~~~~~~~Suspicious Partners~~~~~~~~
Index
Part 1
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/161906486
Part 2
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/161939710
Part 3
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/161990694
Part 4
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/162004141
Part 5
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/162023264
Part 6
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/162032946
Part 7
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/162064956
Part 8
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/162084615
Part 9
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/162167676
Part 10
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/162192186
Part 11
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/162197260
Part 12
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/162203605
Part 13
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/162217727
Part 14
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/162317133
Part 15
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/162342526
Part 16
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/162366855
Part 17
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/162373667
Part 18
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/162402861
Part 19
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/162419337
Part 20
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/162455264
Part 21
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/162465458
Part 22
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/162512883
Part 23
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/162548761
Part 24
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/162568329
Part 25
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/162619026
Part 26
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/162701021
Part 27
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/162733123
Part 28
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/162742636
Part 29
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/162760826
Part 30
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/162808624
Part 31
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/162854453
Starting this new story. Hope you enjoy it
Part 1
It’s a crowded area with lots of people moving around
In that busy area lies a tiny office with a sign board
‘ Geet Detective Agency’
It was Geet’s dream to become a detective. But her lack of experience and her being a women came in way of here getting hired
But she was not the one to get bogged down. She opened her own detective agency
Didi! Didi! Chai
Geet comes out of her daydreams hearing Chintu calling her name
G- Thanks Chintu
Chintu- Didi 6 mahine toh ho gaye makhiyaan maarte huye. Iss vaar rent nahi diya office ka toh office band
Geet sinks down in her chair
G- I know. Aur use bhi bhayanak
Chintu- who kya?
G- Shaadi. 6 mahine ki mauhlat maangi thi baba se. Kuch nahi hua. Ab baba pakadke shaadi kara denge
She buries her face
Chintu- Ab didi uncle ji bhi kya karein, apke peeche aapki do behene bhi toh hai naa
G-Toh unki shaadi kara dein naa
Chintu- Himmat hai toh jaake bol do. Himmat hai?
Geet looks at Chintu and grumbles, she knows she can’t’ say anything to ger father. He is too strict & the patriarch of their middle-class conservative family. And most importantly her baba is stubborn, just like her
G-uurggg!!!
Chintu- Waise didi aapke naam ka ye lifafa deke gaya hai koi bahar
G- Mere naam ka?
Geet proceeds to open the heavy envelope as Chintu sees himself out
Envelop has a whole bunch of cash money and a letter
Geet starts reading the letter
Ms Geet
Envelop mein aapko pachaas hazzaar (50, 000) rupees milenge. Ye aapka advance payment hai. Baaki ke paise aapko kaam ke baad milenge. Aap ye kaam karna chahein toh apne office ke neeche aa sakti hain. Saamne aapko ek black sedan khadi milegi. Usmein baith jaayiye baaki baatein wahin karenge. Aur agar aap ye kaam nahi karna chahti toh aap ye paise rakh sakti hain
-MSG
Geet finishes reading
G- MSG?
Geet ko samajh nahi aaraha kya akre. Kaam kya hai ye jaane ki curiosity bhi hai. Finally, ek kaam aaya hai uski excitement bhi hai. Paise bhi chahiye par ye darr bhi hai ki ye kaisa kaam hoga aur itni secrecy kyun hai?
Curiosity gets better of her, and she finds herself on the road under looking for a black car
She finds a black sedan parked on the road.
The car is is sticking out like a sore thumb in that busy overpopulated marketplace
She cautiously walks towards the car
The driver in his white uniform approaches her
‘Miss Geet’
She nods
He opens the passenger door for her
She looks inside to see a man in a black suit and wearing black shades sitting in there
He looks someone of high stature and class, someone with money
That she expected
But she had not expected that the man would be almost of her age. Maybe a few years older but he was younger than her expectation
He speaks up and Geet realizes his voice matches his physique, he had a manly commanding voice
‘Miss Geet, please sit.
Geet obeys & sits
G- Are you MSG?
She inquires
He nods without elaborating more
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Geet is back to her office pondering about what happened
She re-looks at the new envelope that she got
The envelope has a picture of a scar
‘Aap mujhe iss sheher mein Shalini, Shalu naam ki ladki ka pata lagayengi. Umar 19-20. Haath pe aisa ek scar. Dhyaan rahe, pata chalein toh aap bass mujhe batayengi. Aaap kisi se koi baat nahi karengi iss barein mein. Aapke paas 3 din hain iss kaam ke liye. Baaki paise kaam ke baad aapko mil jaayenge’
Geet rewinds the instruction the man gave to her
Edited by NilzStorywriter - 12 days ago
Wow Di this is going to be exciting and interesting too.... Do continue with your good work... 🤗
❤️
Congratulations for new story ☺️
Interesting part,geet as a detective sayad first time padh rahi hu 😀 eagerly waiting for next part 🤗❤️
part 1
Congratulations for new story
nice update geet is detective here and she has own agency I like the conversation between chintu and geet .MSG is here what is G here ?
waitimg for next part update soon
Edited by GuruDd - 5 months agoCongrats on the new story!
thanks for the pm!
Part 1
Captivating update.... well written
so Geet is a detective
Geet and Chintu share a good bond
oh she has been given six months by her dad
now she has to get married
alas she cannot refuse her dad
glad that she finally got her first case from MSG!
seems like Maan is MSG
update soon
Gurmeet Choudhary Drashti Dhami Geet Hui Sabse Parayi