ShiVi SS- Ulajh kar tujhse- Part 6 pg 28(28.9.21) - Page 3

Originally posted by: Foxii

Not feeling good about this story for now... what decision is Shiva making🥱

Waiting to read the first Chapter

Hehehe. Tissues ready?

Originally posted by: Scarysea

Wow..you started something and this is mysterious with Shiva going away ..Raavi has not realised but shiva seems to have taken a painful decision..knowing you this would have an tornado of emotions ..jo karna please ending happy de dena 

I am hoping for the tornado of emotions to hit you guys. Lets see how this goes. 

Thank you so much Chiki (did I remember it correctly?)

I am glad you liked it!🌹

Originally posted by: sangy

Hello, I am your ardent fan. 

Thats really sweet. 

From the time I have read Mine, you have my attention and my heart.

Aww. Thank you so much. 

I love reading all the writers in this forum, they sometimes have the most beautiful ideas, mind-blowing imagination and the naughtiest thoughts. 

They do! Such beautiful stories. We have an array of them to choose from. 

But you my dear...you write poetry in prose. 

Again thank you so much!

Every emotion captured in the most beautiful words. I do know how many time I am read Mine and your other works, but each time I read they create a havoc in my senses and stir my heart. 

That was very sweet and kind of you. Also good to hear and very humbling that my words can touch you deeply. 

I wanted to dedicate this to you and thanks for writing...

Tumhare har shabadh mein bayan ehsaas 

Saanson ka thaam leti aur dhadkan ko theej kar deeti 

Khwaish ki kuch aur waqt un ehsaason mein doobein rehna

Bechaini mein khushi aur khushi mein bechaini ka ehsas delati

Ankhon mein gum aur hotho mein muskan lati

 Bar bar har bar, jab hi kuch naya padhoon, mujhe tumhare thodsa aur hain Ghulam banati.

That was really kind and warm of u. Thank u.

Shabd dil se aayen to dil mein utarte hain,

Kabhi chain aur kabhi bechain karte hain,

Shabdon ki dunya hai hi itni sundar,

Sapnon ko bhi aankhon se utaar kar sach karte hain... 

P.S.I hope not to have creeped you out...🤭😁🤭🤗

Not at all. I don’t creep out that easily...

Originally posted by: Pixiepadhi

Yayy... you are back ❤️

Yayyy I am! 

Shivas pain is so beautifully described here.i like here that he is closer to suman and shared his pain with her😍.

Yeah. Suman is his mum and I always felt they could explore these both more u know? They both have quite similar traits.

What decision will he take? What has happened? Too much suspense.🥺🥺🥺

Wait and Watch. Heart attacks on way.

I hope my shivi will be fine... plzzz Updateee soonnn❣️❣️❣️❣️

Sooon. And you also update soon k?

Originally posted by: kitm

Amazing 👌 👌 beautifully written 😘😘

So excited to read this story...you describe each emotion perfectly 😊

Waiting for first chapter ❤️😊😊

Thank you so much🌺

I am really glad you liked it.

Coming sooon...

Originally posted by: GrilledCheese

Lovely start! Waiting to see what happened with Shiva ❤️

Thank you. The answer to that (at least a part of it)

Is coming soon. Guess it if u can🤣

Originally posted by: ItsmePriya

Wow...you back again...❤️

The prologue is very intriguing....

The part describing shiva's emotions is so beautifully done❤️

Waiting for the next part🤗

Yesss me back again!!!🌺

Thank you sooo much. Priya?

Next part is coming sooon. So is a heart attack.

Interesting and intriguing prologue👏

Shiva conflicting emotions were beautifully described👏

Suman and Shiva understand each other so well, their bond is beautiful ❤️

Eagerly waiting for 1st part 

Yup you remembered my name correctly🤗

Great.... Update soon.