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Golden Ginni,Khwaishfan,,Coderlady.

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Rishtey...Relationships...Part 7

 Naksh was driving his car.Somebody waved hand seeing the car.He was surprised as she was the same girl he met in the theatre.

Naksh:You?Why did you make me stop the car?

She:I thought that you were a taxi driver.Because you look like a taxi driver.That's why.

Naksh:You thought that I am a taxi driver.Fine.But why did you feel that my car is a taxi?

She:It's looks so.

Naksh was irritated.

She:If it's not a taxi,it's fine.But can you please drop me home?I will give you money.

Naksh:I am not a taxi driver to take money.I will give you lift.

She smiled:Thanks.

Naksh:I am not actually interested to give life to an irritating girl like you.I am giving you lift only because it's night time and you are a girl.

She thought:Kadoos!I feel like calling him 'Kadoos' directly for calling me an irritating girl.But since a lift is essential for me,I need to control my anger.

Naksh:Get inside the car.

She got inside the car and sat in the front.

Naksh:Why did you sit in the front with me?You are not my girl friend or wife.

She:But if I sit back you will really look like a taxi driver.That's why.

Naksh looked at her:Don't give stupid reasons.

Suddenly she saw a lorry coming.

She:Oh no Lorry...

Naksh suddenly looked at the front and saw a lorry.

He drove the car to a side.She was scared.

She:Ahh!

In fear he held her shoulder tight with one hand.

He put a sudden break.He was relieved.Suddenly she noticed his palm on her shoulder.She smiled at him.

She:You are really like a kid who holds he nearest person in fear.

Suddenly he realized that he was holding her shoulder and took his hand back.

Naksh:I am sorry.

She:This will be the result if the driver looks at somewhere else instead of concentrating on driving.

He was embarrassed.

He started driving the car again.

Naksh:Where should I drop you?

She told him the address.

Naksh:By the way..where are you working?You are travelling at night.That's why I asked you.

She:I am a dance choreographer.I had a dance programme...i mean my students performed.After the programme,I am going back home.I did not get any vehcle.That's why I asked you to drop me.

Naksh:Ok.

She:By the way I am Keerti.

Naksh:Did I ask your name?Then why are you telling me your name?

Keerti said in her mind:Kadoos!

Naksh:It's not good to tell your name to strangers.They can be dangerous.

Keerti:But I don't consider you as a stranger as we met twice.Now after travelling alone with you for some time I understood that you are not dangerous.

Naksh:You are always good at arguing and winning.

She smiled.

Keerti:If you don't want to know my name,it's ok.But can you tell me your name?I am not dangerous.I swear!

He smiled.

Suddenly she saw her house.

Keerti:Please stop the car.

He stopped the car and she got out of the house.

Keerti:Thanks.Still you did'nt tell me your name.

Naksh:Naksh.

She smiled.

Keerti:Though you are a kadoos,your name is sweet.

Naksh got angry:Kadoos?

She ran inside home laughing.

Naksh:Mad girl!

He drove away.



Rudra took Sitara to a restaurant.

Sitara:Rudra,why are we here?

Rudra:We did not even have a proper date.So I thought that we will have our first date here.

Sitara smiled.

Sitara thought:Rudra is so romantic.But I am not able to love him or be romantic.

Rudra and Sitara went inside the restaurant.

Rudra ordered all her favourite dishes.

Sitara was surprised.

Sitara:You ordered my favourite food items.

Rudra:As a husband I am supposed to do that.Right?Before becoming your husband I am your closest friend too.Your happiness is more important for me.

Sitara became emotional.

She thought:My happiness is more important for Rudra.But I am not giving him any happiness.

She felt guilty.

They had food together.

Sitara:Thank you Rudra for making our first date beautiful.

Rudra smiled:But what's the need of this 'thank you' and all.We are a couple Sitara.

She smiled.



Nandini went to the dining room.She could not believe her eyes.Because the dining room looked like a restaurant with many dishes on the table and a waiter there to serve food.

Manik came from behind and held her.

Manik:Hey my cute wife!

He made her sit there.He also say there.

Nandini:What is this Manik?What was the need of this?

