Kalma ss ::" khudgarzi"(chapter 2::- updated 07-10-2021 - Page 3

Originally posted by: sathwi_99

God vanshuu... The update is too good. 

It's really intriguing. I really want to how it started between them. Malhar really pulled towards her. 

This type of story with a dark and shady backdrop is good. 

I really wanted to know kalyani's helplessness. 

Glad to know you like the background of this story ..its gonna be dark as well as sweet .. let's wait for it to unfold 😉

Vanshu..... Finally an update from you..... 

Was missing u and ur stories too.... Where are u these days.... Aaj kal humari timings clash hi nji ho rhi hai😶😶😶 

And coming to update as usual it's just fantastic 🥰🥰 

Malhar ko uska subordinate aadi jabardasti le aaya😅😅 

Being drunk too he has not done any wrong thing👍👍👍👍 

Kalyani 's dance on painful song..... 🥺🥺🥺 

Malhar got this that she's not doing it happily and guessed her pain behind it☺☺☺😍😍 

He felt some connection to her ❤❤❤ 

Uska ghoogat na uthana has created more mystery itself😃😃 

Malhar ne acha maza dikhaya us aadmi ko who was passing wrong comment to her...... Chamdi udher di😯😯😯😯 

Malli Or aadi ke last conversation 😅😅😅😅.. Malhar wants to know more about her😃 

Aadi ki bhi achi band bajayi..... Humare acp hai hi ese ache acho ki bolti band kr dete hai fir ye aadi kya hi cheez hai😂😂😂 

Waiting..... For next part❤❤

Originally posted by: PRAKRITI_12

Vanshu..... Finally an update from you..... 

Was missing u and ur stories too.... Where are u these days.... Aaj kal humari timings clash hi nji ho rhi hai😶😶😶 

And coming to update as usual it's just fantastic 🥰🥰 

Malhar ko uska subordinate aadi jabardasti le aaya😅😅 

Being drunk too he has not done any wrong thing👍👍👍👍 

Kalyani 's dance on painful song..... 🥺🥺🥺 

Malhar got this that she's not doing it happily and guessed her pain behind it☺☺☺😍😍 

He felt some connection to her ❤❤❤ 

Uska ghoogat na uthana has created more mystery itself😃😃 

Malhar ne acha maza dikhaya us aadmi ko who was passing wrong comment to her...... Chamdi udher di😯😯😯😯 

Malli Or aadi ke last conversation 😅😅😅😅.. Malhar wants to know more about her😃 

Aadi ki bhi achi band bajayi..... Humare acp hai hi ese ache acho ki bolti band kr dete hai fir ye aadi kya hi cheez hai😂😂😂 

Waiting..... For next part❤❤

Loved reading your comment lots of love to you 💕💕 I missed you all too ajkal workload bohot jyaada hai main jabtak aati hoon tabtak tum sab chalein jaatein hoon aur jab tum sab hotein hoo to main nahi aapati hope so mera ye kaam jaldi khatam ho jaayein aur main jaladi aapon shayad agr aaj time mila to main aaram sein aaujaungi 😒😒...

Here Malhar and Kalyani both has many shades they can be wrong sometimes but they have their own reasons too for that .. ye thodi dark story hone wali hai jahan naa mallu itna caring hoga naa kallu both has their own pain in their life bcz of that only they behave like that ...👍🏼

Thanks praku for liking it so much 🤗

Thanks yaar 

Tumne mere wish fulfill kar di 

Pata nahi wether u read or not kal meine chats mei kaha bhi tha ki tumhe samay he toh ye update karne 

Please yaar isse continue rakhna 

Ek alag hi spark he iss story mei like kuch different from that usual love stories of ladka ladki 

Kalyani seems to be a mystery which malhar has decided to solve 

Can't wait for their meeting and to know more about their story 

Hats off to you for bringing up such a different thread and executing it well 

Please aadhe mei math chodna 

Lots of love keep writing ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Originally posted by: GAYATHRINAYAR

Thanks yaar 

Tumne mere wish fulfill kar di 

Pata nahi wether u read or not kal meine chats mei kaha bhi tha ki tumhe samay he toh ye update karne 

Please yaar isse continue rakhna 

Ek alag hi spark he iss story mei like kuch different from that usual love stories of ladka ladki 

Kalyani seems to be a mystery which malhar has decided to solve 

Can't wait for their meeting and to know more about their story 

Hats off to you for bringing up such a different thread and executing it well 

Please aadhe mei math chodna 

Lots of love keep writing ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

 

Mere malharji kein mooh sein itni pyaari taareef sunkein aaj main jameen pein hoo hi nahi 😳😳...

