Kalma ss ::" khudgarzi"(chapter 2::- updated 07-10-2021 - Page 2

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Posted: 2 years ago
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yaar itne super thread he 

and nekki aur pooch pooch continue kar yaar 

jab samay miloongi aake saroor padoongi though i cant immediatelyπŸ€— 

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Promo to bohot thrilling aur exciting tha Vanshika... aur tum to ho hi itni creative ki chapters bhi pakka bohot cool honge!!! Update soon❀❀

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Posted: 2 years ago
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                                   Kalma ss ::- "khudgarzi"...


In a shaddy place a group of girls is dancing on a Shaady song ...and the boys who had gajra wrapped in their hands are shouting their names in a loud voices dancing with them to enjoy the night ....and some are busy in their intimacy activities to pleasure themselves ...but the common thing is that they all are impatiently waiting for a girl whose mere presence just makes the night more beautiful and today she is going to preform that's why a heavy crowd is present in terms to a get a small glimpse of her .. many girls tries to seduce them by giving their seducing expression but they didn't and continues to stares the gate waiting for her ... honesty malhar didn't want to go there but that aadi his subordinate and his only true secret keeper bring him there forcefully knowing very well how much he hates these places..malhar has high on his drinks as per his routine and addi is supporting him so he didn't gets slip there and gets injured ...

Malhar ::" Kya hai tumhein aadi...kyun laayein ho mujehin yahan kheechekin bhool gayien ho Kya ..main yahan ka a.cp hoo koi gunda nahi Jo aisi jagah pein jaakien inn logo ki tarah nachoo ...haato mujehin nahi rukana yahan ...he tries to go from there ... 

but addi stops him pleading him to join his company today and tells him that today their special dnacer is going to perform who is like a beautiful princess the person who just mere sees her face cannot forget her lifetime ..this magic she hold onto all the persons...malhar gets irritated listening his irritated voice and tries to go from there as he is not a bit interested listening that's dancer praises ....being a heir of the maharsathian family there .he has offered many nights with these types of girls to fulfill his manly desires but don't know why being a flirty one in his college time he can easily spend a night with any girl to fullfill his desires ...but his heart didn't allow him he somewhere believe that he should gets physically only one time in his life with the love of his life ..he comes out of his thoughts by the sudden darkness there ...he with wobbling legs tries to go from there but gets stop by listening the slow clinking sound of ankelte Even though he didn't want to move but , he looked back ...

On other side on stage suddenly all the lights got off and a meek white lights appears there in centre ...all the men shouts loudly one name smilingly in joy as their wait got over to see her ...

Whole place just echoed with one name 

  " Kalyani ...kalyani ...kalyani ...kalyani ........"

Malhar got amused seeing their craziness for a mere girl ..but suddenly his curiosity gets increased to see that girl for whom they all got so crazy ....naa...he didn't want to see her but just out of his curiosity he wants to see her also ..confused well he is like this only ...kalyani didn't lift her veil up and starts her performance under the moonlight which is enhancing her beauty more ...though malhar didn't want to agree but he really loose his heart today by just seeing her performance he desperately wants to see her face but she is only doing her steps ...it's like she is describing her pain in that song by dancing on that beats ...


Teri baahon mein
Jo sakoon tha mila
Main dhoonda bahut tha
Phir na milaa

Duniya chhoona
Chaahe mujhko yun
Jaisay unki saari
Ki saari main
Duniya dekhe
Roop mera
Koi na jaane
Bechari main

Haaye tooti saari
Ki saari main
Tere ishq mein
Hoi awari main
Haaye tooti saari
Ki saari main
Tere ishq mein
Hoi awari main

Koi shaam bulaaye
Koi daam lagaaye
Main bhi upar se hansti
Par andar se haaye
Kyun dard chupaye
Baithi hoon
Kyun tu mujhse kehti hai
Main khud hi bikhra huaa

Haaye andar andar
Se toota main
Tere ishq mein
Khud hi se rootha main
Haaye andar andar
Se toota main
Tere ishq mein khud
Hi se rootha main

Main jee bharke ro lun
Teri baahon mein so lun
Aa phir se mujhe mill
Main tujhse ye bolun
Tu anmol thi
Pal pal bolti thi
Aisi chup tu laga ke gayi
Saari khushiyaan kha ke gayi

Haaye andar andar
Se toota main
Tere ishq mein khud
Hi se rootha main
Haaye teri hoon
Saari ki saari main
Hotere liye na saari main...

