarah hoon... Woh panchi jisse jitni phal chahiye sab milte hein,uski baatein uske maalik ko acchi lagte hein..Par agar panchi ne khule aasman mein udne kee ijaazat maangi toh usse sunaye jaaate hein kee woh qaidi hi hein.

Bimla : Yeh kaisi bhool gayi tum kee uss Panchi ko aasman kee raah dikhane waala bhi toh usski maalik hi thaa. Jiss aasman kee tu baat kar rahi hein uske baare mein toh tujhe pata hi nahi thi ....

Vidhi : Maa yahi toh meri samajh ke bahar hein. Joh Dev Sir mujhe himmat dikhaye aage badhne kee wahin Sir mujhe aaj naukri karne se rok rahe hein. Kyun Maa ?? Kya mere liye woh Satya maa ko mana nahi sakte ? Baat nahi kar sakte?

Bimla: Iss kyun kaa jawab Kaash mein tumhein de paati, par mere paas toh hein hi nahi. Saalon se Milapini mayya kee sewa, Apne pati aur beti ko khush rakhna, ghar ko sambhalna isske alawa meri duniya hein hee kya joh mein tujhe kyun kaa jawab de sakun. Mein yeh nahin keh rahi hun tujhe udne kee azaadi nahi hein. Beshaq hein, par woh rasta itna aasan nahi hein. Aur tum kya Dev ji ko akele baat karne ke liye keh rahi ho ? 

Vidhi: Toh kya karun ? Mein ek baar baar karke dekhi par unhone mana kiya. 

Bimla: Aur tum haar maan gayi....Yeh nahi Sochi kee aage kya karna hein. 

Vidhi: Maa uss ghar kee mamlon mein mujhe kitna bolna hein mujhe woh bhi samajh mein nahi aati . Mein apne Maayke mein mehman ban chuki hun , abb yeh ghar bhi mera nahi lag raha hein.

Bimla: Vidhu , sachai kee aayine dekhte hi kamzor mat pado meri bacchi. Tere Paapa ke jiss tarah usool hein uss tarah Satyawati ji ke bhi kuch usool hein. Waqt lagega sab badalne mein. Par issi beech tum yeh mat bhoolna kee tumhari shaadi huyi hein. Iss waqt joh lamhe tumhein apne pati ke saath milenge aage jaake wahi yaadgar rahenge . Phir bacche, grihasti, kya pata naukri sab hone ke baad tum donon ko akele bitane kaa waqt hi shayad milega hi nahi... Zara Dev ji ke baare mein bhi toh socho. Naa patni ko dukhi dekh sakte naa maa ko mana kar sakte .....

Vidhi became silent for a while.

Bimla: Abb tum so jawo.....

Bimla kisses her forehead and leaves.

Vidhi folds her hands before Milapini maa.

Vidhi : Hey maa Milapini aap hi mujhe koyi rasta dikhayiye naa.

" Vidhi 

Vidhi turns back and gets surprised to see Dev

Vidhi: Dev Sir

Dev : Vidhi !! Aaj Milapini maa ke saamne mein bhi yahi prarthna leke aaya hun kee mujhe bhi sahi rasta dikhayiye. I am sorry Vidhi. Mujhe aisi baat nahi karni chahiye thi tumse . Woh kya hein kee kahin naa kahin mein khud ek egoistic insaan hun . Mujhe saare problems, saari zimmedariyan sab kuch akele dekhne sambhalne kee aadat hein....Vidhi shaadi se pehle Tak mujhe koyi pressure nahi thaa. Mein sirf tumhare baare mein socha . Tumhare liye bahut concerned thaa aur har uss heights mein tum pahuncho isliye tumhein MBA kaa form, scholarship sab de paaya. Par shaadi ke baad mein sirf MBA tak hi convince kar paaya hun apni Maa ko . 

Vidhi: Sir !!