Mujehin Teri wish ka pata nahi tha par Kal raat hi baithkein Maine ye update de di ...see Teri wish poori ho gayi and glad to know you liked this concept 😃

Are main story ko continue hi karne wali hoo vo to main har kisiko karoongi bass time mil jaayein Varna tujhein har kissika proper end milega don't worry ..😊

                                     Chapter::-2 

Malhar was lying on the car ..and lighting his cegrette he is just thinking one name which becomes the reason of his uneasiness...though this time malhar will remember only one name ..bcz of whom he wants to drinks as he thinks that in his druken state only he can meet her ...otherwise no memory of her is left with him no..last sign left of her with him... remembering her soft and loving nature his eyes gets moist like Everytime ..the soft saree of her to which he wrapped it himself and gets hide from this cruel world...her soft ankelets sound which excited malhar ..which bought a childish smile on his face ..her food ...he missed her...he missed her to no extent ..suddenly he gets up listening a soft clinking sound of ankelte same as her and gets up by shouting ...

        " Aai..aai aap yahan haina ..aap apne malhar sein milne aayi hona main jaanta Hoon aap apnein malhar ko bohot yaad karti hoo jaise main karta hoo main jaanta tha aap aaogi..aai .."

He tries to gets up but could not able to come down bcz of his druken state...and realised that he again saw her dream only ..again ..he imagines her mostly in his that state but today that clinking sound of her ankelte stops him ..bcz of that only he turns back and could not stop himself staring her ..same as his mother she has a very beautiful pair of anklete ..she also can dance well like her mother ...she is a very talented classical dancer ..but due to his family restrictions she cannot fullfill her dream of being a dancer ...she wants to teach the classical dance and wants to open the academy but could not able to do that bcz of that cheap family and he feels shame on himself by belonging to that family ...the only loving person was his mother only in that house ..bcz of her his childhood becomes the best ..but after she gone from his family his life became like a dark place where no light can come by which he can comes in light again ..his father firsts wife was his mother only by whom he was born but she died due to his father flirtious nature ..who offenly comes to these shaddy types of places to fulfill his manly desires . ..but his grandmother stops him to go as she think that being a well mahrahtrian family son he cannot go to some place ...he somewhere feels happy at least now his father will stop going to that places from childhood he saw these things which brokes his little heart Everytime by seeing his mother teary of the cheap man like his father ..his mother loved him a lot they had a arranged marriage and his family is a very orthodox family ..they didn't permit girls to do job or persue their passion ...that why his mother cannot persue her passion in dance ....but his mother loved his father truly but that man never understand her values ..his indifference made her so vulnerable that she diagnosed with brain tumor though his family don't want to get their reputation down in whole Aurangabad as they are from a well reputated family .. so they get her best treatment but she lost her will to live ..his mother only happiness is him only she always plays with him or gets herself busy in taking care of him and that house she often by hiding from all does dance to enjoy herself which he gladly watch .. but after the disease his mother lost all her habbits and her health started to detoriate daily and one day she left him alone ..in this world in that family she left him alone she left him...his grandfather is the only one who is soft hearted with his mother and even encourage her to persue her dream going against his grandmother but his mother denies him as she don't want daily fights in home which affects his childhood and leaves a bad impression on his small mind..he loves only his grandfather there after her but he also left him after his mother as he got a very high heart attack and died there only ..after that he didn't interact with other neither with his grandmother nor with his father or anybody ..his chacha and chachi are gone case they are like a hungry dogs who just wants one thing money ...they even give birth to their child so that hai grandmother transfer her property on their name but alas he born firsts so their dream get shatteres as his grandfather transfered all his property on his name after his birth which is not liked by them ..but due to the property they behaved well with him and so sweet so he can gives some shares to them as if he doesn't know their true colour ...his father married another woman after one year of his mother death now he doesn't feel hurt or anything as till then he understands all their nature well ...his behaviour doesn't change he does same thing with swara mother also but she is a strict lady which didn't gave a damn to his father misbehaviour...she maintained a likeable distance from the beginning only but unfortunately during giving birth to swara ..she died there only ...as usual his father didn't care for her also , but he has heart ..he feels bad for that little child whose mother left her there in this cheap family alone ..he promised to himself that from now he will protect his little sister as from her birth only he feels a protectiveness towards her , so from the childhood he makes her this much strong that she can oppose the wrong thing in their house and can Persue her dream to stand on her feets , sadly which his and her mother didn't get ...alas swara his sister is the only one who didn't demand anything or kept any expectations towards him ..she only give him that sister love and support which he needed in that toxic family..thanks to God someone's is still there for him who actually cared for him without having any selfish reason ...but today the main reason is for remembering his mother is that girl's anklet the same damn clinking sound which he hears from his mother's feet he listen today ..the adoreness, the light which is on her face is not going from his eyes ..he still didn't see her face but somewhere a image prints on his heart of face ...he remembers how his father forced him to join his family business to pursue their name by many ways be it legally or any emotional drama ..but till now he understands all of their nerves very well from. The beginning he was fascinated to the police officer job how they served to their country how their life is ..he even ask many things from his mother ..and she even said 