Malhar can feels her tears in veil also ... Don't know why but a strong connection formed between them in first meeting only ...he tries to moves further to get a close glimpse of her but cannot move as all the men now gets full drunk and are jumping on floor not caring about anything just enjoying her dance ...some even made lusty comments on her body ...which makes malhar clutch his fists tightly in anger ...malhar Rane can gets allow anything in his life but seeing a girl insulted like that he cannot stand..angrily grabbing the collar of that man who made that comment he takes that man from there taking a last glance of dancing kalyani ...as the music is high and nobody is in their sense so they didn't notice this scene and continues to enjoy her dance .....

Malhar after coming out from there ...takes his belt out from his buckles of pants and started to wrapped it angrily around his hands ...staring that man with a fire gaze he without second thought started to beat that man ...the man gets first shocked seeing the acp of city there and gets further shocked seeing him angry on him this much and cried out his name in pain as he beats him senselessly...aadi got shocked seeing his senior in so much anger suddenly and tries to stop him by holding him back but he didn't stop and continues further to beat him ...but somehow he stops him and that man runs at his fastest speed to save his life from that acp hand...

Malhar ::" are sunta to jaa kyun maar khaayi tune...bhoolana maat ki Malhar Rane kissi bhi ladki ki izzat ko uchalnein walien insaan ko maaf Kar dega ...ajj to tu bach Gaya lekin agli baar Nahi bachega ...sallla ..." 

Aadi ::" sir sir...Kya hua aapko aise kyun itna bhadak rahein hai are ye to Roj ka hai jab yein ladkiyan aise naachengi to koi bhi mard aapne aap ko kaise rokk payega ..bataiyein ..but gets stopped in between seeing his flazing gaze on him who is burning like anything and if he continue further he will be the only one who will gets burn in his gaze...

Malhar ::" Kar li bakwass ...policewalien ki wardi pehenkein aise boltein huein sharm to nhi aati..are koi ladki Kal aise hi tumharein pass apne saath badhsalukhi kein liye complaint darz karanein aayegi ..tum to ussein bhi aise hi bakwass karkein chup kara dogein...agr aajkein baad Maine aisi koi bhi bakwass tumharein mooh sein suni to bhoolana mat ki main tumhein iss naukri sein dhakein markein Bahar Kar sakta Hoon samjhala..."

Addi sttuteringly nooded his head but hesitatingly malhar asked him something which amused addi and he started to cough suddenly

Malhar ::" vo kyaa tum mujhei uss ladki kein baarein main saari jankari dein saktien hoo .."

Aadi got confused listening girls name which made malhar irritate and he blurt out all the things ..

Malhar ::" are vahin ladki Jo ..vo abhi naach rahi thi...kalyani..Jo vahan pein dance Kar rahi thi ..."

Aadi got amused listening him and started to cough suddenly

Aadi ::" aap usski baat kar rahien hai ..acha kalyani ..dekha Maine kahan tha naa app bhi khudko rook nahi payenge ussein Milne sein dobara are voo Hain hi aisi achein achein sakht ladkein pighal jayein ...akhikar aapkein bhi armaan jaga hi diyein usne haina ..sir..he said teasingly but suddenly he moves to his ear and said slowly

Sir aap kahien to Kal ki raat ka plan fix Kara Doon uskien saath vaise to vo aisi Hain nahi lekin aapkein liye Kon hi mana karega .."

Malhar now loose all his patience to this stupid colleague of him but controlling himself he also said smirkingly in his ear..

