Shivi Os : completeness of her [completed]

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Ok so here is my os on mangalsuter scene actually i don't thinks k suman r shiva ki argument mn r kuch ho skta hai suman is now a days useless thats y mn n use os add nahi kia... hope so guys you like it... 


Aai Meri Subah Hanste Hasate

Boli Aankhen Tere Liye Sandesha Hai

Haan Hai

Jaagi Aankhon Ko Bhi Sapna Milega

Koi Khushi Aane Ka Bhi Andesha Hai

Haan Hai

Aan Haan

Gulabi Si Subah

Aan Haan

Sharabi Si Hawa

Bheegi Si Bhaagi Si

Mere Bazuo Mein Samaye

Soti Si Jaagi Si

Koi Prem Dhun Woh Sunaye

Bheegi Si Bhaagi Si

Mere Bazuo Mein Samaye

Soti Si Jaagi Si

Koi Ram Dhun Woh Sunaye


Ravi desperately wandering in her room holding her mangalsuter ... As she found new kind of feeling origin from her heart some feelings are of excitement some are of completeness and some are of surprised... All feelings weaved together and form an uncontrolled glow of smile on her face and don't know how many times she just kissed her mangalsuter and blushed from morning... 

Fb :

Its 9am of the morning after taking bath ravi comes back to her room her hairs wrapped in towel ... She took out towel and through her hairs other side with the purpose of dried them ... Bt some of water droplets splashes and directly make contact with the brozone skin of shiva... 

Shiva who was just passing outside the room for taking bath and suddenly he felt some wet droplets on his skin and he turns.... 


Raahein Waahein Bole Baatein Rumani

Aao Baitho Suno Baatein Kahani Hai

Haan Hain

Taazi Taazi Lage Humko Rozana

Teri Meri Baatein Yun To Purani Hai

Haan Hai

Aan Haan

Khayalon Se Pale

Aan Haan

Yeh Zindagi Chale

Bheegi Si Bhaagi Si

Mere Bazuo Mein Samaye

Soti Si Jaagi Si

Bheegi Si Bhaagi Si

Mere Bazuo Mein Samaye

Soti Si Jaagi Si

Koi Ram Dhun Woh Sunaye

Koi Prem Dhun Woh Sunaye


Amazed by the divine beauty of his chipkali.... His feet didn't respond to his mind and unable to move ... So he stand there in the corner of door just to adore the scene in front of his eyes.. and smiles ...


Meri Aankhon Ki Syaahi

Piya Deti Har Gawaahi

Mein Pyasi Thi Nirashi

Tu Pani Ki Surahi

Meri Aankhon Ki Syaahi

Piya Deti Har Gawaahi


Here after drying hair ravi applies little bit kajal in her eyes .. which makes her sparkling eyes... then put little bit blush on her cheeks... the applied shocking pink color lipstick then placed her bindi on her forehead ... Then wear jhumkas in her ears... The finally her final step to getting ready... She was searching for something... 

Ravi selftalk : 

Kidher rakh dia mn n.. yahin to tha wo... 

After 2 min she realised that suman took her mangalsuter.... and the colors of her face just fade out .. she touches her empty neck sadly... 

Ravi selftalk : 

Masi ma kehti hn mangalsuter k bina orat ka singhar adhura hota hai.. mujhe pata hi nahi chala kab yeh mangalsuter se mujhe pura feel honay laga.. ab kaki n le lia hai to kitna adhoora adhoora feel ho raha... 

Then he comes holds ravi's hand frimly and took her out in the middle of the endurance of the home and spin her arround ... 

Ravi was shocked on his behaviour unable to figure out whats he is doing whats happens now again ... 

Everyone comes and ask the matter ... 

Shiva : aj koi nai bolay ga... 

Ravi angerly holds his collar...  

Ravi : shiva Kia kar raha hai yeh tu ... yeh kia tarika hai ...? 

Shiva : Ravi aj beech mn mat bolna mn buht soch smjh k jo karnay ja raha hun wo mujhe karna dena ... 

Dhara tries to speak bt shiva signs her in no... So she stops... 

Ravi : ab kia than lia hai tu n karna ka ? Pahle divorce ka bhoot sawar tha ab kisi r cheez ka ho gaya hai ... R kitni bar mujhe tera ghusa face karna pare ga... Kitni bar .... She screams.. 

Jb jb mujhe lagta hai ab sb theek honay laga hai tu a jata hai naya bakhera khara karnay.. ek bat tujhe smjh mn nahi ati kia... 

she paused .... shocked to the core... 

And felt something cold arround her neck ... She touches it n saw it and shocked ... 


Tujhe Dekha To Khila Hoon

Teri Chahat Mein Ghula Hoon

Mile Mandir Mein Khuda Jo

Mein To Tujh Mein Yun Mila Hoon

Meri Aankhon Ki Syaahi

Piya Deti Har Gawaahi

Meri Aankhon Ki Syaahi

Piya Deti Har Gawaahi


Its her mangalsuter which he just make her wear ... Which completes .... Her eyes filled with tears of joy and happiness ... 

Shiva wipes them up... 

Fb : 

shiva noticed the incompleteness in her eyes... And understands her reason... And left the spot angerly... 

Shiva goes to suman room suman was not there she was at kanta place.. shiva open her cupboard and took out ravi's mangalsuter


Ravi : sh.... Shi.... Shiva yeh... 

Shiva : jb tu tyar ho rahi the tb mn n teri ankhon mn parh loya tha k yeh mangalsuter r hamra rishta kia mainay rakhta hai tere liye... Mn hi pagal tha jo kuch bhi soch k kuch bhi react kar raha tha... Mujhe laga tujh s mafi mangnay ka ise acha tarika shyad koi r nahi ho skta islye la k baghair tere s puchay tujhe pehna dia...bs... 

N he ask questionable tone 

SHIVA : theek kiya na... 

Ravi nodes happily... 


Aan Haan

Dhundhe Na Abb Koi

Aan Haan

Main Khoya Tu Khoyi

Bheegi Si Bhaagi Si

Mere Bazuo Mein Samaye

Soti Si Jaagi Si

Koi Prem Dhun Woh Sunaye

Bheegi Si Bhaagi Si

Mere Bazuo Mein Samaye

Soti Si Jaagi Si

Koi Ram Dhun Woh Sunaye.


Everyone claps for them and through flowers on the ... Krish comes and pusher ravi on shiva and ravi unbalanced and he holds her and wrap his arm from her back of the sholder... Both smiles seeing eachother and join their forhead... now they are completed... 

 

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