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Posted: 1 years ago

Part 1 


Fascinating and very Interesting Update 


did something that Arjun and Maya hate each other 

so much 

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Thank u very much Kavitha,Taahir,Coderlady,Khwaishfan,Glitter_Goldie 4 the lovely support.



The valley of hatred and love Part 2

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Arjun and Maya remember their past...

Arjun,Maya,Veera,Rudra,Saanjh and Reyansh studied in the same college.

Arjun-Maya were classmates.

During the class hours,Maya and Arjun always stared at each other admiring each other secretly.

Maya thought:When you look at me,I feel satisfied Arjun.

Arjun thought:I know that you love me Maya.

One day Arjun went near Maya.

Arjun:Maya...you must have noticed me looking at you when others were busy with something else.I have seen you also looking at me.

Maya blushed.

Arjun:I know that you are intelligent enough to understand why I was looking at you.

I also have the brain to understand the meaning of the way you look at me.I love you Maya.

Maya blushed.

Arjun:Why are you not saying anything?

Maya replied with attitude:You said that you have the brain to understand everything.Then why should I speak out?

Arjun:Because hearing that from your mouth is special.

She blushed looking at him romantically.

Maya:I love you too Arjun.

He became very happy.



Arjun-Maya enjoyed a lot in the swimming pool sharing passionate glances with each other.

Arjun-Maya secretly went to the bar and enjoyed the drinks over there.

The Prom night came.

As per the fairy tale theme all the pairs dressed up like fairy tale couples.

Veera and Rudra shared a romantic eye lock.

Arjun and Maya looked at each other romantically and they remembered their favourite fairy tale couple.

All the couples danced together.

While dancing Arjun and Maya imagined romancing with each other.



Arjun sat closer to Maya and said:I imagined our wedding and a happy married life.I can't wait for that day.

Maya became shy.

Maya:Are you not dreaming too much?We are still in college.We need to build up our career first.

Arjun:I know that.But what to do?Automatically I am dreaming of our wedding.

Both smiled shyly.

The election time in college....

Arjun and Maya gave their names without knowing that the other person is standing for the opposition party.

Arjun came to know that with a shock.He confronted Maya.

Arjun:Maya,are you standing for the election?

Maya:Yes Arjun.When my friends forced me,I decided to stand for the election.

Arjun:I am also standing for the election.

Maya was surprised:You also?

Arjun:Yes.Maya..please opt out of the election.

Maya was stunned:But why Arjun?

Arjun:Because I am standing for the opposition party.I don't want to compete against you.If we both take part in election,we will be rivals.

Maya:Arjun...we love each other.Even if we compete against each other in the election,we will not be rivals.Maybe for others we will be rivals.But for us,we are not rivals,but lovers.

Arjun:But one of us will win and lose.It may effect us.

Maya:Either you or I will win or lose.How does it affect us if we take it in the competition spirit?

We should keep our personal life aside.

Arjun:You are giving excuses for not backing out of the election.You only told me that your friends forced you to take part in the competition.So you are not that interested.Then why can't you back out?

Maya:Because I promised my friends that I will participate for them.I can't break my promise.

Arjun:So your friends are more important than me?

Maya:Arjun!

Arjun:I realized that you have not loved me at all.Our relationship was only time pass for you.

Maya could not bear it anymore.

Maya:Stop it Arjun.

Arjun:Why should I stop it Maya?It's the truth.There is no love between us.

Maya lost her control and said:Yes.There is no love between us.You never loved me.That's why you are fighting with me over such a silly thing.You killed the love I had for you.So let us break up.

Arjun was shocked.

Arjun:I got angry with you and lost my control over my tongue.But I never thought of breaking up with you.But you want break up?I am shocked.

Maya:If there is no understanding,break up is better Arjun.

Arjun got irritated and said:Yes,then let's break up.

Maya felt upset.

Maya:When I suggested break up,you did'nt feel like saying "Maya,please don't break up".

Arjun:Why should I tell you that when you are adamant about your decision?

Veera-Rudra and Saanjh-Reyansh were shocked.

Saanjh:Please don't take a hasty decision.

Veera:Parting ways over a silly reason is painful.

Reyansh:This ego is not good.

Rudra:Guys...don't be silly.

Arjun said painfully:Now nothing is left.

Maya said painfully:Everything is over.

Veera-Rudra and Saanjh-Reyansh became upset.

Maya:You defeated me emotionally Arjun.But I will defeat you in the election.

Arjun:I challenge you.You cannot defeat me.I will win.

Maya:We will see.

Arjun:Yes.We will see.

Arjun-Maya walked away in different directions with self determination.

Saanjh:Why these 2 can't understand anything?

Reyansh:Some relationships are meant to be short lived because of ego Saanjh.We are helpless.

They were upset.



Though Arjun and Maya stood for the election,another party only won.

