Viaan’s love - Mai hoon Kyunki Abb voh mujhse baat karti hai

The poetry by Viaan is not just a poem of his love or his realization, it’s one of his journey of love through hope and forgiveness.

One that begins with the present - the resonance of what is there ..the meter ends with the word hai - which means it exists, it’s there..and those lines that end with “hai” is of the evening into the night, the night that continues to scare him and remind him…the night “hai” ..

Ae Shaam yeh teri beimaani hai

Tere aate hi jaane ki manmaani hai

Tu uski yaad leke aati hai

Aur Mujhe, raat ke havale kar jaati hai

Raat se darr lagta hai

Uski baat se darr lagta hai

Ae shaam Tu thode jo baar baar uss

Aietbaar se darr lagta hai..

The hai denotes the truth, the existential angst of every trust that he has broken within himself. And his fear of her…her being, her words…

But then Viaan moves from this hai to another parallel hai within the pink evening… there is another hai…which is not as dark…but has hues within it….which was brought today…this also exists…here he talks of the night that the day brought him…one that is letting him search,,,for light within..because it was unable to find that fear from before.

Surkh Shaam ki andheri raat aaj bhi aayi hai

Lekin aaj - aaj voh mere darr ko dhund nahi payi hai

And just like that his poetry takes a turn from hai to “thaa”…what was to what used to be….all it needed was a small flicker of light..of hope..of a firefly within that night …

Sach kahun - raaton ko mai andheron se pehchanta thaa

Jab tak mai jugnon ko nahi jaanta thaa

And from what used to be …he now thinks of what can be…. From thaaa to hongey…..all it took was a flicker…

Ek jugnu dikha hai tou aur bhi hotey hongey

Phir jaadu bhi hota hoga, Chirago mei Jin hotey hongey

Dariya aur sapney bhi pure hotey hongey

Har raat Ek Chand mere liye chamakta hoga

Chandni mere farishton ke farman barasta hoga

And then…love….becomes a possibility….a real possibility…..

Aur phir..

Aur phir pyaar bhi hota hoga

Hota hoga Lekin kya hota hoga

How does this possibility play out..what are all the possibilities within that one hota hoga…

Andhere mei roshni ka aana

ya March ki garmi mei Kuch sochke kapkapana

Chaddar mei muh chipaana

Bistar se uth na paana

Mann ki mej par bhaitkar

Usse ghanto batiyana

Chatpatana, muskurana

Apne ho baalon ko sehlana

Buss uski yaadon mei khotey chale jaana

Buss khotey chale jaana

And now he knows he is at the point of no return, because the very thing he feared, her words, her being, her looks, her smile..brings a different hope…and all of it makes his existence worth it..

Haan pyaar tou hai,

Voh mujhse baat karti hai

Yeh kehke khaas karti hai

Voh Haske dheere se khusiyaar karti hai

Voh dekhti hai meri aur surkh mere halaat karti hai

Mujhe lagta hai ke

main hun

Kyunki

Abb voh mujhse baat karti hai…

She talks to me…hence…she is closer to forgiving me…and that’s when my angst will end..and my love shall remain…

Thank you so much for this dear❤️

These will always be the best dialogues for this series for me.

Realisation itna sundar hai I wonder confession kaisa hoga

Viaan’s darkness and past will always be a part of him and his path crossing with Katha who even though has so many tragedies around her shines like diamond; it was bound for him to fall for her and her positivity

These lines they really touched my heart -

Haan pyaar tou hai,

Voh mujhse baat karti hai

Yeh kehke khaas karti hai

Voh Haske dheere se khusiyaar karti hai

Voh dekhti hai meri aur surkh mere halaat karti hai

Such a beautiful poem and such a super episode

Adnan khan is phenomenal he nailed that scene and how .

Thanks dear for providing this in writing and ur explanation adds to its essence 😍

Thanks for writing down the poem and the translation, my friend I was going to request someone to write this down. That was amazingly beautiful. Thank you. I hope I can use your space to write down my thoughts, I am too lazy to open another thread after seeing this one.

Episode opened up with Viaan and Katha driving. His line of questioning to Katha is as if he is looking at Katha as a window to the outside world. It is like students asking questions on how to deal with a problem, he is the same asking about specific issues. Katha's answer to him, as a mom, there is no option but to deal with what life throws at you. This resonates with a lot of us in real life🤗Eyes on the road, Mr. Raghuvanshi🤡. I worried a lot at him adoring a sleeping Katha by looking at her, rather than the road

Katha being brusque with Ehsan is good, it is about time she does check his advances👍🏼 I didn't understand why she asked Viaan not to wait🤔Any thoughts on this? Did anybody else feel that Aditi is coming down with a cold or recuperating from one? Her voice is breaking as she is speaking.