  "Godu tu dekhana tu ek din bohot acha aur imaandar police officer banega ..mere sapne yahan bhalien hi naa poorein ho paayien ho par main tera har sapna poora karoongi...kar wada mujhsein agr main naa bhi rahi to tu mera ye Sapna jarror poora karega aur apne iss sapne ko jaroor sakar karega chahein koi kuch bhi kahien.."

He promised..he promised to his mother and yes he fulfilled his promised given to his mother ..today he is a well know a responsible a.c.p of this city who has his own identity except his family name ..who gets well respect from other without using his family name ..this all she wants that her son gets his deserving respect from his dream ..kissing her photo on his phone sadly ..he come down from the bonet of the car and sits in his jeep while seeing her photo only his eyes become heavy and he sleeps there only 

On other hand 

That girl from that bar scaredly goes in her house by checking if someone is following her or not .lifting her dupatta from her face she nervously unlock her house door and pushing it lightly she again locked it firmly so no one can open that it other than her ..safely putting her keys in her bag she turns her back to move forward to seeing someone sucking a lollipop and suddey called her name clappingly 

Kalyani ..kalyani ye tum aagyi mere liye kuch laayi ho ..hmm bolo naa laayi ho kuch aapni aai kein liye main hoona tumhari aaai .." she childishly  spoke  to her which bought tears in kalyani's eyes and wipping it slowly..she come forward and makes sit her mothe on her chair 

Kalyani::" main aaj kuch nahi laayi ..lekin haan kal jaroor laaungi pakka promise ..maine jo khana banaya aai aapne vo khaa liya na " 

