MG SS: Shhh...:- Updated Part18||27th Apr||Pg.34|| - Page 20

Originally posted by: ShashtiJMG

Thank you for this long comment❤

I'm not ending this and as per the story Jessie will be coming back, but I promise you that no matter what Maaneet will be together..

Originally posted by: heycookie

eagerly waiting for next part now😃

Will update it tomorrow dear..😊

Oh god 

Mujhe toh bf bhi maan laga

Aur wo ladka bhi jo dekhne aane wala tha

Aur he is no more too

Shocking

Waiting for you to continue 

with next update please !!!!

It's so different story 

And I like Shilpa so much

Geet is really a dumb after a doctor 

Want some maaneet moments 

Superb 

Originally posted by: heycookie

stillwaiting

Updating😊

Part 10:

Geet and Shilpa had a gala time talking about everything. But Shilpa had to leave early to reach her home, as it would take time to reach Shimla.

Though Geet was sad, but couldn't do much as Shilpa's dad would be alone. 

She was really happy that Shilpa visited her. 

They were at the door step 

"Ye aakri baar hai jo mai aise tumhara ghar aarha hu. Samji? "

Geet was confused 

"Mathlab? "

"Bin bullai mehman ke tara."

"Arre yar tum mera best friend ho tum jaab chaho aasakthi ho."

"O hello, Shimla Delhi ki baaju mai todhi na hai, jo mai jab chahu tumhara door bell ring karu.. Aur madam aap bhool rahi hai ki ye tumhara pati ka ghar hai papa ki nahi. "

"Phir be.."

"Bas bas, aab mujhe chalna chaye, it's getting late. Next time mai tumhar ghar tab avunga, jab...ya tumhari godh bhari hogi ya tum dono ki bache ki namkaran...." Shilpa teased and winked

"Shilpaa." Geet chided and wacked her, she faked anger but her cheeks colouring up said a different story.

They hugged each other tightly, a layer of tear in their eyes. 

"Nahi aab roona nahi. Kush raho." Shilpa kissed her forehead head and turned to go, but Geet held her hand and kissed her cheek  whispering "thank you ".

In return Shilpa just patted her head feeling happy and departed from there, to her fate which was awaiting her..

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Geet closed the door, smiling. She was very happy that Shilpa visited her. She takes two steps forward into the house but stops and turns to her right side. 

There stood the calendar with all it's glory on the blue colored wall, beside her. She had observed Maan marking something everyday on it, after starring at her for few seconds when he returned back from office. 

She takes a closer look to see what her husband was marking all these days. 

Her eyebrows knotted in confusion seeing cross marks all over the dates, i.e, from the first date of the month till yesterday's!! Even Sunday's were marked for that matter. 

She wondered about it's significance. 

"Office didn't go well?? 

But what has office to do with the weekends! 

Was it that the day had came to an end??"

She lifts up the pages of the calendar to view the previous months pages, what surprised her was the previous two months dates had cross marks over it, still previous ones didn't had any!!

Her brows furrowed further, when her eyes landed on the first date which had the cross mark. 

Geet's eyes widened realising what it meant. The date was the next day after they were married.. 

She softly runs her trembling right palm on the calendar. Every cross mark were like needles to her, she remembered and felt Maan's efforts to make her comfortable with him, she had learnt that he was a person of less words but there it was him who would always initiate a conversation between them, him cooking what he knew for both of them..

And these cross marks were the indication that he failed to get some response from her, if she was doing well, comfortable and ready to embrace the new life awaiting for them along with him.. 

Geet's eyes filled up and her mind screamed "NO" to the word Failed, it was her ignorance and stupidity that lead to all this.

Determined, she glanced up at the calendar and promised herself that from today the calendar wouldn't meet the same treatment which it was getting from past 3 months.. 

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Evening 6pm...

Well Maan was an hour late as the last hour meeting he had extended a little bit more.. 

Maan came out from the lift looking all tired and exhausted. Dark clouds were gathering in the sky, indicating that a storm was coming up.. 

