ShiVi OS: Humdard

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                           HUMDARD


"Aye Mami Ki Behen Ki Beti,,,,Uth na. Aur kitna soyegi?" Shiva asked in an super irritated tone for waking up Raavi, who was sleeping next to him, and holding him tightly! 


"Sone de na, Shiva" Raavi said in sleep trying to put her head more into his chest!


"Poori raat ghode bechke soke bhi tera mann nahi bhara kya? Abey,, uth na kumbhkaran ki behen! Mujhe toh uthne de" He tried pushing her away from him.


"Tujhe jana hai toh tu jana na, Mujhe kyu pareshan kar raha hai? Teri nind poori hogayi isliye jaanbujke mujhe pareshan kar raha hai na?" She murmured in sleep.


"Arey Chipkali,Tu aise chipki rahegi mere sath toh main uthunga kaise?" He rolled his eyes hearing her nonsense hence cleared the fact that why he was waking her up! 


"Chipkali?? Kaha hai chipkali?" She screamed from sleep and stood up while jumping in their bed mattress!  


"Agar mujhe pehle pata hota ki chipkali ko uthane k liye uske chipkali behno ka naam kaam ayega toh bohot pehle ye tareeka apnaata main!" Shiva smirked amuzed at her while getting up from there.


"Shivaaaaa, Ye tune accha nahi kiya" Raavi screamed again huffing at him.


Shiva behaved as if He didnt hear anything and went out of room smirking!


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Dhara was in the kitchen making morning tea for everyone in the house, Rishita standing beside her watching how she manages her household and takes care of everyone!

Just then Raavi entered, rolling her eyes with her left hand and yawning. Dhara smiled at her but Rishita raised her eyebrows seeing Raavi coming like that and asked,


"Poori raat soyi nahi thi kya Raavi jo abhi tak nind utar nahi raha hai?" Rishita teased her in a taunting tone. Hearing her words, Raavi became surprised enough to get rid of her sleep and saw Rishita looking at her with smirk while Dhara bhabi rolled her eyes at her.


"Meri tumhari tarah love marriage nahi hui na hai isliye raat jaagne ka mauka hi nahi milta" Raavi said with irritation, taunting her back!


Neither Rishita nor Dhara had thought Raavi will say something like this! To control the situation before it gets out of hand, Dhara cleared her throat and said, "Kya bol rahe ho tum dono? Subah subah mat shuru ho jaao. Chai ban chuki hai. Rishita, Raavi tum dono Jaake sab ko de aao. Main thodi der mei aati hu" 


"Maine kuch nahi kiya Dhara di, isne shuru kiya tha!" Raavi complained pointing at Rishita. Rolling eyes at her, Rishita was about to say something just then Dhara handed both of them the tea cups and sent them outside!


Krish, Gaumbi and Dev were sitting at hall. They three were talking when Shiva came there & slightly hitted on Krish's head for giving him space and sat between Krish and Gaumbi to which Krish sniffed and Gaumbi chuckled! Meanwhile Dev also smiled watching his brothers happy.


"Chai taiyar hai" Saying Rishita came, followed by Raavi! All the brothers looked towards them! As Shiva's eyes met with Raavi, Suddenly she remembered Rishita's taunt in the kitchen and She looked away from him. Watching her turning eyes like that made him frown. Now what happened to this chipkali? He thought irritated! 


Rishita and Raavi gave everyone tea. While giving tea to Shiva, his hand slightly touched Raavi's. As She was already pissed off, she tried to move her hand from him quickly, in the process, some of the hot tea fell on Shiva's left hand. Squeezing his eyes in pain, Shiva screamed in anger!


"Abey kya kar rahi hai Chipkali? Akal ki toh andhi thi hi ab kya aankho se bhi andhi hogayi hai? Dikhai nahi deta kya? Maine cup pakdi bhi nahi thi usse pehle hi chod diya tune" He shouted out loud while rubbing his left hand with right one! 


"M-Maine janbujke nahi kiya, Shiva. I'm sorry" She said to him being scared, almost in a whispering tone. She didnt want him to get hurt because of her, In fact She didnt even think something like this will happen!


