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Posted: 3 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: katheriene

Amazing drabble๐Ÿ‘

Shiva showed Rishita what is meant by romance๐Ÿ˜†

Shiva was aware of Raavi's ogling session, loved Shivi's first kissโค๏ธ

Maam's entry was perfect๐Ÿ˜†

thank you๐Ÿค—

maami ko to aana hi tha๐Ÿคฃ

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Posted: 3 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: ananya269

Rishita totally deserves this!!


Hayeee!! I wish Shiva did this in show. I canโ€™t wait for them to have their first actual kiss. Not that they are going to show it ๐Ÿค”


But that maami twist at the end was hilarious ๐Ÿคฃ


thank you๐Ÿ˜†

I am going to make Rishu baby suffer in my os too๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜ˆ

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Posted: 3 years ago
#23

thank youโค

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Posted: 3 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: -Sarcy-

Ek teer, do shikar! Zor ka jhatka haye zoro se laga... ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ


Haye Maami! ๐Ÿ˜† Given how full of herself Rishita is, she deserved this. 

๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

Rishu baby deserves every bashing right now๐Ÿคฃ

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Posted: 3 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: Sakshi_t155

Koi mami ko check kr lo kahin heart attack na aa gya ho๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

itni jaldi kaise๐Ÿ˜†

abhi bohot kuch dekhna baaki hai๐Ÿคฃ

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Posted: 3 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: MeeraWrites

Oh God! I can't stop laughing. 

Fantastic drabble. ๐Ÿ‘ Whenever I see your update in the homepage, I know that it's gonna be a ride. You never disappoint me. 


Thank you๐Ÿ˜†


Shiva's toofani idea ๐Ÿ˜† At first I thought he's gonna scare Rishita in the pretext of Kesar. But no, his idea was indeed toofani clubbed with jhadka. ๐Ÿคฃ

Shivi scenes almost took me to the edge of the seat. The showstopper was maami. ๐Ÿคฃ 


Last scene cracked me up . Thank you so much for this gem of a Shivi tale. 



Do write more like this. ๐Ÿ˜†

Sure๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜‰

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Posted: 3 years ago
#27

Bbeautiful os. Can wr get part 2

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Posted: 3 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: Hanyshah

MAAAMIIII WAS THERE TOOOO ! ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ



Oh my god ! What have you DONE !! ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

Maami's galatfehmi is proven wrong ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚


Kabhi na kabhi to ye hona hi hai na


Anywaay, though I do not condone Shiva taking Raavi's first kiss just because he wanted to give Rishita her own medicine, I want to believe that he himself has wanted to this for a while ! And noticing his wife's ogling him just helped cement that decision ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚


I have no problem in this theory too๐Ÿ˜›


Oh my baby Raavi ! Always, only she gets stuck in the middle of everything ๐Ÿ˜‚ Now staying with Shiva, she'll be put in more such situations as this ๐Ÿ˜‚


Any confusions?? ๐Ÿคฃ


And Raavi realising that now all her first are with him only, she just accepted it and enjoyed the kiss โ˜บ๏ธ


Haye besharam Rishita standing there watching people ! She got mad that Raavi unintentionally walking in on them, so where's her manners now ? ๐Ÿ™„๐Ÿ™„

Great job ! As always ๐Ÿฅฐโ™ฅ๏ธ


Thank you๐Ÿค—

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Posted: 3 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: Transference

Can we get a part 2 ๐Ÿ˜†

Of this drabble?? No way๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ

Maami ko tapkane ka hi iraada hai?๐Ÿคช

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Posted: 3 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: chavi12345

Bbeautiful os. Can wr get part 2

thank you,

but I'm not writing second part of it, I am writing other one๐Ÿ˜†