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Bade papa main Akshu ko ghar lejati hoon. Isne pehli baar bhaang pi hai kahin isse kuch ho na jaaye, said a tense Aarohi


Kuch nahi hoga Akshu ko. Iska nasha utar jaayega she wll be fine. Aur tumhe Akshu ko kahin le jaane ki zaroorat nahi hai, main hoon ye krne k liye. Bade Papa agar aapki permission ho to.


Haan haan Abhimanyu le jao. Hum bhi bas aarahe hain.


Neil tu gaadi nikaal.


Abhi,Neil and Akshu leave, leaving behind a tense Aarohi. Neil starts the car and Abhi sits on the backseat with Akshu’s head in her lap as she is sleeping.


Bro,aapko kya lagta hai Bhabhi kis accident k baare main baat kar rahi thi.


Pata nahi yaar Neil, kuch samjh nahi aaraha hai. I am confused sach main koi baat hai ya Akshu nashe main bol rahi thi aise he.


Lekin wo chipkali, Bhabhi ko baar baar rok rahi thi aur wo kuch pareshaan b lag rahi thi.


Suddenly Akshu wakes up but still in Abhi’s lap. Haina Neil tumhe b laga na Aaru kuch pareshaan see hai. Mujhe b aisa he lag raha hai. Wo mujhse kuch chupa rahi hai. Akshara sits straight placing her head between the driver and the passenger seat and doesn’t notice Abhi.  Arre hum car main, hum ghoomi ghoomi jaa rahe hain lekin Abhi kahan hai, wo mujhse naraz hai and starts crying and moves to sit on the passenger seat.


Neil stops the car. Bhabhi aaram se aapko lag jaayegi. He looks at Abhi through the rear view mirror and Abhi signals him let things be as they are. Akshara adjusts herself on the passenger seat and Abhi sits exactly behind her so she fails to notice him.


Bolo na Neil, hum kahan jaa rahe hain aur Abhi kahan hai wo mujhse gussa haina.


Bhabhi,bro ghar par hai maa k paas aur wo aapse gussa kyun honge. Wo to aapse pyaar krte haina.


Haan Abhi to mujhse bahut pyaar krta hai. Wo jab aayega na main usko ek kissi dungi pointing to her cheeks. Neil gets shocked and Abhi hides his face in his palms.


Neil tries to continue the conversation to avoid the embarrassing situation and says Bhabhi aapko kyun lagta hai bhai aapse naraaz hai and Akshara starts crying mujhe Abhi se baat krni hai.


Bhabhi,Bhabhi aap please chup hojao, main abhi bhai ko phone krta hoon lekin aap pehle rona band karo warna bhai meri class lagayenge (Abhi looks confused)


Akshara wipes her tears, aise kaise Abhi tumhe kuch bolega, tum world k best devar ho.


Acha Bhabhi ye lo maine phone kr diya bhai ko speaker pe rakha hai, aap karo baat. Neil signals Abhi to talk and abhi realizes what Neil is doing and gives him a thumbs up.


Haan neil bol kya baat hai, akshara ko chod diya na ghar pe.


Neil nai hai tumhari Akshu hai lekin main tumse katti hoon aur ab main tumhe koi kissi nahi dungi.


Bhabhi main bhi idhar baitha hoon. Aapko bhai se kuch aur baat krni thi na. Aapko lag raha tha wo naraz hai. haina?


Haan Neil, ab yaad aaya. Theek hai tum gaadi chalao dhyaan se warna accident hojayega jaise us din mera aur Aaru ka hua tha.


Both Neil and Abhi, what???

Akshu tum theek hona? Tumhe chot to nai lagi hai.


Mujhe tumse baat nai krni hai Abhi, tum hamare saath ghoomi ghoomi krne kyun nai aaye. Bye and gives the phone to Neil. A frustrated Abhi runs his hand through his hair and Akshu again sleeps.


Neil Akshu theek se baithi haina. Ek second side pe rok. Neil stops the car and Abhi gets down. He adjusts Akshara on the seat and fixes her seat belt and goes back.


Bhai ab to mujhe poora yakeen hogaya hai ki kuch to baat hai, aur isi liye wo chipkali itne din se weird behave kar rahi hai.


Neil mujhe tension horahi hai Akshu ka accident hua tha pata nai sab theek hai aur agar is baar Dr. Aarohi ki wajah se meri Akshu ko koi bhi problem hui na main usse nai chodunga. Ek taraf maa ka itna bada accident aur ab ye Akshu k accident wali baat, mujhe to kuch samjh he nai aaraha hai.


Bro aap tension mat lo, Bhabhi theek hai aur agar kuch hua hota to aapko to pata chal he jaata na.


Neil tujhe to pata haina Akshara kaisi hai, usse pata tha main maa ko leke pareshaan hoon is liye kuch nai kaha hoga.


Neil mujhe abhi b Dr. Abhimanyu ki awaaz aarahi hai tumne phone nai rakha ab tak. Maine kaha na mujhe usse baat nai krni. Tum meri side pe ho ya uski.


Bhabhi main to aap dono ki side pe hoon. Wo bhai ne aapke accident wali baat sunli nato keh rahe thay wo bhi aayenge Goenka House. Bas aur kuch nahi.


Abhi ko kahin meri chot k baare main pata to nai chal gaya na Neil, agar aisa hogaya wo phir aaru se gussa hojayega lekin usko kaise samjahwun main ki Aaru ne dawayi khayi thi is liye wo sab hua.