Malhar ::" vaise addi tum kahoon to main bhi ek setting kara saktoon tumharin suspension ki and trust me mujhein ussein karnein main do min..nahi lagengi agr tumne ye bakwass apni yahin band nahi ki.."

Aadi now understand that his sir mood started to gets off so not to make him further angry on him he stops himself there only ...malhar relaxes himself and askes patiently that why that girl didn't lift her veil up during the dance and why she is shivering like that in whole performance..

Aadi ::" pata nahi sir lekin vo kalyani aisi hi Hain ...bholi si masoom si...usski aadakien to wakai sab dewwanein Hain ...ye bat to aajtak kissi ko samajh nahi aayi ki vo aapna ghoongaht. Kabhi kyun nahi uthati sabne bohot kahan ussein ki apna ghoongaht uthao apni shakkal dikhao lekin vo Hain ki ...bass aise hi naachkein logo ka maan behlakein chali jaati hain...isliye abb sab bass uska naach dektein hai ...lekin kuch mere jaise aaj bhi usski shakkal dekhnein ko tarastein hai sacchi ..."

Don't know why but malhar feels a bit of jealousy listening so many praise of kalyani from some other man ...it's look like only the first meeting which is not even like a full fledge meeting made malhar possessive for her ..he stops aadi there only ..

Malhar ::'" bass faltu Baatien kitni hi Kara loon...tumsein kaam ki ek nahi hogi ..Kal minister sahab aarahein haina ...uski security pein dhyaan Doon samjhein jaon..main jaa Raha hoo aur agr Kal late huien to yaad haina suspension..."

Aadi nodded his head and taking out his scooty key he left from there ..malhar also starts his jeep and left from there remembering that dance again and again..he could not forget that teary face of her which no one can see but his heart sense her pain from miles away like a true companion can sense their partner pain.

                                                                                         

So guys don't know you will like it or not .pls share your true review about this update and tell me should I make some changes in this story ...😊

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Posted: 2 years ago
#14

Wow vanshu masa aagaya read kar ka 

Aadi malhar ko zabardasti lage aya 

Malhar na kalyani ko dakha or usa first time dekhna ma hi usa koi connection feel huva 

Malhar ko kalyani ka aakon ma aasu nhi dak paya usna sab ko maara sirf kalyani ka liya 

And first time dekna ma hi jealousy feel hogayi malhar rane ko pata nhi aga aga kya hoga 

Ma abhi bbi teaser hi soch rahi hu ki kalyani ka pet ma kis ka bacha hai hume ya kab pata chale ga vanshuπŸ™πŸ˜ž

The update was amazing 

Plzz update soon mujhe pata hai ma both impatient horahi hu but can't wait

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Yaar really very interesting. Kaisa colleague hai Malhar ka? Police wala hokar aisi jagah jata h? Kalyani ki zaroor koi badi majboori hogi. Kahaan fas gaya Malhar apni colleague ke chakkar me? Kallu ka chehra nahi dekha...matlab will they meet again without Mallu knowing that she's actually Kallu?

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Awesome Vanshu.. 

Sach me bohot maza aaya.. 

Hamare ACP saab drunk hai phir bhi he doesn't like to be in places where women are treated like pieces of flesh.. 

His subordinate Aadi wants to see the dance and persuaded him to stay back.. 

And Mallu feels intrigued by the veiled dancer whose name is Kalyani.. He tries to get a glimpse of her face.. 

He feels her pain in the song she danced for.. πŸ˜­

Aur jis aadmi ne Kallu ke baare me gandhi remarks bola uski toh apne belt se chamdi uthar di.. πŸ‘

But he feels the pull to know more about her which this Aadi thinks is lust. πŸ€¦β€β™€οΈπŸ€¦β€β™€οΈ

Acha sunaya Aadi ko bhi.. 


Kyun hamare ACP sahab drinks le rahe hain? kyun unhe dancer Kalyani ke baare me aur jaanna hai...? Kya woh ek dusre ko pehle se jaante hain? Kaise?  

