Suspicious Partners- MG || (Part 31|Page 78)

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Posted: 5 months ago

~~~~~~~Suspicious Partners~~~~~~~~


Part 1

Part 2

Part 3

Part 4

Part 5

Part 6

Part 7

Part 8

Part 9

Part 10

Part 11

Part 12

Part 13

Part 14

Part 15

Part 16

Part 17

Part 18

Part 19

Part 20

Part 21

Part 22

Part 23

Part 24

Part 25

Part 26

Part 27

Part 28

Part 29

Part 30

Part 31

Starting this new story. Hope you enjoy it

Part 1

It’s a crowded area with lots of people moving around


In that busy area lies a tiny office with a sign board


‘ Geet Detective Agency’


It was Geet’s dream to become a detective. But her lack of experience and her being a women came in way of here getting hired


But she was not the one to get bogged down. She opened her own detective agency


Didi! Didi! Chai


Geet comes out of her daydreams hearing Chintu calling her name


G- Thanks Chintu


Chintu- Didi 6 mahine toh ho gaye makhiyaan maarte huye. Iss vaar rent nahi diya office ka toh office band


Geet sinks down in her chair


G- I know. Aur use bhi bhayanak


Chintu- who kya?


G- Shaadi. 6 mahine ki mauhlat maangi thi baba se. Kuch nahi hua. Ab baba pakadke shaadi kara denge


She buries her face


Chintu- Ab didi uncle ji bhi kya karein, apke peeche aapki do behene bhi toh hai naa


G-Toh unki shaadi kara dein naa


Chintu- Himmat hai toh jaake bol do. Himmat hai?


Geet looks at Chintu and grumbles, she knows she can’t’ say anything to ger father. He is too strict & the patriarch of their middle-class conservative family. And most importantly her baba is stubborn, just like her




Chintu- Waise didi aapke naam ka ye lifafa deke gaya hai koi bahar


G- Mere naam ka?


Geet proceeds to open the heavy envelope as Chintu sees himself out


Envelop has a whole bunch of cash money and a letter


Geet starts reading the letter



Ms Geet


Envelop mein aapko pachaas hazzaar (50, 000) rupees milenge. Ye aapka advance payment hai. Baaki ke paise aapko kaam ke baad milenge. Aap ye kaam karna chahein toh apne office ke neeche aa sakti hain. Saamne aapko ek black sedan khadi milegi. Usmein baith jaayiye baaki baatein wahin karenge. Aur agar aap ye kaam nahi karna chahti toh aap ye paise rakh sakti hain




Geet finishes reading




Geet ko samajh nahi aaraha kya akre. Kaam kya hai ye jaane ki curiosity bhi hai. Finally, ek kaam aaya hai uski excitement bhi hai. Paise bhi chahiye par ye darr bhi hai ki ye kaisa kaam hoga aur itni secrecy kyun hai?



Curiosity gets better of her, and she finds herself on the road under looking for a black car


She finds a black sedan parked on the road.


The car is is sticking out like a sore thumb in that busy overpopulated marketplace


She cautiously walks towards the car


The driver in his white uniform approaches her


‘Miss Geet’


She nods


He opens the passenger door for her


She looks inside to see a man in a black suit and wearing black shades sitting in there


He looks someone of high stature and class, someone with money


That she expected


But she had not expected that the man would be almost of her age. Maybe a few years older but he was younger than her expectation


He speaks up and Geet realizes his voice matches his physique, he had a manly commanding voice


‘Miss Geet, please sit.


Geet obeys & sits


G- Are you MSG?


She inquires


He nods without elaborating more




Geet is back to her office pondering about what happened


She re-looks at the new envelope that she got


The envelope has a picture of a scar


‘Aap mujhe iss sheher mein Shalini, Shalu naam ki ladki ka pata lagayengi. Umar 19-20. Haath pe aisa ek scar. Dhyaan rahe, pata chalein toh aap bass mujhe batayengi. Aaap kisi se koi baat nahi karengi iss barein mein. Aapke paas 3 din hain iss kaam ke liye. Baaki paise kaam ke baad aapko mil jaayenge’


Geet rewinds the instruction the man gave to her










Edited by NilzStorywriter - 12 days ago
Posted: 5 months ago

Wow Di this is going to be exciting and interesting too.... Do continue with your good work... 🤗


Posted: 5 months ago

Congratulations for new story ☺️

Interesting part,geet as a detective sayad first time padh rahi hu 😀 eagerly waiting for next part 🤗❤️

Posted: 5 months ago

Congrats on new story. Interesting concept with geet want to be a detective and MSG, well wait for further secrets

Posted: 5 months ago

Very Interesting start

Geet Detective 🤨🤨 this was really cool 

So she gets a first case now

Waiting for more

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon 🤗🤗

Posted: 5 months ago

Interesting concept 

Please continue 

Posted: 5 months ago

part 1 

Congratulations for new story 

nice update geet is detective here and she has own agency I like the conversation between chintu and geet .MSG is here what is G here ?

 waitimg for next part update soon 

Edited by GuruDd - 5 months ago
Posted: 5 months ago

Congrats on the new story! 

thanks for the pm! 

Part 1

Captivating update.... well written

so Geet is a detective

Geet and Chintu share a good bond

oh she has been given six months by her dad 

now she has to get married

alas she cannot refuse her dad

glad that she finally got her first case from MSG! 

seems like Maan is MSG

update soon

Gurmeet Choudhary Drashti Dhami Geet Hui Sabse Parayi 

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