Originally posted by: Nush_Rat
This was absolutely brilliant Tanu! Heartbreakingly beautiful! 😭 🥺 🥺 🥺 😭
Such a short piece yet you brought out her pain so effectively! The inclusion of rain added a different layer to it.
Amazing! ❤️
Keep writing more dear! 😊
Thank You 🙏
Will certainly try 📖
That was such a great piece of writing 👏
Friendly suggestion: that he/she/they kinda gives away the plot that the protagonist is dreaming/hallucinating. Instead just stick to they or it.
Thank You 🙏 Suggestion duly noted 📝
I'll keep it in mind and edit it in my piece 👍
Tanuuu🤗
You’re back with your writing 🥳
For a moment I thought the protagonist is having some happy emotions but then it took a complete u-turn! Nicely done there buddy, seriously!
Keep writing and thanks for the pm🤗❤️ Keep them coming
Tanuuu🤗
You’re back with your writing 🥳
For a moment I thought the protagonist is having some happy emotions but then it took a complete u-turn! Nicely done there buddy, seriously!
Keep writing and thanks for the pm🤗❤️ Keep them coming
Thank You 🙏
I loved it
I had forgotten how good you are with words
It's awesome ❤️
I could feel all her pain & that makes you a brilliant writer
Originally posted by: Majnu_Bhai
It's awesome ❤️
I could feel all her pain & that makes you a brilliant writer
Thank You 🙏
Writing is something that really gives meaning to my life 😳
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