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Posted: 2 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: rekha_crm

So sweet Pragya.. 

Casette me galat gana bhar diya shop wale ne.. ๐Ÿ˜† happens all the time..

Kalyani ki neend uda di aaryan ki awaaz ne.. 

Jaana pehchan a bhi laga.. 

Use logon se milne me jhijhak hai.. 

Kalyani dund nikalegi use.. 

Malhar babu hi hai na.. ๐Ÿ˜Š


Pragya ye story tragic yoh nahi hai na..? 

Na Na...ye wali bilkul tragic nahin h. Thoda sa angst hai, bas. Kallu jitna Mallu ko bhaav nahin degi, Aryan utna use apne peeche bhagayega. Fun story h ye wali.

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Posted: 2 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: Phlo004

Pragyu main emotional ho gayi iss chapter ko padhkein ....๐Ÿฅบ๐Ÿฅบ sachmain bohot emotional tha ye ...bichara Malhar kalyani se naa bat kar paya na kuch aur kalyani ne bhi ussein koi bhaw hi nahi diya ussien jaldi shaadi karni hai Aryan se ๐Ÿ˜†ussein kya pta Aryan aur koi nahi balki hamra mallu hai mera pyaara sa mallu sabki kitni care karta hai acha makkhan laga raha tha hone wale sasurji ko ๐Ÿคฃlekin sasurji to kisi aur se baat chalane ki baat kar rahe hai ๐Ÿ˜†kaise bola kalyani acha hua Atul ko samajh nahi aaya Varna vahi lene ke dene pad jaate beachare ko๐Ÿ˜†bike riding ๐Ÿ˜ณ..

Overall it was a emotional chapter with some laughing scenes which I like thank you pragyu for writing this story ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š


Thank you so much Vanshu ๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•


You are the inspiring idol when it comes to writing FFs. Itna to maine kabhi show ka intezaar nahin kiya jitna forum par tumhare FFs ka karti hoon.

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Posted: 2 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: Autumn09

Na Na...ye wali bilkul tragic nahin h. Thoda sa angst hai, bas. Kallu jitna Mallu ko bhaav nahin degi, Aryan utna use apne peeche bhagayega. Fun story h ye wali.


Wow. 


Jitna bhi time chahe ke lo.. Par complete karna.. 

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Posted: 2 years ago
#24

Itโ€™s beautiful and bit emotionalโ€ฆ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ



Kallu Aryan ki itni tareef kar rahi hai aur use  Aryan se shadi karni haiโ€ฆ๐Ÿ˜†


Bechare Malharji ko hurt hua kallu ki baatein sunkarโ€ฆ๐Ÿ˜ญ





Loved it ๐Ÿ˜ 



Waiting for next update..



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Posted: 2 years ago
#25

Just read chapter 3...it was so emotional.. 

Bechara Malhar Kalyani se baat nahi kar paya pehle.. 

Phir bike ride pe uski baatein sunkar bohot sad bhi ho gaya.. 

Ab kya hoga.. 

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Posted: 2 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: Autumn09


Thank you so much Vanshu ๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•


You are the inspiring idol when it comes to writing FFs. Itna to maine kabhi show ka intezaar nahin kiya jitna forum par tumhare FFs ka karti hoon.

aww thank you pargyu ๐Ÿ˜บ๐Ÿ˜บ for this compliment but maine bhi tum logo ko dekhke hi likhana sikha hai and I am glad I meet you here 

My cutiepie ๐Ÿ˜ฝ๐Ÿ˜ฝ love you ๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•

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Posted: 2 years ago
#27

"Kalyani to ek hawaa ka jhonka thi aur Malhar gehra samundar jo chahkar bhi hawaa ke saath nahin chal sakta. Bas hawaa ki shararatein uske man mein lehrein hi utha sakti hain"- just wanna tell you that these lines are gonna stay with me for a long time! You seriously have professional level writing skills! I can't express how beautifully you have written it. It felt as if I saw kalyani from a lover's eyes, from her lover Malhar's eyes! Just loved it yaar!!!

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Posted: 2 years ago
#28

Just read all the 3 chapters.. it's so nicely described! I don't know why but the filmy kid in me is saying that Aryan is Malhar. It would be so so so much fun!! But something else can also happen!! Btw update soon๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

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Posted: 2 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: Jara567

Just read all the 3 chapters.. it's so nicely described! I don't know why but the filmy kid in me is saying that Aryan is Malhar. It would be so so so much fun!! But something else can also happen!! Btw update soon๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜


Thank you so so much Jara.

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Posted: 2 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: Priyapriyu

Itโ€™s beautiful and bit emotionalโ€ฆ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ



Kallu Aryan ki itni tareef kar rahi hai aur use  Aryan se shadi karni haiโ€ฆ๐Ÿ˜†


Bechare Malharji ko hurt hua kallu ki baatein sunkarโ€ฆ๐Ÿ˜ญ





Loved it ๐Ÿ˜ 



Waiting for next update..




Thank you Priyu.