Bhagya Lakshmi

Meri Minty ~ RishMi OS ❤️

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Posted: 1 years ago

The story starts with Lakshmi is talking to rishi on a phone and running behind their 4 year old notorious son Ansh with the glass of milk in her hand. Ansh was running, jumping like a monkey. On the other hand Rishi was scolding Lakshmi for being careless. she was unwell from the past few days and rishi was out of Mumbai for business work. Also, she didn't let anyone tell rishi about her health issue. After knowing this rishi got super angry at her. He was scolding Lakshmi so hard and the phone was on speaker that ansh was hearing Everything and laughing on lakshmi. Rishi also heard him laughing so he burst on ansh too. Ansh got scared of rishi's loud voice and he also started crying. Lakshmi offers him milk and ask him to stop crying, but ansh ran away, pushing her hand and glass fell down. Frustratingly Rishi also hangs up the call. 


LAKSHMI : Hey mata rani. Phir dono baap bete k beech fas gayi. 


She wipes the floor and went out of their room adjusting her saree calling for ansh. 


BUA : Lakshmi kya hua? Ansh phirse kyu ro rha hai? 


LAKSHMI : Buaji woh main baad mein batati hun.....ansh kaha hai ye bataiye please.


BUA : ayush ke sath hai.


Lakshmi goes to ayush, but he told her that ansh is with his dadi. Lakshmi search for them and finally see both dadi-pota in kitchen area. Neelam was carrying ansh with one hand and preparing his favourite chocolate milk with another hand.


LAKSHMI : Accha toh yha hai dono dadi-pota.


NEELAM : Aao...aao....Lakshmi.....kaafi complaints aayi hai tumhari aur rishi ki.


LAKSHMI : Meri? Meri kyu? Woh mummy ji ansh ko rishi ne daanta maine nahi.


NEELAM : Rishi se toh main baadmein niptungi. Lekin tum Lakshmi.....tumhe rishi ko rokna chahie tha na. Pata hai kitna ro rha tha....bilkul chup nahi ho rha tha....ayush tak se nhi maana aaj.


LAKSHMI : Mummy ji woh rishi bhot gussa the....mujhe bhi daant rahe the....bolne ka mauka tak nahi de rhe the.

 

NEELAM : Khair jaanedo. Tumhe yaad hai na shaam ko Mr.khanna k pune wale hotel ki opening ceremony hai.


LAKSHMI : Ji mummy ji....lekin main nahi aana chahti.....thodi weakness lag rhi hai. 


NEELAM : Thik hai phir khayal rakhna apna. Hum sudeep se kahenge kuch light food bnaye tumhare liye. Time se dinner karna aur medicine lena. Hum sab morning mein hi ayenge.


LAKSHMI : okay Mummy ji.

 

NEELAM : abhi ansh ko humare paas rehne do....milk pikar sojayega ye phir lejana isey. 



AT EVENING 



Everyone left for pune. Now only lakshmi and ansh left in Oberoi mansion. Lakshmi went to ansh's room to see him playing with his favourite Spiderman toy. She goes and sit in front of him holding her ears.



LAKSHMI : Anshhh....mumma se ab tak Naraz ho. Dekho mumma kaan pakad k sorry. Ab maan jao.....papa ko mumma bhot daatengi. 


ANSH : promish me!


LAKSHMI : promishhh!!


ANSH : nohh. Jhuth bol rhi ho. Papa bhi promish krte hai phir tod dete hai. Kya kaha tha unhone aapshe ki 5 daysh mein ajayenge. Ab tak nahi aaye. LIKE MINTU LIKE MINTY.


LAKSHMI : Nahi maanoge?


ANSH : Nohhhh!!


Lakshmi bites her lip and started tickling ansh on his stomach to which he started laughing and Lakshmi hug him picking him up in her arms. She took him to their room and made him lay on the bed.


LAKSHMI : Ansh yhi raho....mumma abhi ayegi thike hai.


ANSH : okay mumma!!