Anupriya nodded her head and kalyani caress her face lovingly ..she then urged her to sleep inside her in that small room of her house and makes her sleep there .. changing herself into a light colour kurti , then she goes in kitchen to have some food as she really gets tired ..eating some food from the left over meal she sits on there small area of her balcony room and while seeing the moon her eyes started to get moist thinking about her life ..how in childhood she live some happy moments with her family..all things are going well though they are not rich or something very well but being a single daughter of her parents she is living peacefully with them but her father suddenly started to come late in night or started to behave weirdly with her mother ..he started to shouted on them on little little things...her mother is a nice lady with a soft heart but thinking about her she didn't go from there otherwise his father left no stone to broke his marriage and one day They found all answers of their question when her father left permanently from their lives by leaving a letter for them in which he mentioned how her mother didn't satisfy his needs properly and how he tried to hold their relation but after meeting his new lady boss in his office they started to come closer and one day they cross their limits and she is now pregnant so he decided to leave them and gets shifted with her in foreign .. though at that time she is so small that she didn't understand the reason behind their separation but somewhere in her little heart she wished to see her mother happy again ..she wished to enjoy some little moments of happiness with her parents again but her all dream gets shattered by seeing her mother broken fully ..day by day she only worked hard to get their lively and afford the money to make her study ..as she is not much literate so not finding any route she started to dance there only ..by affording some money from there she makes her study but as the news spread about her family issues and her mother all parents makes their children away from her and she sits alone there in her class ..her life is always unfair to her whether snatching father love from her to her mother accident..her mother gets into a accident one day while returning from somewhere and she could not find her mother ..at that time she is in her teenage only and her studies also not completed ..she lost herself at that day ..she lost but god showed some mercy on her and a family helped her and they donate some money in poor child for like her children to compete education...she got her education complete ..abs started to look for some job ...but a well company is not ready to get her job without proper degree and if she wants to work somewhere else nobody is ready to put her bcz of her family background...from making her breakfast herself like some chappati or sometimes she sleeps empty stomach only nobody is there to take care of her ..she is all alone but one day while going somewhere she finds a lady figure with a mad look on her face clapping like a child and gets shocked seeing her mother .. she finds her mother ..she is all alive ..but alas one more time life gives a big shock to her and her mother lost her memory . From the left money which she gets by some stiching or something small work she gets her checked by a doctor who suggest them to make her treat gently and be patient with her ..and also suggests a good physcatrist and some medicine to maker her normal ..but due to her financial condition she could not afford that ..but as doctor also said that If she is not treated and gete out of her condition..she can die also that was the last thing she wants from her life ..from that day she also takes her mother ghungroo and goes to dance there ..she promised herself to not go on that route which her mother as she is still feeling burns of that .. but she cannot loose her mother who is the only one in the name of her family in this whole world...from that day she danced to earn some money to get their livelihood and to some save money for her mother treatment also ..but she didn't want to reveal her identity to get more insults form the society so that's why she puts veil while dancing so no one can identify her .. kalyani cries while seeing that ghungroo ..

Kalyani ::' aapkein liye maine vein ghungroo badhein hain apnein paoon main aai ..maine wada kiya hai khudsein ki main aapko jald sein jald ek achein hospital main admit karwakein rahoongi jisein aapka ilaaz ho saken .. main aapko nahi khoo sakti .. nahi khoo sakti .." she cries in pain when her eyes becomes heavy and she dropped there ...

Chapter ends ..

So pls let me know how you find this chapter ??

It's beautiful Vanshu... 

Emotional.. 

An insight into the childhood of Kalyani and Malhar.. 

Both love their mothers... 💕💕💕

He has lost his mother and living in her memories, fulfilled her wish becoming a police officer... 😭

She lost and found her mother only to know that her mother doesn't remember her now... 

She wore the ghungroo and started dancing to earn money for her mother's treatment.. 😭

Malhar's dad and Kallu's dad both men are horrible creatures.. 😡

Malhar is a good soul, caring for his step sister Swara... And she too loves him.. ❤️❤️

Malhar's mom lost her will to live...😭painful life she had..

Anupriya tried her best to provide for Kallu after her husband left.. Lekin aisa ho gaya uske saat.. 😭

Both the mom's have suffered.. 

Keep going Vanshu.. 

Back story is good.. 👍🏼

Wow vanshu update was awesome

Malhar ka pain how he lost her mother and how he can find her mother in kalyani 

Kaise Malhar ki mom ko dancing ka shok tha but because of her family she can't complete her dream 

And how her mother love his father but unka to kader hi nhi thi ki how much his wife loves him 

But in last her mother death with broken him more and how amazing he cares about swara zaruri nhi hota khoon ka rishta hai rishta kehlata hai

Kalyani ki mom ki memory lost even how she was living happily in her childhood but the same situation jo Malhar ki mom ka saath huva wahi Kalyani ka mom ka saath huva uska papa ki boss pregnant hogayi 

After that Kalyani thought ki ab uski mom nhi rahe but she got her but the situation was totally different her mother lost her memory or unha thik karna ka liya paise chaye hoga jo Kalyani ka paas nhi tha but she want to save her mom 

And she started dancing 

The chapter was totally emotional vanshu 

Just waiting ki akhir ya bacha hai kiska jldi batao na wait nhi hota 

The update is very emotional vanshuuu. 

Both their childhood are horrible and almost similar. They loved their mother's the most. But the women were treated badly by their men, which is very horrible. 

I just hope they find their solace in each other among the chaos in their life 

Both faced a lot in their life.  They are pure soul who crave for comfort and solace from their hard lives. 

This is too good Vanshu 

The backstories they were so emotional😭

I loved how you etched their characters with independent traits. Beautiful ❤️❤️❤️❤️