This part of the poem touched my heart. The hope for life, out of his dark thoughts, with a little fear made me tear up a bit.

Ek jugnu dikha hai tou aur bhi hotey hongey

Phir jaadu bhi hota hoga, Chirago mei Jin hotey hongey

Dariya aur sapney bhi pure hotey hongey

Har raat Ek Chand mere liye chamakta hoga

Chandni mere farishton ke farman barasta hoga

Not sure what Reet's problem is, I thought she was hoping for Katha to get married and move away from her family. Now, she chose to fill Teji's ears with nonsense..... Chahti kya hain yeh? 😡 I liked Mama G's stance of staying cool despite nonsense spoken by Reet. She didn't pounce on Reet in Katha's defense too👍🏼 This lady has a great head on her shoulders.

I got creepy-crawlies looking at Teji and her antics🤬 She snooped around her grown son's journal. And patch up gift and we are the same team-Ewwww........I don't want to say it, but it is at another level of cringe👎🏼She is slipping in that an employee can't be Viaan's wife, whatever that means, even if the said woman is a CEO of a big company. Does she want a woman who stays home?

I want Katha's realization to come slower- she will probably have to fight with herself, her own sense of loyalty to Adi and guilt, Aarav and his emotions, and all other kabaab mein haddis🤢Aditi will nail it

Aditi and Adnan are a treat to watch as Katha and Viaan. Aditi is a power house, no question about it. But, Adnan had owned Viaan, his voice modulation as he read out the poem, his body language showing his genuine remorse as he completely surrendered to her, his guilt and his hope and his mirth as he feels like there may be a chance that she had forgiven him out of the world👍🏼👍🏼

Kudos to the entire team for bringing us such a soulful journey👏

Will add some tags.......

Such wonderfully written lines, and thank u Columbia for explaining their meaning beautifully (my Hindi is good so I didn’t need translation - but your post is much more than a translation ❤️).

Anyone know who is the writer who wrote these lines for the show? I didn’t think such fine writers existed in itv.

Originally posted by: gina24

Thank you so much for this dear❤️

These will always be the best dialogues for this series for me.

Realisation itna sundar hai I wonder confession kaisa hoga

Viaan’s darkness and past will always be a part of him and his path crossing with Katha who even though has so many tragedies around her shines like diamond; it was bound for him to fall for her and her positivity

These lines they really touched my heart -

Haan pyaar tou hai,

Voh mujhse baat karti hai

Yeh kehke khaas karti hai

Voh Haske dheere se khusiyaar karti hai

Voh dekhti hai meri aur surkh mere halaat karti hai

These lines remind me of the opening lines of the song “Abhi mujh mein kahin, baki thodi si hai zindagi… Jagi dhadkan nayi, jaana ki zinda hoon main abhi” (There is a little life left in me somewhere, a new heartbeat just now tells me that I am yet alive).

Thanks a lot for this Columbia...

My favourite lines have to be...

Sach kahun - raaton ko mai andheron se pehchanta thaa

Jab tak mai jugnon ko nahi jaanta thaa

Beautiful explanation!! I definitely needed this because quite a few lines went over my head while watching.. Thank you so much Columbia 🤗

I loved this scene so so much ❤️ jitni baar dekhu mann nahi bharega mera.. it was just that beautiful 😍

Thanks for such lovely post and explanations. Such a deep characterisation.I am in love with katha and viaan.It will be treat to watch

Columbia yaar... Thank u sooo much for writing out the poem and decipher it so beautifully💖I really wanted to delve deeper into the poetry.Upar se the way u play with words is something else...

Since yesterday I am in awe of the poetry scene.. Baki episode I just ignored coz I want to relive the poetry scene every single time not wanting to get distracted by the negative character and spoil my bubble😄

My fav lines of the whole poetry would been

Andhere mei roshni ka aana

ya March ki garmi mei Kuch sochke kapkapana

Chaddar mei muh chipaana

Bistar se uth na paana

Mann ki mej par bhaitkar

Usse ghanto batiyana

Chatpatana, muskurana

Apne ho baalon ko sehlana

Buss uski yaadon mei khotey chale jaana

Buss khotey chale jaana

The way he said apne hi baalon ko sehlana with a little chukle was sooo cute.... 💖

I am toh crushing big time on his voice... It's too soothing feels like therapy.. Putting both sides of earphones on, sitting somewhere alone in a silent place feeling the moment and just listening to his voice is my therapy 💫