Bhabhi konsi chot, aap theek to hona aur konsi dawayi. Bhabhi mujhe darr lag raha hai. Main bro ko phone krta hoon.


Arre nahi Neil, main theek hoon wo choti see chot hai. Tumhe pata hai Neil tumhare bhai ko lagta hai main usse zyada pyar Aarohi se aur apni family se krti hoon. Neil looks at Abhi through the mirror but he signals him to let her continue. Wo bhi to tumse aur maa se bahut pyar karta haina, haan main jaanti hoon jaise bhai tum Abhi k ho Aarohi meri waisi behen nahi hai (teary eyes) lekin main kya karoon Neil maine to Sirat Ma se promise kiya than a main unki Aaru ka khayal rakhungi.


Bhabhi aap please chup hojao.


Nahi Neil pata nai kyun main tumse ye sab keh rahi hoon. Main chahti hoon jaisa tumhara Aur mera rishta hai waisa he Aaru aur Abhi ka bhi ho lekin main kya karoon hamesha Aaru kuch na kuch galat kr deti hai. Meri life main sirf ek Abhi he to hai jisne mujhse kabhi kuch nahi maanga bas pyar kiya mujhse lekin Neil main usse kaise bolun ki wo meri zindagi hai aur uske liye main kuch bhi krsakti hoon.


Both brothers are teary eyed. Bhabhi aap please chup hojao, main bhai se baat karunga.


Nahi koi baat nai krni hai us se. Hum dono usse katti hain. Wo abhi tak nahi aaya na. Ab main usko ek b kissi nai dungi, dekhna tum. Neil laughs looking at Abhiand doesn’t respond


Abhi gets thinking as to how much his Akshu is suffering within and she doesn’t let anybody catch a whiff of it. By this time they reach the Goenka house and Abhi gets down without Akshu noticing it. He opens the door for her and forwards his hand. She gets happy and gets down holding his hand and jumps to hug him. Akshu chalo andar chalte hain, tum nimbu paani piyo you will feel better.


Nahi Abhi main nahi chal sakti. Main bahut thak gayi hoon. Tum please mujhe uthao warna main yahin baith jawungi and tries to sit down but Abhi stops her. Abhi looks towards Neil and sees him facing the other side. He picks up Akshara and heads inside the house. He places her on the bed and leaves to get lemonade for her but sees Neil coming with the house help with lemonade on tray. He mouths a thank you to Neil and takes the tray.


Akshu utho thoda sa nimbu pani pi lo, tumhe bahut acha lagega. He removes hair strands from her face and makes her finish the glass. Akshu hugs him. Abhi caresses her forehead and she winces in pain. Akshu kya hua tum aise kyun chillayi. Tum theek hona. Dikhao kahan lagi hai tumhe. Abhi notices a mark on her forehead but it’s slightly blue.


Hawwww Abhi tumne dekh liya. Tum gussa mat hona and gets up from the bed hiding behind Neil. Mere devar ko kuch mat kehna.


Bhabhi ek baar bhai ko check karne do, please. Aap meri best Bhabhi hona. Please check karne do bro ko.

Ok and Akshara sits on the bed while Abhi inspects her forehead. Akshu tumhe aur b kahin chot aayi hai aur tumne kuch medicine lagayi thi.


Nai aur kahin chot nahi hai aur koi medicine nai lagayi thi wo maa k saath busy hogayi na phir main bhool he gayi holding her ears


Akshu first aid box kahan hai. She points towards a drawer and Neil gets the box and hands it to Abhi. He applies some antiseptic and a small bandage to cover it. Akshu ab please mujhe batao ye sab kaise hua. She holds his hand and places her head on his chest and narrates the whole incident how she got into car with Aarohi and how she found out about the medicines and how they saved the child and hit the bridge. Main tumhe ye sab batati even though Aarohi ne mana kiya tha lekin tum already maa ko leke itne worried thay. Akshu ye accident kahan hua. Receiving no response he looks at her and sees she has slept.


Bhai mujhe pata thi is chipkali ne kuch bada kaand kiya hai. Neil looks towards his brother and he understands his brother is angry. Abhi places Akshara on the pillow and gets up to leave but Akshara holds his hand, Abhi please mujhe chod k mat jao. Sab chale jaate hain, mere paas to sirf tum ho please. Abhi sits down and Akshara lays her head in his lap and smiles in her sleep.


Neil tu ghar jaa maa k paas. Is waqt Akshu se zyada important kuch nahi hai. I will stay here jab tak sab aate hain. Neil leaves and Abhi caresses her hair and kisses her forehead. Abhi sits there and doesn’t know when sleep took over him.

The Goenkas come and smile seeing the two together. Kairav being the happiest for his sister.

 

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Posted: 2 years ago

I hope Akshu tells but she won't coz makers are planning drama 

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I hope Akshu tells but she won't coz makers are planning drama 

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Nice one..Keep on writing such beautiful OS.

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Loved the story and writing style. 

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Posted: 2 years ago

Beautiful OS shaylini.... Loved the way u have written it.... ♥️

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Beautiful Written..... Please Update the Next  Part..... 

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It’s a beautiful OS, I wish it was how things had turned out in the show. 

Neil is adorable 

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Originally posted by: urmil

Nice one..Keep on writing such beautiful OS.

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Originally posted by: urmil

Nice one..Keep on writing such beautiful OS.


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