Maan opens the door to his apartment with the keys as always. After locking it he turns around only to freeze on his spot... 

His hand which was on the office bag fell on his side. 

He glanced around the house with his mouth open a bit, to see things arranged neatly, curtains and sofa covers changed, tiles below him glistening, fresh flowers placed in the vase, sweet aroma of the flowers mixed with another sweet smell, which he couldn't really figure it out. All in all the place now looked like home, not the house.

Maan was too shocked to react, then he wacks himself mentally thinking that he has entered into the wrong flat, well the house was not this way when he left in the morning.. 

"Maan, kabhi to hosh mai raho, aapne ghar jane ke bagair kisi aur ki ghar agai ho. *he hits himself on his head, when*

Lekin kisi aur ki locked door meri key say kise kholega.?"

While he was lost complementing all these things, he heard something chimming. He looked up at the source of the sound only to see his wife, Geet, climbing down the stairs. The sweet melody that he experienced was the sound of the ankles that she wore, which echoed around the empty house. 

He stood frozen in his place as Geet walked up to him. Well now it was confirmed that he was at the right address, but still complementing if it was for real or dream. 

Her curvaceous body wrapped in a beautiful saree, her pallu neatly pleated on her left shoulder which all these days would be left freely hanging from her shoulders. Her pleated pallu had given a clear view of her smooth creamy white waist, always tied hairs were left open, the new glow on her face, the pinkish hue on her cheeks, sparkling eyes looking at him now and then while she walked towards him. 

Any saint would loose his cool with the beauty she had (so the ghost here was no exception😤). 

Maan had no doubt that she was beautiful but today she looked gorgeous, out of the world. Maybe he felt that because she had gotten ready for him!! Well just that though brought immense happiness to him. The mangalsutra and the sindoor on her enhanced her beauty, that showed she was belonged to him, only him.. 

The way she walked with elegance with the mix of shyness was seducing him, while face devoid of any makeup and her eyes which held innocence, purity, devotion,  determination and some mixed emotions.. 

Geet stops when she was a feet infront of Maan and gave a sweet shy smile which blew his heart and the tiredness away. 

Maan was still in trance, he saw Geet lifting her right hand up and swiftly sliding down his office bag from his shoulder. 

Geet held the office bag and with a sweet smile she asked 

"Aap freshen up hokar rest kijiye, tab tak kitchen mai toda kaam hai dinner ki, I will complete it off and call you when the dinner is ready."

Maan nods in affirmation with a small smile 

She turns around to go but stops as she remembers something 

Turning back to Maan, who was still in his previous position 

"Hmmm....Coffee?" she asks with a smile

"Aabhi peene ka mann nahi hai. Jab chaye, I will ask you." came Maan's baritone rich voice followed by his M-shaped lips curving into his charming smile. 

All she did was just nod her head and left from there with a smile on her face controlling her fluttering heart.. 

Geet couldn't figure out if her heart fluttered and skipped it's beats for his voice or for his smile or for the way he was looking at her with his dreamy, soft chocolate orbs Or for all of the above..

Geet could stand and stare all day...oops all night into Maan's eyes, but he was tired, needed food and rest, anyways they have  whole of their life to stare at each other and to get embraced by each others warmth, so what's the hurry.. 

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Maan on the other side was over the moon. He came back to his senses after Geet left from there. He left the breadth that he was holding for how long, only God knows. And he forgot to count the times his heart skipped it's beats. 

Turning himself towards the calendar, he took out his pen and put a tick mark across that day's date 

"Aajse meri life sahi track par aya hai, finally everything's gonna be right and in it's place."

He went to their room, then to the cupboard to take his change of dress but as he turned he found a set of his night dress already lying on the bed. 

Well Maan couldn't be more happier than this he just put back the clothes he took out and headed to bathroom picking up a towel to take a long relaxing shower. 