  

Lakshmi goes to take a water jug from the kitchen and also inform sudeep & sundar to close all the doors and windows properly. She went back to the room, keep the water bottle on the table and lay beside ansh. She was so sleepy, but ansh was not sleeping. Now It's 2.00 am and Lakshmi also lost her sleepy mode. Ansh ask her to tell him stories. Both mom-son were enjoying each other company until the door knocked. Lakshmi opened the door as Sudeep calls her. Sudeep bhaiya came in with luggage. 


LAKSHMI : sudeep bhaiya ye sab kya hai? itn sara saaman? 


SUDDEEP : Bhabhi ji woh (he turned pointing towards door)


Lakshmi saw rishi standing there. she got happy and go close to him. sudeep bhaiya started smiling, looking at them. Rishi gives him cute-angry looks and sudeep bhaiya goes from there wishing them good night. Lakshmi closed the door and look at rishi. She hugged rishi tightly and he hugged her back. Both were lost in each other arms. They broke the hug when they heard ansh murmuring something about them.


ANSH : papa k aate hi mumma ansh ko bhul gayi (making puppy face)


Lakshmi laughed at him and rishi also smiles.


LAKSHMI : nahi ansh mumma aapko nahi bhuli.


ANSH : Jhuthi ho papa ki tarah


RISHI : anshhhhhhh!!! (giving him an angry look enough to scare him)  


Ansh started giggling and jumped off from bed. He went towards rishi, pulls his jacket asking him to sit down. rishi does and ansh kisses him in his cheek and said sorry holding ears. rishi smiles at his innocency and thinks to tease him more. 


RISHI : no ansh..... papa aapse bhot naraaz hai.


ANSH : Ansh ne kuch nahi kiya phir papa kyu naraash hai.


RISHI : kyuki jab papa yahan nahi the toh aapne mumma ka khayal nahi rakha, aur mumma bimaar pad gayi.


ANSH : shorry papa. aage shey aap kahin jayoge toh ansh minty ka acche se khayal rakhega.


RISHI : oyeeee!!!! mummy hai teri, meri minty hai.


ANSH : Nahiiiiii!! meri minty hai.


RISHI : Accha woh kaise?


ANSH : mumma ne ansh ko aaj mintu kaha.... toh mumma ansh ki minty hui na.

 

Lakshmi's eyes widened and bite her tongue looking at rishi.


RISHI : mintu main hun, aur iss mintu ki ye minty hai (Looking at lakshmi giving her cute angry looks)


ANSH : nahi nahi nahi....minty meri hai meri hai meri hai.


Rishi was getting jealous. he started running behind ansh. he caught ansh and started dishoom dishoom with him. he picked him and made him fall on the bed like a WWE moment. ansh again gets up and started punching rishi with his small cute hands. they both fell on the bed. ansh sitting on rishi's stomach. Both dad-son playing with each other. Lakshmi was looking at them in a 'AWIEEE'. She was so happy to see them like this. It was a rare moment. Rishi hardly spends time with ansh. Lakshmi took her cell phone and captured these precious moments. Rishi shows ansh the gifts he brought for him. Ansh was excitedly opening the gifts. Lakshmi coughs lightly to get their attention.


ANSH : See mumma.....papa ansh k liye kitne gifts laaye hai.


LAKSHMI : ha dekh rahi hun.....aur ye bhi dekh rahi hun ki papa k aate hi ab ansh mumma ko bhul gaya.


ANSH : No mummaaa!!!


RISHI : ansh aapki mumma jealous ho rahi hai.....ab bhul gaya toh bhul gaya (smirks looking at Lakshmi)


ANSH : no papa.... ansh minty ko kaishey bhulega.


RISHI : oyee....tu phir minty bola....kaha na meri hai minty....aur main mintu


ANSH : Nohh nohhh naiiii (saying this he collected all the gifts and ran away to his room)


RISHI : Lakshmi kya sikhati ho isey.....kitna ziddi hai ye aur shaitaan bhi.


LAKSHMI : Tumpe hi gaya hai


He goes close to her hugging her by her waist. He asks her how is her health now or is there anything serious. Lakshmi cleared him that there is nothing to worry about. 


