Shivi : Ek khatti meethi lovestory part 07 updated page 6(23/09)

                             INTRO

Raavi getting fed up of Devta asks Gaura to let her stay away from them so that she can move on and  rather than stopping her they sends Shiva with her somewhere  although shiva would be angry with her but later on they start to get habituated with one other. So how about this story 

I have not written before so if anybody is interested I will try to write more or any one else can continue with the theme I will keep giving them my inputs

                                  INDEX

• PART - 1 (PAGE-1)
• PART - 2 (PAGE-2)
• PART - 3 (PAGE-2)
• PART - 4 (PAGE-4)
• PART - 5 (PAGE-5)
• PART - 6 (PAGE-6)

Next Morning After the Kidnapping 

 ( Here suman has not asked the family to go to the kuldevta mandir)

Raavi as usual got up early aur you can say to escape her patidev woke up extra early and got busy in the house hold chores, By the time Dhara joined her she has finished the breakfast .

Dhara- Raavi tujhe aaram karna chahiye tha kal jo kuch bhi hua uske baad

Raavi replied cutting dhara in between-

"Nahi Dhara di ab maine thik hu bs kamre main bethe bethe bhi bore hi hoti toh socha ghar ka kaam hi karlu ."

When suddenly Dhara noticed that Raavi isn't wearing any of her martial signs to which she asked-" Raavi tera mangalsutra kahan h aur tune sindoor bhi nhi lagaya 

Hearing the mention of martial signs Raavi got reminded of the heartbreaking & painful two days of her married life but nonetheless controlling herself she answred - aadat nhi h na di toh bhul gayi .

"Aadat nhi h toh ho jayegi bacha par aise nayi dulhan suni suni si achi nhi lagti ja jakar pehen le "-Dhara told her softly looking at her upset face

Nodding at Dhara Raavi left the kitchen only to meet Rishita outside who heard what Dhara said.

Seeing her Rishita got reminded of what dev accused her dad of and scolded her so to feel better she said taunting raavi - you know Raavi sajne sawarne ka bhi tabhi maan karta h jb koi aapki tarif kare jaise mera dev par afsoos shiva toh tmhe thik se dekhta bhi nhi ulta tmhe kabhi chipkali toh kabhi chudail kehta rehta h toh tm tyar ho bhi toh kiske liye.

Raavi felt really hurt by Rishita's words but still ignoring her left from there thinking not to start another drama early morning.

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Once reaching the room Raavi eyes looked thoroughly for Shiva as she doesn't want to face him after last night because deep down she never wanted to say those three words to Shiva even after all their fights and bickerings as hating someone isn't possible for a soft and pure heart like her but She just wanted to get back at him to hurt him just as much as she was hurting for being left alone once more by someone and in anger she uttered those words and now she don't know how to rectify her doings .

Enough said her mind and she stopped herself from pondering over unnecessary thoughts, she decided to do for what she came here.

Standing Infront of the mirror Raavi wore some light jewellery and looked for the 

sindoor box not finding it she searched around and saw Shiva holding something similar standing by the door.

Noticing the sindoor box in his hand Raavi silently forwarded her hand towards him asking for it .

Seeing her outstretched hand Shiva looked questionably at her not being attuned to her mute mode.

Seeing him standing still as a statue Raavi rolled her eyes in irritation and decided to move out from there,

When suddenly Shiva stopped her from going and filled her hair partition with the sindoor.

Nice start. 👍🏼

Do continue. I would love to read more. 

Nice start😊

Waiting for next part

Lovely start. Update next part soon❤️

Nice start. Rishita is such a pain

Awsome plot

Beautiful start 

Cont soon ❤

Part-2

"To say Raavi was completely taken aback by this gesture of Shiva and opened her mouth to scold him but controlling herself she left the room angrily all the while glaring at Shiva. 

                  As if the movement of Raavi was all that's needed for Shiva to came out of his trance and felt really awkward for his behaviour. 

Shiva's Point of view

Seeing her leaving the room Shiva went into thought realizing how from last night he was behaving so weirdly around this Mami ki Behen ki beti which is causing trouble in his life.He knew why he behaved the way at the godown where they were kept but after coming back whatever he was doing even he doesn't have answer for it like last night from when he started not fighting with his Mami ki behen ki beti because he said ladne nhi aaya hu. 

Why i felt so worried for her? 

Why he behaved so softly with her and now 

This why he did this? 

He never was a kind soul for that chudail then what changed now? 

Why her words of last night actually hurt somewhere because it was a give and take rule that he hated her and vice versa than what changed. 

And these changes in him had made him restless enough to avoid her like a plaque, 

So he decided to steer clear of her path and that's why he didn't graced the room with his presence from last night just to avoid her. 

He came only in the morning just to take his clothes after making sure that chipakli is nowhere near the room thats when Gombi has asked him to bring aalta powder(red paste used in pooja) from his room( aka store room) so he took this box thinking it to be aalta powder only to realize later that it was sindoor box of his wife aka that chipakli so Gombi asked to take it back when His Dhara bhabhi came there and like their daily routine asked Gombi to fill her maang. 

    Shiva always wished to do this in future from the time he first saw Gombi doing this and when he saw her like that with her empty hair partition the same thought came to his mind and without realizing on his own he ended up applying the sindoor for her but as his trance broke he realized his mistake that they are not Dhara bhabhi and Gombi and not at all happily married.

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       After coming out of the room Raavi felt completely awkward and emotional she always used to found this gesture of Gombi and Dhara Bhabhi really sweet and Romantic and wished to do so herself in future but never thought her every wish will hurt so much and give her even more pain. Controlling her emotions she decided to wait there only for Shiva to come out  but suddenly she realised that her work is almost done only the black chain is missing which she remembered keeping in the washroom to confirm her doubt she went towards the washroom. 

   Inside the washroom Dev has just finished his bath and opened the door and Raavi who just reached there pulled the door to open which caused them to collide with each other due to which Dev slipped on the wet floor only to be pulled back by Raavi by his hands and this scene  got witnessed by someone and made that person really angry and jealous

Ohh really nice update!

😯😯😯 ye kya ho gya 

Dev raavi ko  close dekh ke shiva aur rishita ka Para to high hone wala h 🤪🤪

Nice update 

Cont soon🥰