Both Arjun and Maya looked at each other in embarrassment.

Slowly it turned into an emotional eye lock.

Present...

Arjun and Maya shed tears.

Maya:You hurt me a lot Arjun.

Arjun:You hurt me a lot Maya.


Edited by jasminerahul - 1 years ago
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Posted: 1 years ago

Awesome and Painful Update



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Posted: 1 years ago

Awesome and emotional part

Loved it dearđź’•

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon 🤗🤗

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Posted: 1 years ago

Arjun and Maya used to be in love. What went wrong?

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Arjun was out of line suggesting that she back away from the election.

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They let their ego get in the way of a relationship. Both need to compromise.

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Maya and Arjun secretly admire each other, and love confessions are romantic. It was shocking to see Arjun and Maya representing different parties. Maya was right in saying that personal life and elections should be separate.  I'm sad they broke up for silly reasons. Other couples gave the right advice to Arya. Arjun and Maya, telling each other that you hurt me were painful.

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Posted: 1 years ago

Part 2

Great update.... well written

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Thank u very much Kavitha,Taahir,Coderlady,Khwaishfan,Glitter_Goldie 4 the lovely comments.




The valley of hatred and love Part 3

 

Veera meets her lover Rudra.

Rudra:So unknowingly you became the saviour of Maya because of your long beautiful tresses. If you were not there at the launch party,Maya would not have been able to prove the quality of her hair product.

Veera smiles.

Rudra caresses her hair romantically.

Rudra:I love your beautiful hair.

She blushes.

Rudra:But you are blessed with beautifully hair.It's an open secret that the secret of your long hair is not Maya's hair product.

He giggles.Veera kicks his shoulder funnily.

He laughs saying:I just said the truth.But you won't admit it as Maya is your favourite cousin sister.

Veera smiles.

Veera:Maybe you are right.But Maya's hair product is good for sure.Maya is truthful.

Rudra:I agree.But Arjun won't agree with that.

Veera:It's because of ego.

Rudra:That's true.




Saanjh is having coffee along with her lover Reyansh at the coffee shop.

Reyansh:Arjun and Maya used to love each other a lot.I can't believe that they are behaving like stupid business rivals.

Saanjh:Arjun's male ego only spoiled everything.But luckily their fight did not affect both the families.They want Arjun and Maya to unite.

Reyansh:But how can they unite Arjun and Maya now?

Saanjh:They are planning to get them married.Only Veera and I are aware of that.

Reyansh is shocked.

Reyansh:They can't even stand each other.Then how will they get them married?

Saanjh:I don't know.But they are planning.But I also wish Arjun and Maya unite.Are they not a sweet jodi?

Reyansh smiles:Yes...like us.

Saanjh smiles with a blush on her face.



Nikhila:Arjun..you are successful in the business field.Then why don't you get settled?
Arjun:I'm settled Mom,but not by marrying.I hate marriage.

Mehen:But why?Don't you think that your parents are happy in their married life?

ARJUN:Yes.But that does'nt mean that i should get married.I'm married to my job.

N:Your opinion will change after marriage.

ARJUN:No way....

M:No Arjun...it's time for you to get married.Don't delay.Think about your parents who live for you.You are so selfish and arrogant because of your successful career that you don’t care about your parents?



Arjun feels sad.
ARJUN:Ok....you find a girl.I will marry her.Only for your sake.
They both smile.
N:We have already chosen a girl.She has been there in our mind for long.Don't you want to know who she is?
ARJUN:No.I don't care who she is.Because I am marrying only for you both.So the girl does’nt matter to me.
He goes away.Nikhila and Mehen become dull.

Nikhila:I am getting tense now.I hope everything goes well.

Mehen:Hopefully everything goes well.

 

 


Rishab and Mihika also try to blackmail Maya emotionally.
Rishab:Maya...you are getting older.You should have a family life now.
Mihika:Ya...you had promised us that you will marry once you are established in the business field.
MAYA:Ok..ok...i'm not denying it...i will marry anyone you choose.But to be frank i'm not interested in marriage.I'm not interested in any guy.
M:So we are fixing your marriage.
MAYA:Ok fine...
R:Do you want to see the guy we are interested in?

Maya becomes emotional.
MAYA:No...because i have no dreams about my guy.All my wedding dreams were shattered long ago.

Maya leaves the room.

Mihika:Rishab…will our decision become wrong?Maya has not come out of her past yet.

Rishab:No Mihika.Whatever happened in the past was unnecessary.We should make Maya understand it.

Mihika nods.

 



The wedding place….

Maya is dressed up like a bride.She is brought to the mandap.
She sees the bride groom coming.She is shocked to see him.
Her lips shivers:Arjun!
Arjun is shocked to see his bride.
ARJUN:Maya!


Edited by jasminerahul - 1 years ago