Dev ; Mujhe bolne do Vidhi....Agar hum donon akele hote toh bina kuch bhi soche mein Khushi Khushi kehta kee tum jaake naukri kar do. Infact tum aage badhogi toh mujhe bahut Khushi milegi . Par Vidhi iss waqt ghar mein waise bhi bahut saare tension chal rahe hein. Aur Maa kee atal faislon ke aage mein kuch bol nahin pawunga.. Mein bahut kamzor hoon Vidhi... Maa ko manwane ke koshish karenge yeh tak tumhare dil rakhne ke liye keh nahi paaya Vidhi....

Vidhi: Par Sir aap mujhe sach kehkar mujhe koyi jhoote ummeed bhi toh nahi thi. Yaad hein Sir Milapini maa ke aage hi aapne pyaar kaa izhaar Kiya tha.Par mujhse yeh bhi kaha kee iss rishtey mein koyi ummeed mat rakhna....Tab kabhi laga nahi kee aage iska bhavishya kya hoga. Waise hi aaj bhale hi sachai bahut kadwe ho aur mere naukri karne kee khwaish puri naa ho lekin mujhe lagta hein kee Milapini maa ke saamne khade hein toh maa hamari prarthna zarur sunenge. Ek baat kahun Sir aap akele nahin...Aapki sukh dukh mein Mera bhi barabar kaa hissa hein. Phir mujhse kyun kaha kee maayke mein Jawon jab tak mamle sulajh nahi jaate ? Kya mere aane ke baad wahan ke saare problems khatam huyi?

Dev : Nahin Vidhi. Problems khatam nahi huye . Infact kuch mamle ithne complicated hein kee mujhe kuch bhi samajh mein nahi aa rahe hain..

Vidhi held Dev's hand and said: Aap aur mein donon ko aise dooriyan banake thodi naa problems kaa saamna karne padenge...Sir aap ke liye office ke pressure, Ghar ke mamlon kee tension, inke beech aapne mujhe bhi maayke bheji jabki aapko meri zarurat hein.

Dev : Vidhi !! Pata nahi uss mood mein aise hi keh Diya ....Subah jab tum Ghar pe nahi mili toh mujhe ehsas huwa kee maine tumhein sach mein bahut hurt Kiya....Vidhi, tumhari naukri karne kee joh wish hein mein vaada toh nahi kar sakte par aage jaake Maa se zarur baat karunga.

Vidhi: Hum donon milke baat karenge. Milke koshish karenge. Phir joh hoga woh dekha jaayega. 

Dev : Par abb shayad nahi keh sakte kuch bhi. Isliye please mujhe maaf kar do.

Vidhi : Sir aap aaj khulke mujhse baatein share kee aur maine bhi.. abb Dekhiye naa mann kitha halka huwa hein...Sir inn lamhon mein hum donon ko ek dusre ke saath hona hein, baatein karni chahiye. Ek dusre ko kareebi se aur jaanne honge. Ek dusre ke pariwar walon ko bhi jaanne hein...

Dev : Haan Vidhi. Tumhare Bina Mera life toh aade adhura hein.

Vidhi : Aur mera bhi .

Dev : Abb Milapini maa hi Sahara hein. Joh rasta maa dikhayegi 

Vidhi : Ussi se humein himmat milenge. Maa, humein Shakti deejiye.

Dev and Vidhi folded their hands together before Milapini maa. They both touched Mayya's feet and two white champak flowers fell down between them . They both took those flowers and smiled. 

Posted: 2 months ago

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Posted: 2 months ago

Please read this guys🤗

Posted: 2 months ago

Loved it! Very heartfelt and well put together ❤️❤️❤️ 

Posted: 2 months ago

Thank you so much 🥰

Posted: 2 months ago

Beautifully written ❤️ Bimla amd Vidhi's conversation reminded me of the episode where one of the reason why Bimla accepts Videv's relationship is because Dev is progressive unlike HP and will involve Vidhi in all important decisions of family. Sad to see vidhi facing the same situation as Bimla now☹️☹️

Posted: 2 months ago

Thank you so much 🥰..Yes definitely Vidhi and Dev need to work on their relationship..They should try to understand each other's priorities. 

Posted: 2 months ago

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