Manik:You refused to come with me to have dinner outside as you wanted to have dinner at home itself.But i want to have dinner in a restaurant.That's why I made our dining room a restaurant.So both our wishes are fulfilled.

Nandini:You are behaving like a teenager Manik.We are old.Behave maturely.

Manik:Who is old?I am not old.You may be old,not me.I am always young.

Nandini giggled.

They both had dinner while chatting.

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Nice part dear

Loved it 

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Part 7

wonderful update

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Who is this girl Naksh ran into? For now he is finding her irritating.

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Sitara is not yet ready to move into her new relationship.

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Golden Ginni,Khwaishfan,,Coderlady.

Thanks a lot friends



Rishtey...Relationships...Part 8

 Naksh was on the way back home from the office.

While driving he saw a girl arguing and fighting with a vegetable seller.She was Keerti.He smiled.He stopped the car and went near her.Suddenly she looked at him.

Keerti got surprised:Naksh!

Naksh:Why are you fighting with him?

Keerti:He is into bargaining.How dare he?

Naksh looked at him: Bargaining is bad.I support her.If she complains to the police you will be caught.So you better sell it at the correct price.

The vegetable seller sold the vegetables with the correct price.

Keerti:Thanks for helping me.

Naksh smiled and told her:Though you call me kadoos,you not only fight with me but with a vegetable seller too.You are very good at arguing.

Keerti looked down in embarrassment. He giggled.

Naksh:Anyways..bye...

Keerti:Before that give your phone number to me.Don't say that you will not give your phone number to a stranger.I am not a stranger to you.

Naksh smiled.

Naksh:Ok.But why do you want my number?

Keerti:So that when the vegetable seller troubles me again,I can call and you can help me.

They both laughed.

They both shared their phone numbers with each other.

Naksh:Bye.

Keerti:Bye.

Naksh got inside the car and drove away.

Months passed.Gradually they became friends.



Rudra entered the room.He was surprised to see his favaurite cake on the table.

Sitara came before him with a smile.

Sitara:I baked your favourite cake specially for you.

He was surprised.

Rudra:Wow..my favourite cake.

Sitara:Taste and see how it is.

Rudra:You made it.It will be the best.

She smiled.

Tum agar manaaoge to maan jaaunga
Main tere bulaane pe laut aaunga
Har safar mein saath tera
Main yoon hi nibhaunga


He cut the cake and ate a piece.

Rudra:It's yummy.

She smiled.

He ate more.There was cream on his lips.

Sitara giggled:Your lips are full of cream.

Rudra:Leave it yaar.

She wiped his lips.He felt a sizzling sensation.He looked at her eyes deeply.Unknowingly she was also lost in his eyes.

Kabhii tumhhe yaad meri aaye
Palkon se zulf hata lena
Saaf dikhunga main tumko wahin
Jo na dikhun to bata dena

Suddenly she realized that she was standing close to him.She moved away blushing.He smiled.

Kabhi mujhe der jo ho jaaye
Waqt ko thoda bacha lena

Sitara thought:Oh my God!What did I feel now?Am I falling for Rudra?Who can't fall for a nice loving husband like Rudra?

She blushed.

Phir se milunga main tumko wahin
Jo na milun to saza dena




When Rudra sat on the sofa,it broke.

Rudra:Oh no...

Sitara:How did this happen?

Rudra:It's very old.That's why.

Sitara:Where will you sleep?

Rudra:I will sleep in my music instruments room.

Sitara:No need.You can sleep on my bed.

Rudra was surprised.

Sitara:I trust you.

They both smiled at each other sweetly.

Meri zameen ko tere kadam ka
Na jaane kab se tha intezaar
Ek na ek din aana hai tumko
Dil ko mere hai yeh aitbaar

Rudra and Sitara lay on each side of the bed with a smile.



While walking Sitara slipped and Rudra caught her by her waist.

Main khuda se tere siva
Kuch aur na mangunga

They shared a romantic eye lock.


Kabhi tumhe yaad meri aaye
Itni si baat samajh jaana
Phir se milunga main tumko wahin
Raah se meri guzar jaana

  (Shershaah).



Both moved away from each other shyly seeing Manik-Nandini watch them.

