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Posted: 1 years ago

Thank you for the pm and update 


Part 25

Good update…. outstandingly written  

so Maan realised that Geet was hesitant when she responded

well Geet was unable to sleep

of cos Maan assumes she has slept

oh Maan does push ups to punish himself for smoking

Geet's curiosity seeing this was justified 

Maan was surprised that Geet was awake

Geet's question was reasonable

liked Maan's concern for Geet

as expected they were affected by each other's closeness

hmm Geet's boss wants to meet Maan

Maan is invited to the company's party

what will she do? 


update soon 

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Posted: 1 years ago

the attaraction is so obvious now....loving it anyway

here geets colleges wants to meet her hubby but will maan agree? given the secrecy he is maintaining? eagerly waiting for more now

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Posted: 1 years ago

So Maan thinks geet has slept and doing push-up as punishment for smoking eh. Amd got caught red handed. Poor guy did not know what to say 

Both caught with their near brushes both feeling the heat


hmm wondering how the event would turn out when Maan goes with her. But would he go?


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Posted: 1 years ago

Part 25


Fabulous Update 


Wow Candle light dinner and both did not realize 

Geet awake and watching Maan doing his excise 

they are slowly getting comfortable with each other around 

Geet's boss and collegues wants to meet Maan

and she suggested the office party is coming up soon then 

they can see Maan  

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Posted: 1 years ago

Wow... waiting to read more maneet love scenes...😛

Did Maan used those cigarette which were in car that's why geet could smell him too... I didn't really get that particular scene. 

Does he punishing himself for already smoking or to resist himself from smoking.

I guess there is big secret hidden in the tale...

Maybe Maan is serial killer or not...or he is some detective or officer as well... 

I am thinking second thought will be right. He really must be officer or something like that. 😉

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Posted: 1 years ago

He punishes himself for smoking. Then why do it in the first place?


The attraction is stirring between them.

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Posted: 1 years ago

Great part

Is Geet hiding something 

She cannot express her thoughts to maan 

Cont soon 

Thanks for pm 

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Posted: 1 years ago

Part 26

 

 

 

 

Owner- Geet

 

G- Yes sir

 

Owner- Ek din milao apne husband se. We are like a family, sab ki family se mile hain. Milao kabhi

 

G- Ji

 

‘Kabhi kyun sir, iss week jo company dinner hai ussi mein bula lijiye naa sir’

 

Owner- Ye bhi acha idea hai. Uss din apne husband ko bhi le aana

 

Geet nods

 

G- Ji sir

 

++++++++

 

Company dinner ka din kareeb aa raha hai

 

Geet is in dilemma to invite Maan or not

 

Poora time isi procrastination mein nikal jaata hai

 

Finally Geet ko laga ki-  aaj shaam Dinner hai... Aaj office se Ghar jakar discuss Karti hu... Leave it to him…aana hai to aaye... Nahi to nahi…

 

But office ke baad colleagues directly take her to the company dinner venue

 

Geet phir thinks ki – Ab Ghar jaana hi nahi hua toh no need to mention company dinner at all

 

Venue mein phohonch sab toh few colleagues ask ki

 

‘Tumahara husband kab tak ayega?’

 

G- Nahi wo nahi aa paayege. Unko kuch aur kaam hai

 

They all say ki - Nahi koi nahi. Late aayenge toh bhi its okay. Tum bol do aane ke liye

 

Geet says okay but does not send any message nor calls Maan

 

Fir thoda late hua

 

Na Geet ghar aayi, Na Maaan Dinner party par aaya

 

Wahan party par log bar bar pooch rahe the

 

Yaahan Maan bhi thoda pareshaan haiast time ki baarish wale episode ke baad se

 

He is wondering koi problem ho gai hai kya hai, itna late kyun ho raha hai Geet ko

 

Wahan Geet finally takes out her phone in front of everyone ki fine sabke saamne message kar rahi hoon

 

She is internally panicking a bit ki kya likhkhe

 

Itne mein it shows Maan ka incoming call

 

Everyone says ki put it on speaker. Let us convince him

 

Darr darr ke she picks up and phone uthaate hi she says-

 

G-Tum free ho gaye kya finally?

 

M-.....

 

 He doesn't know what to say... Is this some secret code? Is she in trouble?

He looks in direction of the hidden tools he had used on the reporter and tries to remember ki landlord ki car ki duplicate chaabi bana kar same jagah rakhi hai kya…

 

Geet is relieved ki he is able to play along

 

 G-Agar free ho gaye ho toh yahan party mein aajao…sab log ki bohot ichcha hai milne ki

 

Maan is now 100% convinced ki kuch to problem hai. This is her call for help. He starts to retrieve the necessary things.

 

Itne mein he hears couple of voices in background inviting him to come

 

Maan pauses his action

 

M- Address?

 

Geet quickly tells the restaurant name

 

M-hmm aata hoon

 

He disconnects the call and sits down for moment

 

Is this a party or a setup? He can't be sure... maybe he is bit more paranoid ever since that reporter showed up

 

He borrows landlords car again, stashes some emergency tools under the car and dresses up properly to go to the restaurant.

 

+++++

 

 

Finally Maan arrives at the party in a black tucked in shirt with sleeves rolled up and jeans

 

Geet spots him walking in and scans the attire head to toe

 

He looks at Geet and walks towards the table

 

G- Maan is here

 

She informs the table

 

Inform karne ki zarurat thi nahi because all the eyes were on him

 

Sab log welcome him

 

He sees ki everyone was having food and drinks and sees ki Geet ke samne bhi beer rakhi hai.

 

He knows she doesn't like it... maybe she called him out of peer pressure, and she needs different kind of help

 

He laughs and says hello to everyone and apologizse for being late.

 

He reaches Geet’s side and picks up her beer glass and says ki he will apologize being late with this drink and chugs it down in one go

 

Ye sab dekh kar everyone is extra happy ki he is not a stuck-up snob or low EQ person… he really was busy

 

Sab log start conversing with him and dragging him into various discussions and jokes... thodi der baad koi dekhe to lagega ki Maan actual employee hai and Geet uski wife, guest hai party mein

 

Geet also thinks ki he sure can charm anyone when he wants to... isse bachke rehna chahiye.. kitna act hai to get something out of her and kitna genuine hai... Kya pata

Party is going very well

 

He is getting along well with everyone

 

He figures out ki party kaafi time se planned thi but Geet didn't want to invite him

 

He feels a bit... what is it? Heartburn? Disappointed? Acidity?

 

He doesn't know…but decides if Geet doesn't want to involve him then woh bhi nahi hoga

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Posted: 1 years ago

Nice update 

Geet maan still not comfortable with each other they still not able to share there thoughts with each other due to which there relationship not getting improve how they marriage life will start and how they will fall for each other 

Update next part soon 

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Posted: 1 years ago

Loved it dear

Awesome and beautiful part🤗

Hmm 🙄🙄 Geet being in a fix is really obvious and now she can't avoid the situation after the current incidents

Maan finally reached the party but it made him feel uninvited when he came to know that the party was preplanned 

Maan gelled well with the entire office team of Geet making her more conscious of the things

Waiting for more

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon 🤗🤗