Maan came out after half an hour and a delicious smell of dinner hit his nostrils making his stomach grumble. After a long time he would be having something different and tasty. Though it would be the first time he would be eating the food cooked by his wife, he knew she was a great cook just with the smell of the dinner and to be frank he was bored eating his once favorite pasta continuously for three months. 

He stood infront of the glass wall separating the balcony and the room, drying his wet hair. 

He then heard the sound of anklets, then after few minutes of silence followed by loud audible gasp. 

Maan turns around to see Geet standing there with her widened eyes and her mouth open in a perfect O. 

Well Geet after finishing her work came to call Maan for dinner, when she entered into their room the view she got tantalised her senses. Maan was standing with only a towel around his waist and drying his wet hair with another, with his back towards her and looking out of the open window into the cool breezy night.

The cool air entered inside the room after hitting Maan's body, carrying his masculine fragrance along that hit Geet's nostrils, who closed her eyes and inhaled deeply in turn intoxicating herself with Maan's fragrance. She felt unusual calmness settling inside her, though he was some distance away from her, she felt being embraced by him, in his warmth.

After few seconds Geet opened her eyes, only for her settled heartbeats to increase rapidly, throat drying up and blood rushing to her face and neck. 

Her eyes roaming from his wet hair to his neck to his broad shoulders then his well toned creamy back, her eyes still lowered to the towel around his waist from back but soon came back to her senses thinking that she was checking him out. 

A gasp escaped from her throat without her knowledge and the silent room fueled it. 

Then she saw Maan turning around and she immediately lowered her eyes. She forgot why she had came there, with the site infront her which took her breath away. 

Maan started to move towards her, that raised Geet's heartbeats and her breadths laboured. 

The only source of sound in the silent room  was of their breadths and heartbeats which was very high. 

Maan who was observing Geet, came to know his effect on his wify and smirked. He was just to cover a few steps which was left between them, Geet abruptly turned her back to him finding him too close to her while she fumbled with her words 

"Wo..wo....mmm....mai.."

Her breadth stuck when Maan's bare back came in contact with the exposed skin of her back, sending shivers down both their spines and warmth spread in both of their bodies!! Somewhere settling peace, as well as raising their hearbeats..  

Both were loosing themselves in the magical moment, Geet leaned back and Maan raised his hands to embrace her...when 

The loud whistle of the pressure cooker from the kitchen brought them back from their trance and Geet hurriedly moved two steps forward to make distance between them. 

"Wo...wo *Geet's dry throat was making it difficult for her to speak * dinner ready hai, kapde pehnke neeche aagaye."

Saying that she hurriedly moves out, Maan again got lost in her, but then when she indirectly told about state he realized that he stood there with only one cloth on his body. 

Maan runs his fingers in his hair blushing,  smiling sheepishly about how he stood infront of someone almost nude for the first time and that someone was Geet, his wife, his life, and she was affected by him. 

Wearing the clothes Maan heads down with a smile on his face.....

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Precap: "Aab wo zinda nahi rahi...... "

"Accident hogaya hai, jab wo ghar wapas aarahi tee...."

The phone slipped from her trembling and numb hand after the line from the other side went dead... 

Terror gripped her heart, sweatbeads started dripping down her forehead, mind blocked.. what should she expect next?? 

Terror changed to pain then to agony then to hatred... 

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Thank you for reading this update.

Hope you like this!! 

All I would like to say is aabhi to asli story start hui hai, so I request u all to please be with me. 

I would like to thank all of you who wanted me to continue this story, which in actual I wanted to. 

Apologies for the grammatical errors! 

Thank you❤❤

Part 11:Pg No. 30

Updated part 10 👆 

Originally posted by: priya_21

Oh god 

Mujhe toh bf bhi maan laga

Aur wo ladka bhi jo dekhne aane wala tha

Aur he is no more too

Shocking

Thank you Di. 

😅 subko starting mai yehi lagata.

Let's see what the soul of the dead person does.. 

Thanks for reading❤

Originally posted by: taahir004

Waiting for you to continue 

with next update please !!!!

Originally posted by: heycookie

😔😔

Updated, sorry for making you wait😔