RISHI : kitni baar kaha hai tumse apna dhyan rakha karo.

 

LAKSHMI : Rishiii main theek hun bilkul......kuch nahi hua mujhe..... bas thoda sa low feel kar rahi thi.....ab tum aagye ho na.


RISHI : main aagya hun toh kya? Han? 


Lakshmi put her hand around his neck and look into his eyes. 


LAKSHMI : Rishiiii......tumhare bina Mera kisi cheez mein Mann hi nahi lag raha tha. 


Rishi smiles.


RISHI : Accha (caresses her face with index finger)


LAKSHMI : Hann....mujhe aadat nahi hai na tumhare bina rehne ki......aur pehli baar tumse itna door rahi hun mai.....upar se dekho sirf ek hafte ka keh kar gaye the....tumne toh 10 din laga diye.....tumne bataya bhi nahi ki tum wapas aarhe ho.....subha jab phone Kiya tha tab batana chahie tha na.....au....


RISHI : Relaxxx! Relaxxx!! Relaxx!!! Biwiii jiii........Ab sab kuch abhi hi sunaogi kya? Aur vese bhi maine sudeep ko bata Diya tha ki mai aaraha hun.....jabse tumhari health ke baarein mein pata chala mujhse raha hi nahi gaya......ayush be bhi bataya ki sab bahar jaarhe hai toh Isiliye main turant flight pakad ke aagya. 



Lakshmi smiles at her Carey hubby & hugged him Tightly. Rishi hugged her back. Ansh came back after keeping new toys in his room. He also joins his mumma papa hugging their legs. Rishi picks ansh and then again hugged Lakshmi. A Trio of them were playing, having fun after so long. Lakshmi felt so happy and relieved. 

After sometime Rishi came after taking a cool shower. He saw his lady love patting their son who has already dozing off. He sat on the bed, throwing his towel on the couch looking at his wife and son. Lakshmi realises that ansh has slept so she get up adjusting her pallu and tucks the end part of the pallu around waist. 



LAKSHMI : main isey iske room mein chod aati aati hun aur tumhare liye coffee bhi le aati hun. 


RISHI : Nahi....rehne do


LAKSHMI : Accha toh isey room me...


RISHI : Lakshmi rehne do isey yahi sone do.


LAKSHMI : par Rishi ye yaha kaisee soyega.....aur ye yha soyega toh mujhe iske room mein jana padega.


RISHI : kyuuuu (He said quickly and Lil bit louder) tum kahi nahi jaogi. 


LAKSHMI : Rishi dheere bolo....aur tum toh nind mein charkhe ki tarah gol gol ghumte hi ho .....tumhara ye shaitaan beta bhi vaisa hi hai


RISHI : accha ab shaitaan beta toh sirf mera....tumhara nahi?


LAKSHMI : han matlab..... Mera matlab...


RISHI : kya kya kya matlab mujhe nahi sunna........aur tum abhi isko room mein le jaogi aur iski nind khuli toh firse shuru hojayega.


LAKSHMI : Accha baba thik hai.



Rishi adjusted pillow at one corner side of ansh and sat on the bed. He made a perfect barrier between ansh and them. Lakshmi closed the curtains and then sat with rishi. Both of them holding, hugging each other. He was so tightly holding her close to him and her head resting on his chest. 



LAKSHMI : Rishiiii...


RISHI : Hnmmm


LAKSHMI : I missed you so much


RISHI : I missed you too (He replied while brushing her shoulder and kissing her forehead)


LAKSHMI : lekin main gussa hun kyuki tumne late ki aane mein.


RISHI : accha aisi baat hai..... gussa toh ab mai bhi hun.


LAKSHMI : kyuu?


RISHI : tumne ansh ko mintu kehke kyu bulaya.


LAKSHMI : han toh kya hua....hai na chotu mintu.


RISHI : toh kya hua? Are ab ye tumhe minty minty bulaye jaarha hai.


LAKSHMI : jealousss mintu.


RISHI : hann.....ho raha hun jealous.