Seeing her scared and guilty, A part of shiva kind of melted as He took a deep breath to calm Himself and said,


"Kya hua hai tujhe? Bata mujhe.Jab se chai leke ayi hai tabse dekh raha hu kuch to hua hai tujhe! Problem kya hai teri?" He asked glaring at her, raising his eyebrows. 


"Wah!! Kya baat hai! Aaj kal tu Raavi bhabhi ko itna notice bhi karne laga hai? Aaj Suraaj kaha se utha hai, bhabhi?" Krish asked looking at Dhara as He saw her coming towards them!


"Aye Krish, Tu chup kar warna suraj ka toh pata nahi lekin tujhe din mei taare zarur dikhai denge" Shiva said glaring at Krish while giving him murderous look!


"Bhabhiiii, Dekho na. Ye Shiva mujhe kya bol raha hai" Krish said going behind Dhara & putting his face on her shoulder!


"Kaun mere bacche ko pareshaan kar raha hai?? Shiva, Tu dobara aisa kuch mat kehna mere Krish ko" Dhara said adorably putting her hand on Krish's face while smiling at Shiva! 


"Bas yaar Bhabi. Aapke laad-pyaar ne na bandar banake rakha hai isko" Shiva said rolling his eyes at Krish!

"Kya kaha tune mujhe?" As soon as Krish heard it He ran behind Shiva trying to catch him while Gaumbi,Dhara and everyone laughed watching this fun banter between the brothers!


Raavi smiled looking at them and let out a sigh thinking about how her future will be with Shiva! He is not a bad person as she used to think. He has a heart inside him, She knows. As She has seen his soft side too when She fell asleep that day. She wasnt actually in a deep sleep. Her sleep was broken when She heard Shiva's footsteps outside the room But just to see how he reacts seeing her sleeping like that there, She didnt open her eyes! 


She was really surprised when She found Shiva taking the clothes from her hands and putting them in her suitcase without complaining about anything. Her heart almost flattered when He gently held her hand, not wanting to break her sleep and carried her into His arms. When He was about to go away putting her back in their matress bed, She couldn’t resist herself talking to him about the incident hence opened eyes.


Even though She said "I hate you" in front of him but She knows that deep inside She can Never hate him! No matter How much they both fight with each other, How much they argue, "HATE" Isn't the word for them!


Raavi was lost in her thoughts when She felt someone's hand on her shoulder and she turned to see it was her Dhara di asking "What happened" through her eyes! 


"Nothing" She nodded and smiled at her while hugging her. She indeed felt peace with Dhara. She is like her big sister to her, the one who can truly understand her in this whole house! To whom she can express her feelings without any fear- Raavi thought as she tightened their hug. 


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All the Pandya brothers were busy packing their bags as Their mother urged them to leave for Bikaner in a short notice, to have a darshan of their Kuldevi's mandir. Shiva was in his room hurriedly packing his bags. After He was finished, He thought to change his shirt as some tea stain remained there. Removing his shirt, He searched for a new shirt to wear in the journey!


There Raavi came walking into the room absent-mindedly only to bump into Shiva as He turned back holding a new shirt to wear. As soon as they both crashed with each other, Together they fell on the bed! Shiva on bottom with Raavi on top of him! 


For a few second, both stared into each other but the moment couldnt last anymore as soon as Raavi noticed She's clinging onto Shiva's bare chest, Her heartbeat raised and cheeks started heating up on their own.


She tried to get up from him in a jiff, in the process Her mangalsutra got stuck with the pendent on his neck! Looking at that, She gulped staring into his eyes but She found him watching her calmly. He seems to be unaffected with the moment, Compared to her- She thought frowning while removing her MS from his pendent and finally got up from him.


Little did she know How much difficult it was getting for him to give straight expression in front of her! He cant deny this time that His heart indeed was flattering seeing her this close to him! He doesnt know why? But Her proximity actually affected him! From When did this started to happen? He asked his mind but got no answer in return!


Shiva wore his shirt while She packed her bags. After finishing her packings, She saw his old shirt falling on ground. Picking it up, she saw the tea stain which reminded her the morning incident and she looked at him to call him. Shiva was about to go out of their room when He stopped hearing his name from Her!