Manik-Nandini became very happy to see it.

In Naksh's office,for the company anniversary they were arranging a dance show.Naksh decided to take part in it.

Naksh:I will call Keerti.She will teach me dance.

He rang up Keerti.

She did'nt pick up the phone.

Naksh:Why is Keerti not picking up the phone?Today she is supposed to be free.I will go to her house.

Naksh went to Keerti's house.He was shocked to see some people pushing Keerti and mother out.

Naksh was shocked.Keeri was about to fall down.But Naksh held her.She looked at him tearfully.

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Loved it dear 

Awesome and beautiful part

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Continue soon 😌🙏🙏💕

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Sorry for the delayed comment.

Part 1

Naksh & Rudra love each other, but like children, they would fight for a toy.

Manik & Nandini told Naqsh to give the teddy to Rudra when they saw him crying.

It seems that Manan gives more attention to Rudra as he is the youngest child.

Also, they assume that Naqsh to be a mature person. However, Rudra needs to understand that he cannot always get everything he wants.

The bonding between Naksh & Sitara was incredible.

When Naqsh left on Rudra's entry, it was nice to see that Sitara stopped him from leaving.

Naqsh stood first in the class, but Manik was happier to see Rudra scoring 60 plus in Maths as it was the first time.

However, Naqsh's promise motivated Rudra to work hard in Maths.

Nice to see Manik deciding to make Naksh a part of his company.

But it would depend on Naqsh's interest.

Naqsh & Rudra got attracted to Sitara.

I wonder what would be Sitara's choice.

Part 2

The imaginary song sequence of Naqsh, Rudra, & Sitara was romantic.

The Manan FB & proposal scenes were romantic.

I loved the way Naqsh & Rudra celebrated their anniversary.

Naqsh & Rudra's approach towards Sitara was romantic.

Yet, Sitara's choice isn't clear.

Manik & Nandini assumes that Sitara loves Rudra & decides to get him married to her.

Sad that Manan told Naqsh to forget Sitara.

Rudra trying to hurt himself in the past is very much shocking.

Another shocking thing is Naqsh overheard his parents' conversation & assumed that he was not their real son.

Glad that Naqsh got to know the truth.

I wonder who could be Naqsh's biological parents.

Part 3

Manan not being Rudra's biological parents is one of the shocking twists.

The Manan & Poojun secenes are romantic.

Shockingly, Manan eloped & took refuge in Poojun's place.

Nandini's dad came to kill Manik, but Arjun & Pooja sacrificed their lives & gave Rudra's responsibility to Manan.

Glad that Manan decided to tell the truth to Rudra, but Naqsh advised not to tell him anything.

Naqsh's suggestion to leave the decision to Sitara is quite sensible.

Part 4

Sitara went to Manan's house, but Naqsh rejecting Sitara's love seems that he decided to sacrifice his love for Rudra.

It is time for Rudra to know the truth & accept the reality.

Part 5

Manan took the proposal for Rudra at Rohan's place for Sitara.

Sitara accepted the proposal, assuming that Naqsh did not love her.

Rudra's guitar song was touching.

Good that Naqsh & Rudra joined Manik's company after their degree.

Sad that Naqsh decided to leave the place on Rudra's wedding day.

Part 6

Manan's scene with Naqsh was emotional. Naqsh informed his parents about the new job & left. Glad they accepted his decision.

I thought Rudra would understand Naqsh's feelings & hand over Sitara to him, but that didn't happen.

But I loved his consideration for Sitara.

Rudra went to a movie, but the girl asking questions about the movie wasn't acceptable.

Their nok-jhok disturbed the audience.

I think Naqsh will fall for that girl.

Part 7 & 8

Rudra-Sitara's first date after marriage was romantic.

Rudra arranged the favorite dishes for Sitara, which touched her heart.

Sitara is falling in love with Rudra.

The Naksh-Keerti nok jhok was funny.

Good, they introduced themselves to each other.

It was nice to see Naqsh supporting Keerti against the vegetable vendor.

Naqsh & Keerti sharing their mobile no were sweet.

Nice to see them becoming friends.

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Part 8

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Sitara is making an effort to grow into her relationship.