Lakshmi chuckles, looking at his face. While Rishi frowns and remove his hand from her shoulder. He lay on the bed back facing Lakshmi. She just smiles and then lay half on him putting her hands on his shoulder trying to make his face to meet hers. 



LAKSHMI : Rishiiii sorryyy na!


He look back and then again look away.


RISHI : Lakshmi tum humesha aise krti ho.


LAKSHMI : Accha sorry agli baar se pakka nahi bulaungi usey.


RISHI : cement promise!!!


LAKSHMI : han mere mintuuuu cement promise!! 



Lakshmi slaps lightly on his cheeks. He pulls her under him holding her by the waist and then started teasing her by doing lovey dovey tickles. He kept one hand around her waist, holding her tightly while another in her soft long hairs. He kisses all over her face and Lakshmi smiling with every kiss. He slowly started moving down from her face to neck, exploring every corner of her neck and there he bites her collar bone to which she moans and he moved down further kissing just an inch above her chest.



LAKSHMI : Rishiii kya kar rahe ho.


RISHI : Apni wifey k sath thoda pyaar.....kyu? Nahi kar sakta.


LAKSHMI : Rishiii ansh bhi hai jaag jayega please.


RISHI : tum yahi sochti raho jab tak woh jaagta hai.... main apna romance continue rakhta hu. 


Rishi kissed on her forehead and she blushes. They stared each other as rishi drowns into the pool of love which was so full and he could see that in her eyes. The love she was missing. Lakshmi won't tell this to rishi but he understood her feelings completely. They got disturbed when something hits on Rishi's head. It was tiny paws of their son ansh oberoi. Lakshmi laughs looking at Rishi. She made ansh sleep properly. 



LAKSHMI : kaha tha na poora tumpe Gaya hai....kabhi chota charkha, kabhi chota mintu.


RISHI : Lakshmiiii tummm na


LAKSHMI : sorry sorry sorryyy


Rishi rolled on holding Lakshmi that she is now on top of him. 


RISHI : vaise tum na dekhna.....jab humari choti si pyaari si Lakshmi hogi na tab main bhi usey aise minty krke bulaunga aur woh mujhe mintu.


LAKSHMI : Rishiiii nahiiii ye galat hai.


RISHI : Kyu nahi? Kya galat hai isme? Tum apne chote mintu k sath aur main apni choti minty k sath..... complete balance.

 

LAKSHMI : par tum hi kehte rehte ho na ki tumhari minty main hun sirf main.


RISHI : ab mai apne words wapas le raha hun.



Lakshmi started punching on his chest. Rishi loves teasing her, making her go mad. He held her hand and kissed her fingertips, holding his own ears with one hand. They lost the track while talking lightly enough that they can hear each other. Lakshmi shares everything with rishi, how ansh did so much badmaashi and how she missed him everyday, every night. Soon Lakshmi fell asleep and Rishi was still blabbering about his deal. 



RISHI : I LOVE YOU MERI MINTY ❤️ (He kissed her hairs when he realises that she has already slept)



Rishi just tries to pull the duvet over them and succeed. He covers themselves and then hold Lakshmi tightly. Soon Rishi also slept holding his Minty in his arms. 

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Posted: 1 years ago

This is sooooooo good. So worth the wait.❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

You write awesome stuff. If only you could write for the actual show, we would be so blessed 😍😍🥹

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Posted: 1 years ago

Wowww its nicee i love reading your storiess they are soo good💜👌🏻 

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Wow 👌 very nice......I love it 😀 

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Posted: 1 years ago

This is so good 😍❤️ agr show me aisa hoga to show No1 pe ajayega 😂 can't stop laughing while reading this 😂❤️ just love it ❤️

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Posted: 1 years ago

Ansh lakshmi scene waa cute.lakshmi neelam bond was good.rishi ansh scene was cute and hilarious. Rishmi conversation was romantic. Romance was very nice.jealous rishi was funny.to take revenge rishi will call their daughter minty.ha ha.the last rishmi scene was sweet and romantic.