Ye sab jaan ne keliye besabri se intezaar kar rahi hun hamare Vanshu Rani ka.. 😘😘

❀️❀️❀️❀️

That's my promo for this story.. πŸ˜Š

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Posted: 2 years ago
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God vanshuu... The update is too good. 

It's really intriguing. I really want to how it started between them. Malhar really pulled towards her. 

This type of story with a dark and shady backdrop is good. 

I really wanted to know kalyani's helplessness. 

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: sehreemstory

Wow vanshu masa aagaya read kar ka 

Aadi malhar ko zabardasti lage aya 

Malhar na kalyani ko dakha or usa first time dekhna ma hi usa koi connection feel huva 

Malhar ko kalyani ka aakon ma aasu nhi dak paya usna sab ko maara sirf kalyani ka liya 

And first time dekna ma hi jealousy feel hogayi malhar rane ko pata nhi aga aga kya hoga 

Ma abhi bbi teaser hi soch rahi hu ki kalyani ka pet ma kis ka bacha hai hume ya kab pata chale ga vanshuπŸ™πŸ˜ž

The update was amazing 

Plzz update soon mujhe pata hai ma both impatient horahi hu but can't wait

thank you so much arwu  ...πŸ€—πŸ€—

Glad to know you liked it ...πŸ’•πŸ’•β£οΈ 

Yaa Malhar ki kaafi saari shades dekhene ko milegi ismein ...aur kalyani ki bhi ..

You will get to know soon arwu that kalyani is carrying whom child ...or will she able to give birth to him/her or not ..πŸ˜‰

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: Autumn09

Yaar really very interesting. Kaisa colleague hai Malhar ka? Police wala hokar aisi jagah jata h? Kalyani ki zaroor koi badi majboori hogi. Kahaan fas gaya Malhar apni colleague ke chakkar me? Kallu ka chehra nahi dekha...matlab will they meet again without Mallu knowing that she's actually Kallu?

thank you so much pragyu πŸ€—πŸ€—...

Glad to know you loved it πŸ’—πŸ’— aree ye addi ki aagein bohot band bajane wali hai par yahin malhar ki maddat bhi karega kalyani sein milwanein main πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰.. 

Hmm sahi jaa rahi hoo balikein abhi ye ek baar aur aise hi milenge bina ek dusrein ko jaane pechanein..πŸ˜‰

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Originally posted by: rekha_crm

Awesome Vanshu.. 

Sach me bohot maza aaya.. 

Hamare ACP saab drunk hai phir bhi he doesn't like to be in places where women are treated like pieces of flesh.. 

His subordinate Aadi wants to see the dance and persuaded him to stay back.. 

And Mallu feels intrigued by the veiled dancer whose name is Kalyani.. He tries to get a glimpse of her face.. 

He feels her pain in the song she danced for.. πŸ˜­

Aur jis aadmi ne Kallu ke baare me gandhi remarks bola uski toh apne belt se chamdi uthar di.. πŸ‘

But he feels the pull to know more about her which this Aadi thinks is lust. πŸ€¦β€β™€οΈπŸ€¦β€β™€οΈ

Acha sunaya Aadi ko bhi.. 


Kyun hamare ACP sahab drinks le rahe hain? kyun unhe dancer Kalyani ke baare me aur jaanna hai...? Kya woh ek dusre ko pehle se jaante hain? Kaise?  

Ye sab jaan ne keliye besabri se intezaar kar rahi hun hamare Vanshu Rani ka.. 😘😘

❀️❀️❀️❀️

That's my promo for this story.. πŸ˜Š

aww thank you so much di for loving this so much ...πŸ€—πŸ€—

Itne lambein aur pyaarein sein comment kein liye thank you so much ...aapko wakai ye chapter bohot acha laga hai lagata hai ..πŸ˜³πŸ‘πŸΌ

Aur aapka promo full dhashu hai meri FF ki kaafi publicity ho gayi ..πŸ˜†πŸ˜†


Jaldi pata chalenge inn saarein swaloon kein jawab aapko ...wait for it its gonna be interesting in upcoming chapters...πŸ˜‰