"I Hate You!" - Part 1 - Page 2

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Foxii

Ohh noo yahan bhi Misunderstanding :)

Lovely part. Thank god he found her diary.

Looking forward to reading the next Part


Soon 🤞

We'll let them fight it out 😉

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Posted: 3 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: emah04

Great start... cannot wait to read more...


Soon. 🤞

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Posted: 3 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes

Is this a TS, As, or FF? Haha I want their MU to clear super soon and be together. So the smaller the story, quicker the results. 😆


But on a serious note, I loved how you completed each dialogue by unsaid thoughts of Raavi with the journal. I wonder if she left it there for him to find it and express her feelings that couldn't in person. Also, did the divorce actually pull through or is this a seperation pending a divorce? Can't wait to read more!

Ha Ha! Tell me about it. Even I am impatient in longer stories. Mostly likely this will be a TS. 

Let's wait and see how Shivi decide to unfold their story and hopefully we'll have all out answers 

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Posted: 3 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: Namita-M

Oh, I love it!! It's fantastic!! 


Thank you Namita ❣️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: ms.ObseSSeD

Ohhhh, I'm excited!! Great start!! Continue soon.


Also, I was going to add a link to this fic in the ShiVi AT creative corner but I wasn't sure what label to put it under, fanfiction or short story?


Thank you. I am very unsure about the terminologies used on this platform. I intend to make this a two or three shot. So pls help me with what it should be called 😃

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Raingoddess

Love it!! Can’t wait to read more!! I hope we get something similar on the show 😉


🤞

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Posted: 3 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: katheriene

Amazing update👏

Glad that Shiva found Raavi's journal❤️

Loved the way you showed the unsaid words of Raavi in the journal❤️

Curious to know how Shiva bring Raavi back


❤️❤️❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#18

Wow!!!

amazing update

Cant wait to read the next part

Do update soonn!!!!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Okay, its always a little different for many people, so its usually up to the author. 

For me:

FF (fanfiction) is usually more than 5/6 parts

SS (short story) is 3-5 parts ?

TS (two-shot/three shot) 2/3 parts

OS (one-shot) just 1 part 


As you can see its usually overlapping, so I just let the author pick. I can put yours under TS, Is that alright?


Originally posted by: ManeeshaN


Thank you. I am very unsure about the terminologies used on this platform. I intend to make this a two or three shot. So pls help me with what it should be called 😃

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Posted: 3 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: Jazzsingh20

Pliz update next part soon pliz ❤❤❤


Yes 😊