"Shiva, Ruk jaa" She said.


"Ab kya hua mami ki behen ki beti? Kyu rok rahi hai mujhe?" He rolled his eyes at her! 


"Pehle Tu idhar Aa" She told him to come near her.


"Kyu? Tu kya ab meri aarti utaaregi jo waha bula rahi hai?" He asked irritated only to get a deadly glare from her & Sniffing, He went to her! God knows what's cooking in this chipkali's mind? He thought!


Shiva was surprised when she gently held his hand.


"Abey kya kar rahi hai?" He asked trying to put his hand back but She was in no mood to let it go! She continued checking his Hand and said,


"Abhi tak Laal hai tera haath. Bohot dard hua hoga na?" She said with a sad face looking at him. Her being sad watching him hurt, made him feel good. But He didnt like to see her sad face as well. So He said,


"Nahi, mujhe toh bohot maza aya tha jab Chai gira tha mere haath pe. Tu na roz giraya kar mere haath pe" He said gritting his face showing fake anger to her. This changed her mood as She slightly hit his hand and took him to the bed & made him sit! Before He could speak anything, She took out an ointment from the side drawer & started to apply on his wound.


"Mujhe nahi lagana ye sab. Chod mujhe" Shiva said while trying to take off his hands from her! 


"Chot tujhe meri wajase lagi hai, toh isko dur bhi mujhe hi karne de" She said looking into his eyes. This worked as He became calm and let her put the ointment on his hand. He watched her face as she winced while putting the gel on his hand! He looked at Her amuzed as she was blowing on his hand & behaving like She's the one getting hurt, not Him. 

This girl is mad-He thought slightly chuckling! 


"Ek baat bata" Shiva asked as soon as Raavi had finished her work with his hand.


"Haan, Bol" She asked while keeping the ointment back in the drawer.


"Subah kitchen mei kuch hua tha kya?" 

He asked making her stunned. How did he know something happened there? Was he outside the kitchen? Did he hear anything? Raavi thought! 


"Oyee! Kya soch rahi hai? Bol na" Shiva said slightly shaking her hand.


She looked at him and said Rishita taunting her about their relationship. Initially Shiva got angry hearing this but then He remembered Rishita is like that only! This woman isnt going to behave well this soon! So, He let out a sigh to calm himself before saying,


"Dekh chipkali, kuch logo ka kaam hi hai sirf dusro ke maamle mei taang adana. Wo kuch bhi bole, humara kaam hai usko ek kaan se sunke dusre kaan se ignore karna, Samjhi?"


He said trying to make her forget this but It didnt work as She said,

"Toh phir tu logo se ladai kyun karta hai? Jab Tu ignore nahi kar sakta toh main kyu karu?"


"Har baat pe lada nahi jaata Raavi. Jaha stand lena zaruri hota hai, main wahi pe kehta hu. Warna teri wo pagal maami bhi toh mere baremei kitna kuch kehti hai. Maine kya unse ladai ki wo sab leke? Ignore karta hu na?" He asked while She rolled her eyes at him hearing him talking about her maasi!


"Aankhe mat dikha. Tere aankhe dikhane se sach badal nahi jayega! Aur waise bhi, Tu Shiva ki biwi hai. Aise logo ke baato se tujhe fark padna bhi nahi chahiye. Samjhi gadheri?" He said with a smirk unaware of What He said just now! But Raavi's heart kept playing the line in her ears,

"Tu Shiva ki Biwi Hai" 


She felt butterflies in her stomach hearing him say that, accepting her as His Wife which is one of the most rare things in their life! Her heart suddenly felt so content now as she smiled!


Looking at her Shiva could feel he finally made her understand what He wanted to. But She was too lost in her thoughts, So Shiva tried to leave from there only to find her holding his hands Again! Now what? He thought in mind before looking at her with a frown!


"Kaha ja raha hai, Shiva?" She asked smiling.


"Dekhke aata hu bus aya ki nahi" He said rolling his eyes at her smile! 


