ShiVi OS - "Sur hai na taal hai" (VM updated) - Page 4

Barkha tumne story likha hai! Kaha chupa ke rakkha tha yeh talent?? 😲

It was amazing behen!!!! Loved loved loved it!!!! 😍❤🤗😘

Originally posted by: MayaTharkiFairy

Barkhaa!!! Kahan thi tu?!?!?

You chupi rustom....hamein pehele kyun nahi dikhaya apna writing skills 🥺👏

That was amazing!!!!♥️

"Dourey par rahe hain"🤣

Loved it!!!👍🏼

Thank you so much bacha 🤗

I somehow always imagined Shiva finding it hard to believe that Raavi actually loves him and dismissing it as douray parhna 🤣

Haaaayethis was beatiful🧡🖤

The ending😍😍😍

Loved it🧡

Such a cute lil Drabble! 

Lovely read❤️

Hugs 🤗

OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGG Barkhaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa whatttttttttt is this khazanaaaaaaaaaa.........writeeee more phastphastphasttttt I soooo want to read moreeeeeeee.....and the intricate details you've put in are sooo goooddddd which makes it lively and even more beautifulll, I loveddd itt!!!❤️

Barkhaaa why were you not writing all these days? Wow wow wow

Originally posted by: CheerlessIM

Beautiful ❤😍

Thank you so much dear 🤗

Originally posted by: Sugarcanes_AC

Awesome 😍😍

Thank you 😳

Awww... Lovely I love the last scene 

Awh what a lovely story 💜💜