"Mat jaa na. Bus ayega toh sab hume bula hi lenge. Tu beth na yaha mere saath!" Raavi said with a cheeky smile this time which irritated him!


"Pagal hogayi kya? Aur itna has kyu rahi hai?? Main yaha bethke kya karunga tere sath? Ab tere saath ladne ka koi mood nahi hai Mera" He said shrugging off his hand from her but only to get pulled by her and landing beside her on their mattress bed!


"Mann nahi hai toh bhi bethna padega mere saath, Samjha?" She said while putting her elbow on his shoulder with a large smile. He rolled his eyes at her and said,


"Aye chipkali, zyada ud mat. Main kuch keh nahi raha iska matlab ye nahi ki tu meri sar pe chadhke nachegi! Main teri har baat nahi manunga samjhi" He said glaring at her nonchalantly!

But His words didnt affect her as she said.


"Kyu nahi maanega meri baat? Ab Main biwi hu Teri. Aadat daal le" She said while putting her shoulder on him & holding his arms tightly with her hands. 


"Aye,, Ye kya kar rahi hai tu? Mere kandhe pe sar kyu rakh rahi hai? Sona hai toh pillow hai baju mei udhar so. Mujhe baksh de" He sniffed but She didnt move and said,


"Maine kaha na aadat daal le. Kyuki zindagi bhar mere sath hi rehna hoga tujhe. Teri kismat acchi hai jo mujhse teri shadi hui. Warna koi karta tujhse shadi?" She tried to taunt him, getting up from his shoulder.


"Haan Haan, Meri toh jaise kismat khil gayi tujhse shadi karke" He said gritting teeth being too irritated at her nonsense! 


"Bhootnath kahika!" She rolled her eyes at him only to say,

"Samjhega Samjhega. Ek din tu zarur samjhega" and put her head again on his shoulder with a wide smile! A smile of hope that their relation wont be that bad! It'll take time but together they'll grow in this journey! Just like Today, She healed his wound and Similarly He also helped her to forget her worries. Sharing their pains, Together they both can handle their hurdles in this journey- Her heart declared! 


Seeing her smile, A small smile appeared at Shiva's lips too! And He didn't stop her this time, perhaps He didnt want to? He doesnt know! But Having the chipkali with him Isn't that Bad! Life with her would be fun indeed- He thought! 


Just Then her deep sound breath caught his attention, He looked down upon his shoulder only to find His chipkali sleeping peacefully!


"Ye itne mei so bhi gayi? Pagal chipkali!!"


He said being amuzed at her while slightly shaking his head. But He couldnt help smiling when he felt her hold around his arms got tightened!


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Heya All. This is Asfiya! Penned down my first shot on ShiVi. Do let me know How was it😳❤️

Edited by AppleOfEye - 3 years ago


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Posted: 3 years ago

nice shot

just started to watch the show ..only for shiva and raavi

their love hate chemistry is just amazing

keep writing more shots

thanku

love 

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Wow👏👏

Kitna pyare pyare scenes the❤️❤️

Padhte padhte saare scenes imagine bhi kar rahi thi mai saath saath


Totally loved it

Thank you for this amazing OS 

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Posted: 3 years ago

Amazing Asfiya, well written :)


I liked how observant Shiva was to Raavi.

Raavis positivity once Shiva said that she is his wife.. was adorable 


Do write more :)

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Posted: 3 years ago

Beautiful os❤️

Shivi's moments were so amazing👏

Continue writing such stories

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title padhke mujhe laga tune kahi galat forum me to post nahi kar diya😆

Beautiful piece yaar, I was getting bored so thank you for this. 

And now I got an idea too so I am to writing another one.😉

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Soo sweet OS barfi. ❤️

Mujhe itna describe karni nahi aati but padhke bohot acha laga. 😆

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Posted: 3 years ago

This was so cute yaar. Just their chemistry and tashan. Raavi's care for Shiva and his smile. They have all my heart. 


I hope you write more ❤️


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Originally posted by: kavya12345

nice shot

just started to watch the show ..only for shiva and raavi

their love hate chemistry is just amazing

keep writing more shots

thanku

love 

KAVYA

Thank u kavya🤗❤️